| "A Slave to No One" Reviews/Comments [ 182 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(yeah i'm lazy...get over it) On: June 28, 2005 08:58 CDT
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(the last review cut me off again :( so i reviewed again :D)*squeels in excitmeint* yeah i'm so tired that i'm hyper...it makes no sense but it's true...i'm so happy naraku is dead..I really don't like him...this was a great chapter...update update update, please update.. ja ne, Zirra (sorry about all the reviews and such...stupid computer X|)
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(yeah i'm lazy...get over it) On: June 28, 2005 08:56 CDT
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(the last review cut me off :( so i reviewed again :D)*squeels in excitmeint* yeah i'm so tired that i'm hyper...it makes no sense but it's true...i'm so happy naraku is dead...>_
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(yeah i'm lazy...get over it) On: June 28, 2005 08:55 CDT
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*squeels in excitmeint* yeah i'm so tired that i'm hyper...it makes no sense but it's true...i'm so happy naraku is dead...>_
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Title: Review Chapter Twenty-nine
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ho-ly crap. Another fantastic, mindblowing chapter. Thank you so very much! I love the revelations in this chapter. I love the action. I love the interaction. The only thing that disturbed me was a few chappies back when you gave Kagome transportation abilities out of the blue. That felt a little Mary Sue-ish. I do understand that it was necessary to the plot, though, so I guess it's cool. Jinx also feels slightly Mary-Sue, but nothing too bad, so just be careful whe you write the next scenes she's in. I think it may have been because you basically had to do a review of how Sesshoumaru and she got together, so it didn't feel like there was enough depth due to the brevity you needed to employ. Anyway, I love what you're doing, and I can't wait for the next two battles. Please keep up the good work and good writing. ... .... Take care, ... >>>>Kin.
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Reviewed By: jodibetz On: June 22, 2005 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I really like your story and in fact, I've been reading it from the first time you posted it, but at this point it seems to be dragging. At least thats how I see it. I hope you will make some adjustments.
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Title: Zirra Nova
Reviewed By: i'm being lazy...not logging in and all On: June 22, 2005 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just had to rate it this time it's tht awsome..it's great, update soon, i really want to know what happens next...ja ne, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Anbaa On: June 16, 2005 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i cant wait for the next chapter update soon plz and thank you
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Reviewed By: blackshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, you update quickly! keep on going!
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha and Kagome sure do transform a lot. If they transform this easily WITH binding swords, a papercut must be enough to make them transform without them. But excessive transforming aside, the fluff between Inuyasha and Kagome is very sweet, and watching Naraku throw tantrums is fun.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(still lazy) On: June 10, 2005 01:17 CDT
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great LONG chapter. it was awsome. me glad sessy's coming into the story. update asap, this is an awsomely awsome story...ja ne. Zirra
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Title: Well...
Reviewed By: xfiledino(not signed in) On: June 09, 2005 00:16 CDT
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Another couple of really good chapters!! Interesting, she was carrying 3 pups! Well, at least she didn't loose them all, that would have been bad. But anything can happen, and she could loose it later. Not that you're going to do that or anything. Also, the other traitor... Miroku or Mike, that's my guess.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(me lazy) On: June 07, 2005 21:58 CDT
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thanx for answering my question....and i'm guessing that the other traitor is one of the healers...hmm, that could be bad...well great chapter, update asap, please, till then. Zirra
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Reviewed By: inuyashas lover 2 ( not signed in) On: June 07, 2005 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I can't wait for the next one. As I was reading (before I got to the end of the chapter) I was thinking that since one was a guard then the other one is THE HEALERS. Am I right please say I'm right any way update soon.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 01:23 CDT
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I think I'll just wait for the spy to be revealed. otherwise I will never sleep. It seems like Inutaisho is really protective of Inuyasha and Kagome. He has reasons to be, but the poor kids are never gonna be alone. Ya know, it wouldn't be good for Kagome to blaqme herself, but she's gonna know when she gives birth thats theres more than one pup there. God, triplets. I'm guessing thats Inuyasha's dog influence on her, because triplets are not common at all. Another, long, wonderful chapter. I think some of your chapters are longer than other people's entire stories. Really, its quite possible.
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Reviewed By: jasko_lefey On: June 07, 2005 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I BELIVE THE TRATIOR IS MORKU OR ON OF THE HEALERS
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