| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww!! she got her dance!!! that was great! will she get her nice lemon? not the crappy one that they had earlier... that was just sad... :( a nice one. anyhow, great chapter!!! how many more do you plan on? i need to prepare myself for the end... i just dont think i'm ready!! *cries*
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Jesachi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 15:44 CDT
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Wow... I had a feeling that you were going to do a simply wedding for Gin. If my memory suits me correctly, you had a simple wedding for Kagome and Inuyasha in "Purity". It fits, like mother like daughter. I've been following this story from the very beginning and it still captures my attention, like everything else you've written! This is your longest Purity yet and probably one of my favorites in your overall story writing! I loved the connection that you made of Cain being "The luckiest bastard alive" THAT was very appropriate! Anyway, needless to say, I loved the chapter! Keep it going! ~Cheers!~ Jesachi
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Reviewed By: ColShaLin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 15:29 CDT
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That was incredibly beautiful. I actually blinked back a tear when he remembered telling her that she'd dance at her wedding with the luckiest bastard alive and he realized that it was himself. *SIGH* Too sweet.
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Title: Chapter 95
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 15:25 CDT
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They're finally married! Awwwwww, I'm sooooooooooo happy for them! Cain's comment at the end was great. I love when little parts of the story are tied together. This was a fantastic chapter!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 15:16 CDT
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I knew Cain would say something about being 'the luckiest bastard alive' that was funny....very beautiful Shinto wedding, I did spell that right, didn't I? Ah, now to work on my senior project after I check out the forums....bleh!
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't know whether to laugh or smile at this chapter it was so touching. I can't wait to see what the next chapter holds in store for us.
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i absolutely love this story! Im so glad that Gin and Cain got together it would have been so sad if they didnt. Cant wait for more! xD
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Title: Thwarted
Reviewed By: LadyBarrista [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 11:48 CDT
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Great chapter Sue, although even if Kich doesn't like the imagery that Bell planted in his mind I'm certainly enjoying that visualization.
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Title: Sweet Laughter
Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 05:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very happy you decided to give this story the ending that it deserves. Your talents should not be hidden from view but openly exspressed with or without regard from those that read your work. There is always good and bad with writing a story with your talents. I hope that you have found new friends in wwhat you have been writing these past months, and years for the later stories. I hope you continue writing fan fiction after you are finished with this story. If not I believe that most of us will know why and leave it be at that. Have a good day and stay proud
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Title: Very Funny Chapter!
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the chapter and can't wait until the wedding! Thanks again for a wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: kappei_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 19:49 CDT
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Wow! Haha. Very funny chapter. Can't wait until the wedding, I'm sure it will be eventful!
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Title: MWAHAHAHA!!!
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 19:29 CDT
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I'm so glad you got to put the old balls bit in there! You've been talking about using it for so long and it definitely gave me a much needed laugh break! I miss you Sue =) hopefully I'll get to talk to you soon!! Thanks for another phenomenally sweet and uproariously funny chapter!
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 01:45 CDT
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LOL I love it! Belle's such a funny, devious little thing, that she is!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 23:46 CDT
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oh man...belle really did kill the sex drive...didn't she? oh me...oh my! great chapter and wonderful update! yay! i have to agree with cain, the idea of inu having to give Gin away in an american wedding would have been perfect. LMAO. why can i just see two men pulling on either of poor gin's arms, neither relenting? wonderfully written, as always, keep it up sue!
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