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Reviewed By: strdragon On: September 09, 2005 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As someone who rarely leaves a review, I would like to say that the story is a great one. I have really enjoyed reading and caring about these characters. Great development and care has obviously been taken to "flesh out" your characters. Another note: Please know that my thoughts and prayers for you and your family are with you. Please try to ignore malicious and thoughtless comments, though I know how hard that can be.
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Title: Well Wishes
Reviewed By: Kaneasami On: September 08, 2005 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope that all is well with you and your family.
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Reviewed By: angle54 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I THINK THAT YOUR STORY IS A GREAT AND I HOPE NO PRAY THAT U KEEP GOING
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Reviewed By: DragonHostile17 On: September 06, 2005 13:56 CDT
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...well when they created the metaphor 'drop the bomb' for confessions, i don't think they meant hydrogen bomb, but well there you go. for some oddball reason though the title of the chapter and kich's reaction made me think of monty python: "it's just a flesh wound! ...Come back that i may bite off your knees!"
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr1956 On: September 05, 2005 05:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: September 05, 2005 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol!!!!!! did he just pass out in the grass??? that's hilarious! who finds him??????? ha!! poor guy! and poor cain! ahh! i hope we can get the next chapter soon! it's great!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 23:26 CDT
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I WAS RIGHT FOR ONCE!!! I knew something like this would happen!!!!! Aww...poor Kich, he should have told Cain the truth when he asked instead of provoking him, baka! I hope Belle and Gin can talk some sense into Cain. Kich needs to get out of the grass too...maybe Kagome or Inuyasha will sense that he's hurt and come rushing to him...hope it's Kagome, if Inuyasha finds out...MAJOR Tetsusaiga shoving!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: September 04, 2005 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Car accidents are terrible. Hope things are well. I got new House. Good story bye
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chapter. i hope every thang works out for you and your family.
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 21:34 CDT
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First of all, Sue, take all the time you want between updates. What's going on in your life right now is important. Secondly, this chapter was amazing. It was perfect and I absolutely loved it. I hope you and your family members are all doing okay, considering the cirumstances. My prayers are with your father-in-law.
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Reviewed By: TenshiKaika On: September 04, 2005 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kich. Hell, poor Cain. You have no idea how happy I was to see that you posted this chapter! "Wrong answer," Gain growled, shoving Kichiro against the wall again, and again Kichiro stood up, though this time a little slower than the first.
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 20:40 CDT
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Thank you for this chapter. I do hope your father in law gets better and that the surgery(ies) go well for him. It was a wonderful chapter. Be well and take care of yourself.
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Reviewed By: memememei On: September 04, 2005 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH!!!! CLIF HANGER!!! NO! That was reall awesome, I hope Kich gets inside, it's not good to just colapse on the ground, he could have concution! OMG! No! odn' get any idea's!!! He's going to okydoky..... ~Marina
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the chapter. I'll wait patiently for the next one and this one is a freat way to start my week. Belle finally told Cain about Kich, although it wasn't the best way. Poor Cain, must a be a great shock for him. I hope he doesn't yell at Belle for it. At least Gin is there to act as a buffer.
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Title: Chapter 74
Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 14:53 CDT
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Thank you sooooo very much for this much anticipated, much appreciated chapter!!! I hope all your family problems are easing somewhat - you are still in my thoughts and prayers. I am on the edge of my seat anticipating what sparks will fly when Inuyasha finds out what Cain did to Kich; I would surmise that both he and Ryo will go nuts all over Cain's rear end!! How is poor Sesshomaru going to survive the headache this one will bring on? And, even if they restrain themselves over the incident with Kichiro, what about when (or if) they discover what's been going on between GIN and Cain??? Ohhhh, there's gonna be some major language and violence stuff, isn't there? As much as I can barely contain myself wondering what's next, though, you and your family are far more important .... again, I hope that things are getting better!! Wiccan :-)
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