| "A Slave to No One" Reviews/Comments [ 182 ] |
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Title: for chapt 1 to 7
Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 03:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The problem I had while reading this fic is I didn't find myself being able to get caught up in the emotions of the characters because there almost weren't any. And the fact that they seemded to fall in love in record time. It is fairly good but I think you could do better.
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Title: AWESOME!!!
Reviewed By: akdreamer38 On: August 11, 2005 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an absolutly the most AWESOME story ever!! I will miss your talent, thank you for sharing. I truly enjoyed this story from start to finish and if you should ever write again keep me on your list to contact cherylv@seward.net, I will look forward to it greatly. And as I tell alot of authors I've read....Don't let some people get you down I only see it as jealiously that they can't do it them selves. Thank you again and hope to see you again in the future...
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Reviewed By: klairna On: August 10, 2005 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOu have another story? Wonderful! But I completely understand why you won't post them. I'm kindda sketchy about posting my fanfiction on websites because of flames, that's why my friend and I created our own site. Check it out sometime www.linzisundayfics.piczo.com Just please try to read the chapter i posted on other stories, I might get that one published so i'm looking for reviews. When your next story begins to come around, please give me a heads up where i can read it: klairna@netscape.net I must say this one more time, I love your stories and hope to see more of them pretty soon! Keep up the good work and don't give up writing just because of a few jackasses. See Ya!!!
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Reviewed By: PenOnFire [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 04:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have only made it to the end of chapter 1 as of yet but so far i love it. i'm teribly sorry to hear about your friend mike. i hope that you can find some condolence in this story and pay tribute to him. i look forward to reading more later but now it's like 5:30 a.m so i need to go to bed. if you read this review then drop me a line sometime at Evan.Mckinney@gmail.com. i hope to get farther into the story tomarow as soon as i wake up. Great Job!!!!!
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 03:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the end becouse i want to read the end not becouse i want the thing overwith. :) cheers
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Reviewed By: Jessica, por toda mi vida On: August 02, 2005 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have not read this story yet but i will when its done, if its as good as the other ones then PLZ finish, hey the lil poat thing u had in the storys w/ Jink, Mark and u where funny u should use them again
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Reviewed By: KLAIRNA On: July 31, 2005 10:08 CDT
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Wonderful Story! All I can say is PLEASE DON'T LEAVE! Your stories are amazing, and i can't think of anyone who would want to put them down. Well, if u continue writing fanfic and try out another website, give me a heads up PPLLLLEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEE!!!!!!! Love the stories, aquariuschick14
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Title: Great Stories
Reviewed By: llxsunsetxll [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories. I have read every single one of them. Please keep writing more storing on MediaMiner. Dont worry about what other people say. They are really good ok. So please write more. You are a great writer.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 00:42 CDT
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Well, i hope you keep posting. It is your choice, but I liked this story. I followed from pretty early on. Sorry if I didn't always review. I'm a lazy ass. Please update soon. By the way, is mediaminer sending you emails when stories get updated? Cuz its not for me...grrrrr
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Reviewed By: justme2005 On: July 22, 2005 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you don't stop posting. This story is incredible. I love the way it is detailed and shown through several perspectives. I can't wait to read more of this story, I am sure it will prove to be very intriguing. Keep up the fine work!!!
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Reviewed By: jade_pendant(lay-z) On: July 20, 2005 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! gomen nasai, i havent been able too get a chance to read b4 now, gomen gomen gomen. But u will b happy to know it was well worth the wait. now i cant wait for the next chapter to come..does kaga have the pup?? ah well im sure all shal reviel it self. until the next chapter review ja ne.
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Reviewed By: rdsjr_1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job, but there is alot of room left to fill, and i believe that you are the one to do it.....so thanks for the good read and keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 05:16 CDT
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Consider this for chapters 19-30: Ok that took some time to read through a good couple of hours once i found my place again. Much has happend since ch18 nicee to see they are all still alive. I can't wait to see what you choose to do about inu/kag and inu's father's idea about making them a house attached to the castle. That mentioned I do have a question regarding the Tech. lever of each of the 4 lands. it seems as though the the west is like in the era of castles and no indoor plumbing. east was in it but from what you said about sess incorporating some stuff into his relm and not killing trees i'm guessing that the east is slow comming out of that era. well the south is basicly yr. 2000 as far as cars phones ect.. don't think any of that was mentiond but i could be entirelly wrong. In fact i know i am as i just rememberd about kag taking a shower @ some point in the west.. Any way Story is great hope for new chapters asap.
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Reviewed By: blackshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay, you updated!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(>.> nope not logged in.....) On: July 05, 2005 14:39 CDT
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OO gahhhh.. this is so good. man i can't wait to see what happens next. update asap, please. this is great. ja ne, Zirra
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