| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: September 28, 2005 23:21 CDT
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::Sobs:: Oh Sue! Wow! um... Wow! I've never been so heartbroken over a chapter. It's so incredible. The pain that is to come, from that one, beautiful, incredible, intense act. Wow! Oh! Oh! Oh! That was so incredible. C
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Reviewed By: Iloveinus On: September 28, 2005 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am seriously crying right now. This is the best chapter... I want Cain to take her. To tell her everything. To force it. If he doesn't say it...when will be his next time?? This is a great story. And I am waiting for the next chapter. till the Sue ~Iloveinus~
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Title: hehe
Reviewed By: freethephoeni On: September 28, 2005 23:13 CDT
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You know... I was just thinking... that would have been a cool time for those 'Sabatoged Condoms' Belle brought up earlier. Hahaha. Anyway, I haven't let you know how great your writing is lately. So, that was a literary Masterpiece. If it wasn't fanfiction I'd nominate it for a Governor General's Award.(Except that's Canadian... so you probably can't win that unless you're Canadian.) Anyway, hope everything is hunky-dory in your life. I'm so used to getting updates about how you're doing at the ends of the chapters, and you haven't said boo lately so I'll just assume that no news is good news. You know, it's like the tabloids. Your fans wanna know how you're doing :) Haha Creepy isn't it? Well, that had nothing to do with your story so I'll just say I hope you and your muse are getting along, and that she isn't cruel to you. Later days!
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Reviewed By: Kesstral [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 22:45 CDT
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oh no.... wow, i think i should have seen this coming.. but i really just didn't at all. i'm rather worried about gin now despite loving the angst. You wrote the sex scene really well. I like how you portrayed how...off and wrong it was. Heh, not that it was a bad thing, but it wasn't a typical love scene.
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: September 28, 2005 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I already reviewed this chapter in your forum but I wanted to tell you again how great this chapter was. This chapter makes me sad and excitied to see what happens next. i can't wait, I hope to read the next cahpter soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 21:43 CDT
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kami i was crying. from start to finish. that was sad. so damn beautful but sad. an absolutely amazing chapter. i really hope they do realize how much they have fallen for one another and they end up together. and yash doesnt castrate Cain.
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Reviewed By: Ginny On: September 28, 2005 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
his chapter was AWESOME, i really love how you express whats happening in the lemons whithout having to make it look as porn. I admire your writing skills because to be this good as a writer, then you must be at least as good in person. I BEG YOU:: Please update tomorrow, thursday 29... PLEASE!!! I dont know if I'll be able to resist waiting until friday r till next week.. PLEASE!!!! I really want to know how things between cain and Gin are going to end. I suspect the ending to be really good because you like happy endings, but as much as i want it finished to know whats going to happen, i dont want this story to end because it is sooo good! I hope that your creativity spikes and you update tomorrow, and if not... well... i'll cry but i'll get over it! The best of lucks in the story and in your life GinnY
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Reviewed By: DragonHostile17 On: September 28, 2005 20:06 CDT
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Oh hey, what about Sebastian? when does he come in? i must know!!!
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Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was... amazing. The feelings that surged through this chapter were palpable. I do not know how else to say it. Just... wow.
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Reviewed By: Beautiful Massacre On: September 28, 2005 18:46 CDT
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EEGH! You got me heels over head for this story! heh I feel so sorry for Gin. I hope se realizes how much shes really loosing
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Title: end?
Reviewed By: Thor Son of Odin On: September 28, 2005 18:18 CDT
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is this the end of purtity 4? If so u kinda left somethings in the air; like is both Gin and Cain gonna die now? email bak ur response to kamikazeknight@msn.com
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Reviewed By: kocoum On: September 28, 2005 18:15 CDT
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holy shitaki.. [ sits and blushes more ] dayuum... wow. ooh my, i dont know how to set up my scanner, sooo it'll be a while till i send you nemore pics... >.< I LUFF THIS CHAPTER. not only cus of the lemon, but it really shows how torn they are... gaawsh. i wonder who's gonna go or who's gonna stay... :]
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Title: Ch. 81-82
Reviewed By: Darkless (nsi) On: September 28, 2005 18:03 CDT
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"In for a penny, in for a pound." I guess Gin's reasoning of one night couldn't make much difference in her mind; the damage has been done, per se. She loves him but won't make him stay unless it was his choice...and all the reasons or options he's been giving her to come with him are superficial and non-binding. And if it's not serious to him, why prolong her pain? Let him go to live his life, don't hurt him with her own choices and let him keep his honor. How can she know what he truely wants if he doesn't tell her? (and visa versa) You know, I think we expect too much of others, getting upset when they can't read our minds or hearts. Nature has proven time and again that we are not mindreaders. Closed mouth don't get fed. The loudest baby bird gets the parents' attention when it's mealtime, getting the lion's share of the food. Same goes for expressing yourself and communicating your needs. Tell them what you want, then leave the desicion in their hands. That way, you will at least know you did all you could.
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Title: Trujinx
Reviewed By: trujinx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 16:54 CDT
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great as always! YAY no longer a virgin! the chappy did seem a little rushed though... but hey it is your story and i respect that, update soon!
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Title: chapter 82
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 15:47 CDT
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good chapter. I hear that you're thinking of leaving fanfiction after this, but I was wondering, is there a possibility of a Purity 5 with Toga's sister?
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