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Reviewed By: notzathros On: September 22, 2005 00:13 CDT
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Aw. So sad. These characters never communicate well, do they? Of course, if they did, we wouldn't have this wonderful story. Grin. Thanks for the great chapter!
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Title: 78, 79 & 80
Reviewed By: Darkless (nsi) On: September 22, 2005 00:05 CDT
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Well, the remaining half of the debauched twins is safely married (amazingly without a clash) and Kich and Belle have their plans all laid out. I wonder if they can be arrested for the same things in Paris? I'm sure the Parisians have seen it all (and encouraged it for the most part) so I think they would be hard pressed to shock them. LOL -- Now Cain is being called home...leaving Gin behind because niether will open up and be honest about what they want or how they really feel. They are so timid about so-called selfishness that they are willing to sacrifice their own happieness in the mistaken belief that the other isn't as committed. Communication...that is so important, and without it, all you have is hurt and confusion. I understand both sides, and both have valid (in their thoughts) reasons why they 'won't stand in his/her way' but...if they would only talk! *pulling hair* Grrrrrrr! And here am I...with only 2 tissues left in my kleenex box.
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Reviewed By: Deplora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful chapter, as usual, Sueric. I wouldn't expect any less from you, though, to be honest. It's always a beautiful chapter from you. The emotion is always so real and it's very rarely that a story moves me to tears. I'm glad to say that your vibrant characters have touched me that much, in both this and your other stories. Thank you for sharing your stories with us.
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Reviewed By: AislynnAndraste On: September 21, 2005 23:31 CDT
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*cries* NOOO!! I just want to yell at them. JUST TELL EACH OTHER ALREADY! TAKE A CHANCE! Such a great chapter though. *starts bawling* Thank you for posting the new chapter so early/late (since it's 11:30 here) ! I definately could stay up all night for this! Parting is such sweet sorrow. I feel so bad for poor Gin and Cain. *cries more*
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Title: the long angst filled road gets no shorter....
Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: September 21, 2005 23:28 CDT
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as always...lovin the chapters. brightened my otherwise not so good day. Gomen for not reviewing the past couple chapters...been to stressed to function properly. so the angst filled road our dear cain and gin are wandering along is getting no shorter. but you do angst so well....much loves anyways...hmmmm, poor gin. is the dear girl going to have a toga like episode if/when cain leaves without her? i donno, but i think our lovely authoress is got a few tricks up her sleeve before we get to that point..cant wait till the next chapter. i hope everything is going better for you now. Ja ne~ Darkflameangel
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Reviewed By: inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: September 21, 2005 23:26 CDT
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::Wails:: Awwwww! Poor Gin! Poor Cain! They are slowly killing each other and don't know it.... ::Wails:: again... joo made me cry! Again! C
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 (nsi) [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 23:24 CDT
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For some reason MMorg won't let me sign in....THANK YOU FOR THE EARLY CHAPTER!!!! Ugh, tears are running down my cheeks...I feel so sorry for Cain and Gin....I cried throughout the whole chapter...TY, I needed to let out some tears!!!!! Thank you for the awesome and early chapter!!! Love Ya!!!!!!! Gosh, now I have to wait 'till next week...why do I torture myself this way? lol
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Title: THANK YOU!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Lady_Yukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 23:24 CDT
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Thank you so much for uploading the chapter early, Sue. It was a beautiful chapter and Mel wasn't kidding when she said we would need tissues. There's a small mountain of tissues right next to my laptop right now. Anyways, thank you again for uploading early and I look forward to see what happends next. Lots of love, Ramen, and Pocky, Marion.
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Reviewed By: phalon (urnd-one) On: September 21, 2005 23:23 CDT
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Thanks Sue for the early chappie! This was very angsty, just the way I like it! I want to cry during this chapter, Cain was trying so hard to get Gin to come with him and she told him no. I wonder if this is going to turn into one of those situations that parallel Toga and Sierra. It's very interesting to read what you come up with!
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Title: Ch. 77
Reviewed By: Darkless (nsi) On: September 21, 2005 19:42 CDT
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*brain exploded in sex store* ....Film at eleven...
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Reviewed By: kidjade On: September 21, 2005 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story, One of the best ive read in a LONG LONG time. Got to say I wish you the best, and hope to see more chapters soon.
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: whit On: September 21, 2005 09:15 CDT
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damn i read all of your pyrity stories and gotta say they are damn good. please update this story! i love. its ahhhhhhh i just love it!!!!
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Reviewed By: caliste07 On: September 21, 2005 05:46 CDT
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i'm glad you're still updating on mm.org...that girl who was plagerising your work...screw her...she's probably just green in the face with jealousy with your work...i love very single one of your stories...the plots are gripping and intense and each character seems to come to life with the way you write about them...i do hope you'll continue to produce such wonderful stories...
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Title: Trujinx
Reviewed By: trujinx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect as always! Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 21:55 CDT
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How sad!! She hangs up on her father!! Shame on you Kichiro!! LOL!! Aww, but then again, who can deny him some lovin'? Sorry, I would have reviewed ealier today, but we've had a storm all day and it's just now clearing out!
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