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| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] | | Pages (148): [ « ‹ 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 › » ] | Title: Chapter 91
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cain may not be clueless, but InuYasha surely is. He is my favorite anime character, which probably could've been inferred from the many times I've made comments about him, but he's a complete dolt. Although it is somewhat off-topic, I think Kichiro is my favorite orignal character. I like the way he thinks, and how he prefers brains over brawn. He can be refined and sensible, yet fun to hang around with. And he's so protective of his family! Okay, I'm ranting--I apologize. Gin finally came around! I'm so happy for her; for both of them! Gin will live! I was worried for a little while there, because it was raining on that day, too. It's great, now that I think of it. He ended up soaked on that day, too, when he made his first promise. And now, he's finally made his most important promise--the promise to live, for Gin. I don't get to say this in Purity often, but--This is a fluffilly fluff-filled, fluff-tastic chapter! I read in my English text that a novel is classified as more than 50,000 words. According to my math, this is 11 times that! I love every word. This is a great ending, if it has to be. But I have all of the confidence in the world that there will be atleast two more chapters: "Justification" and "Epilogue." I know that when they are completed, they will weave the entire fanfic together, and cement Purity IV's place, with its sister fanfics as one of the greatest stories ever told.
| Title: Chapter 91
Reviewed By: saraiyah [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are my hero. i must say i was a little worried when cain left and gin started fading. but you brought them back togeather and tied everything up wonderfully. on a side note, truly, i hope that all is well with you and yours. i know a few weeks ago your father in law was hurt and all the other hardships you\'ve had to deal with over the course of this fic. but you are the most amazing author that i have ever had the honour of reading, i dont know what im going to do after school though, up till now id be getting through the day wanting to go home and looking forward to your latest updates. i was amazed tonight to see that there were so many new chapters. lol you have done an amazing job with this fic, i have to say that purity 4 and metamorphasis are my favourites of yours to date. just wondering will there be any more? gin/cain or otherwise? also ive gotta thank you, youre quite the person to look up to, handling all that you have, all the flamers and injustices of life. once again Sueric, you are awesome. thanks so much. - saraiyah
| Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh PLEASE write more! You've GOT to at least write an epilogue, otherwise I'm going to pass out or something! I was afraid you were going to leave it for the weekend at chapter 84, that would have nearly killed me on it's own, but you leaving it at this point is just cruel and unusual punishment!
| Title: Chapter 90
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And I thought InuYasha and Kagome were stubborn. Gin... c'mon, she just has to get it! Cain gets it. InuYasha even gets it, even if he doesn't like it too much. Kagome is quite the little schemer. Heh, the one person InuYasha cannot get mad at for what happened set Gin and Cain up. It's almost twisted it's so funny! I hope InuYasha apologizes to Kich for his comments. Poor Kichiro, as if he didn't have enough guilt. And he so much loves his father's approval. extraordinary chapter!
| Title: Chapter 89
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I forgot to mention it earlier in my haste, but the little InuYasha/Kagome bantering adds a nice dose of levity. It is much appreciated. Both sets of fathers and daughters are squared away! And Gin woke up! I'm so happy! It is so cool to see Cain call Bellaniece 'Belle' and not be happy about it.
| Title: Chapter 88
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I should stop reading. That if I take it segment by segment it will have more sway over my emotions; that I'll appreciate it better. Unfortunately, I can't stop. Fortunately, if this story had any more power of me, I'd probably start dreaming about it. Cain asked nicely, that was great. He improved, now... c'mon Gin. Heh, the outcome is probably posted, but I live off of the supense! Another amazing chapter!
| Title: Chapter 87
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never been so happy crying. Gin, poor, poor Gin. Cain will save her; he has to. I... oh God, what an amazing letter; what a fantastic chapter! I feel lazy for not using the italics, but... oh well. I'm determined to review each and every one. Though my sadness will get even worse when I look at the next chapter button and see 'Justification'.
| Title: Chapter 86
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fanfics by Sueric: Expanding my vocabulary one chapter/fic at a time. Uh-oh. The shit is about to hit the fan, as they say. I hate to use such crude language, but it is only fitting! Amazing chapter--the title was fantastic.
| Title: Chapter 85
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My e-mail is going insane! It's like Christmas! I almost wish that this was the end for today... almost. Not being able to go on now would be really sad, but what a wonderful way to end the chapter. I want this to go on but I need to read the next chapter! Chapter 85 is fantastic
| Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Melancholy, but not as heart-stopping as the rest have been. I hesitate to call it a lull when the ominous cloud of death hangs over, but Cain is finally figuring it out, so there is hope. I have all the confidence in the world that this will have a happy ending--I just cannot wait to see how it happens; that is always the best part in your stories. Great chapter!
| Title: Chapter 84
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been staring at this screen for twenty minutes. It didn't take that long to stop the tears, but now that the sorrow has ebbed a little bit... This chapter is indescribable. So sad, so... I was half-expecting the cliche. Just like Cain, to see Gin run into the terminal. Only half-expecting, mind you, because I should know better than that. Your writing is simply... amazing. And soooo much fun to read! Palpable despair is a double-edged sword; great for reading, bad if one isn't able to seperate the fictional emotion from reality. Amazing chapter!
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 18:11 CDT
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NOOO!!! She can't die!!!! Great, now my mose is even more stuffed up from crying lol. My sister's getting me sick, which is just what I need! Come on Cain, just call her! What's the worse that can happen, if you just call her?!
| Reviewed By: Serendith_ On: September 30, 2005 17:14 CDT
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I can't believe I have to wait over the weekend after these past two chapters! I don't know if I can do it! *sigh* Fantastic writing as always. I hope all is well (or getting better at least) at home.
| Title: Trujinx
Reviewed By: trujinx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 16:47 CDT
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QUESTION! If she does die, can't Sesshomaru just bring her back to life? Great Writing and update soon!
| Title: what
Reviewed By: red_tigergirl2 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 15:27 CDT
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huh whats happaning is she going to die or something no please don't make gin die am going to cry
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