| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ginny On: September 28, 2005 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I CRIED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 i cant believe it!! PLEASE! UPDATE TOMORROW??????????????????????? PLEASE I'M BEGGING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the story is awesome, i love it and cain & gin are my favorite!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 15:19 CDT
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This is the first time I've ever cried during a lemon...oh gosh it's just so sad!!! I'm at lost for words right now, I'm just...gah, I can't put it into words...the best thing I can say is that it was beautiful and sad at the same time! Oh, this is killing me lol...I'll await for the update and shall see what will happen next!!!
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Reviewed By: DragonHostile17 On: September 28, 2005 14:44 CDT
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I guess somethings are just not meant to be. so are you going to make things more angsty and have gin end up fataly sick again? or is there a silver cloud so to speak at the edge of the sky?
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 14:35 CDT
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omg...just wow [sorry for the late reply]. but omg that was just so passionate and intense. whatever will happen next, i can tell is going to be really intriguing, not much to say Sue. beautifully written chapter...and story.
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Reviewed By: Leiliiani On: September 28, 2005 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness... excellence, as always! I do believe that, throughout the Purity saga, Gin and Cain have become my favorite couple. I've lost count of how often their trials and tribulations have moved me to tears. The emotional tension has had me nearly wanting to pull my hair out! Now I'm going to be biting my nails waiting to see what happens next! Thank you for taking the time and effort to write and post your stories, and God bless. :)
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: September 28, 2005 13:11 CDT
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Wow! That was messed up!! These two have some serious communication issues. They are going to drive each other completely insane before they get things figured out. Geeze! I'm going to go back and read that chapter again. I think it broke my brain. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: September 28, 2005 12:54 CDT
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what the fuck!!!! damnit! get her on the goddamned plane. i usualy dont curse like this but you are frustrating me.
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Reviewed By: inuyashachic612 On: September 28, 2005 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
of course u deserve a 10 out of 10! I love this chapters (my internet got disconnected for a while so i couldnt read the other chapter til today) i love it sooo much! i have been waiting for a lemon from Gin and Cain. Even thou he is much older then her and in real life it would be weird to have an old guy with a young girl but in ur fics they make the perfect couple, i think. As of right now Cain and Gin are my fave couple (without the exception of Inu/Kag cuz they are always #1) I bet ur betas had a great time readin this. it was so sad im surprised she didnt break down in tears. I was hopeing Cain was goin to tell her he lovesher but i guess im gonna have to wait? I hope he doesnt leave her. >_< im hanging off the edge of my seat jus waiting for ur next update. i wanna read so bad! i hope u can update soon. Ill be waiting now that i got my internet back! ^_^
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Reviewed By: razorbladesinner (nsi) On: September 28, 2005 12:28 CDT
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Wow...I didn't think that Gin would have the guts to ask him. Unfortunately it seemed so empty and meaningless, of course there was love behind it, but Cain just seemed like he just didn't give a damn anymore. But now I'm left wondering how Gin's going to survive this one, I mean she almost died when Cain was mad at her, but this is so much more, especially since their Youki have recognized their feelings. It also makes me wonder is Inuyasha going to know about Gin no longer being...pure...I mean I know they used condoms, but will Inuyasha be able to sniff out the fact that she's no longer a virign. I have a bad feeling that there's going to be a huge fight, the question is who will it be between? Gin and Inuyasha? Cain and Inuyasha? Hell maybe even Cain and Sesshomaru? Or will Cain just leave his position and his responsibilities for Gin? So many questions!!!!! I guess I'll just have to wait and see what happens and hopefully you'll update soon.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~nsi On: September 28, 2005 11:11 CDT
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i'm getting the distinct urge to bash my head into a wall and yell. is that a bad thing? poor gin...how can she not see all of the blatant exclimations of love from Cain? i mean...i know she is waiting for him to say he loves her and that he needs her, which i want to pull my hair out everytime he avoids that phrase. his youkai is my hero! lol. he really is. poor gin and poor cain...i mean, i think now i feel worse for Cain but it still hurts. oh, the angst, sue, the angst!!!! nothing short of wonderful, as always. i'm worried though because the only ones who know that gin has anything to do with cain left around in Sierra, right? and she really can't get out much. without Kich, what is she going to do? oh this just is so not good....not good at all!! poor gin! i can't wait to see what happens!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Sniffles) I'm so tired of crying...gosh (wipes eyes with back of hand) why do you keep doing this to me? (wipes runny snot from nose with other hand) I really want them to be together, they really deserve each other....(more tears fall) everytime it looks like their going to get together something else happens....Sue, I don't know how much more of this I can take (sighs) at the end of each chapter I'm feeling like screaming my head off....(wipes tears one last time and inhales deeply) I have to say you really, really out did yourself with this one. (Start balling again)...Please have mercy on a poor needy fan....
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: September 28, 2005 10:44 CDT
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...ouch. my heart. you have to update soon... my day's gonna suck now... :(
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: confused fan/purity On: September 28, 2005 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for not getting mad about my comments, I really am a huge fan and have read every purity stories, those were just some things that I'd noticed, thank you for taking the time to explain it a little. Loved the last chapter and the intensity
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Title: meh...
Reviewed By: NateGrey On: September 28, 2005 10:08 CDT
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I was waiting for Cain and Gin to get to this point for the longest time, and now that they have, I almost wish they hadn't. It just seemed so...well, mandatory and mean on Cain's part, like he didn't enjoy it at all. I can understand he'd feel guilty about Isabelle, but I guess I'm just amazed Cain is still hung up on that promise to her. I just thought Gin nearly dying when he tried to break up with her should've been a clear sign that he had a new mate now (consumated or not), and that his life was entwined with Gin's for good (Gin was suffering from the same 'condition' as Toga when Sierra left him, yes?). I say all that to say despite how much I didn't care for the way this chapter unfolded, I have faith that you did it that way for a good, if not happy, purpose. And one more thing: in a break-up, is there a determining factor as to who suffers worse? You made it seem like Gin was near death, and to me Cain didn't seem as bad by comparison, or maybe I just felt sorrier for poor Gin...
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: September 28, 2005 09:41 CDT
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awww..angsty chapter...eh.for some reason this poem reminded me of Gin. "Its all I have to Bring Today."~Emily Dickinson (Its all I have to bring today, This, and my heart beside, This, and my heart, and all the fields, and all the meadows wide. Be sure you count, should I forget,-- Someone the sum, could tell,-- This, and my heart, and all the bees Which in the clover dwell.) Another poem remined me of Cain...but I shall save that for another time. Cant wait for the next chapter. Ja ne~Darkflameangel
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