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| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] | | Pages (148): [ « ‹ 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 › » ] | Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 22:49 CDT
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the good: i loved that you posted all at once! that\'s great! i really couldn\'t have handled having to wait! :( lol, oh! and i loved the letter to kich! it was a tear-jerker! *sniffle* the bad: i dont really have any... closure. ya know? i mean... gin needs her dream wedding. and they had a bitter lemon! that sucks! :( and what about kagome\'s baby? a boy? what\'s his name? and the ugly: this damn review. i tried leaving it on friday night when i had first read it, but it wouldnt let me! ...guh. anyhow, you\'re great. i can\'t wait till you start up another fic! i\'d always love P5, but i know you\'re done. it\'s ok.
| Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 21:22 CDT
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WOW.... You realy did a number on the 30th huh. Never... well almost never have I seen anyone post chapter after chapter that fast. You desrve my respect for that if not for anything else. The End, its actualy quite sad. Dont you hate it when stories end?! It just sadens me, just a bit. Wel im looking foward to any other stories your going to start ect ect. Well see ya around (Internet wise.)
| Reviewed By: crolynx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapters. Thanks for the mass update!!!!! Please post a epilogue or something. Are you ever going to update Desideratum? Please Sue don't quit writing for us. We love your works. Please Please Please continue writing fics for us to enjoy. I hope to see you update your fics soon. But until then, Ja Ne, Crolynx ;p
| Reviewed By: Steffie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not the way I thought it would end, but it was good.
| Reviewed By: trujinx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo! I do have to say encore! repeated X 10! please please don't let that be the official ending! I think Kagome should have twins again, one boy and one girl. Also do Kich and Belle have kids? Same question with Gin and Cain, Ryo and Nez! Kids from their family are bound to be hilarious! Trujinx
| Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 16:56 CDT
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That's it?!? I'm not gonna find out whether Kagome's baby is a boy or girl?? Awwww .... well, it's still an excellent fic, Sue, so keep up the good work & don't let the jealous b@st@rds who try to knock you get you down.
| Title: hope
Reviewed By: Aishiteru148 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGOSH! I am so Happy, I've been waiting this for so long and oh..I am so happy!!! YAY!!! My parent's are downstairs and their like "What are you yelling about?" and I'm like. "Cain and Gin are finally together." and they go..."Oh...right." I told them a little about the story, so they don't know the whole thing otherwise they would be just as happy as I am. When Cain left cause gin said she didn't need him my parent's are like "Who are you screaming at?" sometimes I just lose it...you make me feel so much emotion, you write with so much emotion and that is so awesome! Thank you so much, then again this means that the ending will come soon doesn't it? Are you considering a purity 5? If not...PLEASE START!!! I think I'll die if you don't! It's one of the few things that keep me going really that and besides the Inuyasha episodes, I'll come on and I'm like "I wonder if sueric updated...." and I allways's love reading your work and I'm about halfway in metamorphosis, which I like a lot its totaly awesome, but I'm just so attached to purity....please think about continueing.... ~Marina
| Reviewed By: Raniatlw [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 22:08 CDT
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Wow, you had me crying a couple of chapters ago. The letter to Kichiro was really sad. And now I'm all happy again. Thank you for a really, really, really awesome story!
| Title: Ch. 88
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 20:15 CDT
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Her...ass? *snort* Why am I not surprised? -- Oh, insult the old man Cain...that'll work. (can you hear the sarcasm?) Then again, I don't think that reasoning will work on the highly-agitated InuYasha at the moment. Thank goodness for Kagome's cooler head. Dog-boy really lucked out having her for his mate. I love watching him blow his top and chew on his foot. His temper gets the better of him and his mouth. Well, he'll just have to chew and swallow the fact that Cain is here to stay. He'll be all right, he's angry and hurt right now but he's smart enough to realize how much Gin must love Cain to be so broken like this now over losing him. If nothing else, InuYasha be grateful that she's alive...even if he has to give Cain the credit. (I love his nickname among other youkai, "The Angry Hanyou" - LoL)
| Title: Ch. 87
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 20:15 CDT
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*hugs everybody and cries all over them*
| Title: Ch. 86
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 20:14 CDT
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Dang...it took Cain long enough...and he still isn't really thinking. Now he's following his instincts only he finally has admitted to himself that he needs her, and not from some epiphany that she loves and needs him. Maybe the baka gene is dog-demon related and not just on InuYasha's side; Sessoumaru just lucked out and it skipped him. Then again...his stubborness has led him to make questionable decisions as well. *shrug* Heck...we all do dumb things...it isn't a failing in the genes, upbringing or environment; it's our God-Given right to screw up. -- Aww, they just found Gin and InuYasha...it doesn't matter how many others call her baby-girl, she is his Baby Girl and seeing her like that is ripping him up inside. And I know that as growly and angry he might appear to be with Kichiro, I know he's shouldering some of the blame, 'How could I not know...? Not see what was right under my nose?'
| Title: Ch. 85
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 20:14 CDT
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God, Cain is still in clueless-land! Someone needs to light a fire under his ass. -- Ok...Gin is killing me. Can't hardly see to read. Dang. *wants a hug*
| Title: Ch. 84
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 20:13 CDT
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Awww, Gin just bade a silent farewell to her parents and then to Ryomaru and Deidre. Seems like she's determined to get all of the one last time's she can. Goodbyes are hard under normal circumstances...poor Gin. -- Cain is almost there...he can scent the answers he's looking for, just out of reach but getting closer. He's got all the pieces, he only has to put them together and see the truth he's been searching for; there is no honor in death-that's the cowards way out, to not deal with things, leaving others to pick up the pieces. It serves no purpose. Life is a gift...and love is a miracle. Be not a fool and grasp it, hold it close, protect it, cherish it and all heaven will be thine. (wow...now I'm waxing poetic...go fig)
| Title: Ch. 83
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 20:13 CDT
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Damnit! If this were the feudal times, Cain would've just grabbed his puppy-girl, tossed her over his shoulder and taken her with him. He would have listened to his instincts more and to hell modern sensibilities. He knows that Gin has an over-generous nature but he's got a blind spot created by his lingering guilt, and he's not seeing her sacrifice for what it is. Sometimes these civilized times encourage confusion. If he was really playing the part of "Tai Youkai" of the Americas, his own depth of feeling would be proof that she's the ONE and it must be reciprocated. He would see through her lies and protests easier in that simpler time. Unfortunately, his misplaced guilt and the influences of modern sensibilities have cripled his desicion-making...at least where his personal life is concerned. Now, because she asked him and he cannot deny her anything, what should have been a beautiful joining between them, has become tainted with desperation and angush...and bitter denial. She doesn't think he needs her and she won't tie him down because she fell in love with him, because she chose him; in her mind, it was her mistake, not his and she won't make him pay for it. So she lies to him. All the lies, to her family, to friends...for him. Now she lies tohim...forhim. Oh, the tangled web of deciet oft catches the weaver. (btw, once it hit her that he was gone, the impact was like a ton of bricks obeying gravity | Title: Purity 4
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 18:54 CDT
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Here I sit, having just finished chapter 91, wiping tears off my cheeks, and blowing my nose. I just wasn't sure how you were going to pull this rabbit out of the hat, but you did, and did it in the finest style that only you have perfected. As much as I'm sad that this story is over, I am overjoyed that Cain and Gin will have the happy ending that I wanted for them. I have loved this story so much, as much as I loved Purity, Torrent, Chronicles, and Purity 3. I love the others, but these are my favorites. With what's happened to your Father In Law, and the idiots who have agrivated you beyond the end, I am thankful you have taken the time to finish this. I am hoping you will continue to write, and allow us to read the stories you come up with. For me, your stories have helped my through some of the most, health wise, trying times in my life, and I am forever grateful that I found your stories. Keep your muse close, your beta's closer, and your family closest of all. I really do love happy endings.
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