| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nutella and Reese's Peanut Butter cups... Yummy. Cain's the best daddy and mate in the world! :)
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 18:52 CDT
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Awww...that chapter was soo cute!! Poor Cain, being followed; but I can't blame Gin, either! I hope Kich gets that sculpture for Belle; that would be sweet!
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Reviewed By: Iloveinus589 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! wedding soon! I hope Gin is well enough by then though... great chapter. I LOVE REESE'S SANDWICHES! yes...I have tryed it a few times in my life. Well anyways... ttyl ~iloveinus~
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 11:57 CDT
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Awwww, Cain and Gin fluffiness. She's finally accepting that they are mated, not only because they needed to be, but because he wanted it too. Just like her to be all squealy-excited over her mark and not mad. He was worrying for nothing, albeit a valid reason. Just like she didn't want to force him into anything, he feels the same way. Gee...kinda like forcing a child to go to Disneyland. So distracted by old baggage and personal hang-ups, they forgot about communication and honesty, with each other and themselves. I love watching the developments of relationships under Sue's TLC (twisted loving care) --- Hmm, now Belle is dragging her heals over having children. Time for the "Full Disclosure Fairy" to tap her on the head. There has been enough misunderstandings going on to start another. Pin her down *snort* and confront her, Kich! Don't let something fester out of control. *does a happy dance for the new chapter*
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Reviewed By: Morana_Luna_Marchand [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey Sue! It's Morana (from FF.net)! I just got caught up and I honestly cannot wait for the next chapter!! I love it! Originality/Creativity: I gave you a 10 because I find your ideas very original, and I love the way you make your ideas work. I think your ideas are very creative, and you inspire me to use my creativity! Enjoyment Factor: I gave you a 10 because I love reading your stories. I can feel what the characters are feeling, because of how well you describe them. I love the way you write, and I love how you make everything work with the things you have written before. Keep up the awesome work, Sue!! Morana xx
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Reviewed By: Miryokuteki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 15:05 CDT
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Hey Sue... I was wondering. What happened to all the original fictions you had posted here? I've been searching for them all over the web but all I can find are some references to Grimoire 2. Are they postd somewhere else? If so, where? I'd hate to see that you've taken them offline for good (unless you're getting them published. that would be cool^.^). Anywho, I'd really love to know. And keep up the good work on P4. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: thank you
Reviewed By: akashadair [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you sooo much for giving it the ending it deserves. i love your stories and your writing. those who dont. well. they can go to *that warm place down under* :) awesome job!!!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 15:30 CDT
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Thank you for continueing Sue
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Title: omg i finaly logged in, tehe
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 09:17 CDT
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wow. that was..... awe mikio, awe. i'm glad she likes the mark.
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yess! sweet ass!!! i'm so excited that you're going to completely finish it!!!!
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Reviewed By: Raniatlw [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 19:09 CDT
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Cute chapter!! Glad you're back.
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Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 18:12 CDT
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YAHOO!! A new chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 17:48 CDT
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I was just re-reading one of the chapters and I saw something about how your father-in-law was going to have the hip surgery...how did that go? Good I hope!!
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Reviewed By: Sweetprincess 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This whole chapter was great. I have a question, after this fic is done are you planning on continuing Purity for Toga's daughter's? Will Nez and Ryo ever gonna have pups? What about beele and Kichiro? Tjis fic was so good that I read it over a couple of times just to pass time and I can't still get enough of it. I just hope that you would do a continuation for Toga, Ryo, Kichiro and Gin's kids. That would be awesome.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 17:14 CDT
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You take all the time you need, Sue! That chapter was soo cute!!! Mikio is a good name, love the meaning lol! Oooh, a penut butter cup sounds good right now! Thanks for the update...now to read the teaser.
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