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Title: take care
Reviewed By: bdbrown On: August 30, 2005 23:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i completely understand your taking a vacation. your family comes first above all else. you only have one family so take care of them and dont worry about your readers. those of us who TRULY enjoy your writing will wait patiently behind the scenes until you get things taken care of. i think your doing to right thing, at least it is if YOU feel its the right thing to do. good luck i will keep your family in my thoughts
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: August 30, 2005 22:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Man! I just wrote a really good reply and then I screwed it up when I tried to upload it. Now, I am not sure that I will get my thoughts as well said. Condensed, poor version (not as good as the one I did previously and accidently trashed): You are right. Good point. Also, glad that you can interpret my poor spelling of abbreviations. I am a little narrowed minded about Sesshoumaru's character. They make him so stoic in the anime/manga (don't know if I want to use "stoic," maybe hardass instead.) I was not really shooting for sounding like criticism (spelled right?), as much as I was feeling around for understanding. (That sounds like a lot of crap doesn't it. Cusses the loss of first reply). Anyway, hope your family is doing better, and I certainly do not want to add to the headaches. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: xuaeved On: August 30, 2005 22:07 EDT
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I'm sorry for your father-in-law, and I hope he recovers well and quickly. Take your time getting back, and don't worry about letting the readers down, because you have to come first, as it is YOUR story after all. *wavewave*
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Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 22:01 EDT
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I know this seems a bit off from your story plot but I had to say it. I've always loved your stories and was trying to think of one thing that sets you stories apart from other people's...in any and all positions, you always make Kikyou a 'good guy'. In other stories people always seem to change this and make her the bad guy against Kagome and Inuyasha or team her up with Naraku. But in the first 'Purity' she helped Inuyasha, in 'Torrent', she gave Kagome that necklace to protect her for Inuyasha, and so on and so forth. I love how you write Kikyou's character out, even though I'm not a huge fan of her anyway, I just hate it when people make her out to the the evil 'bitch' in other words. Keep up the great work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: MarsMarmalade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 21:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'll tell you this from another'strong one' you're doing an amazing job handeling all of this right now. and hopefully this will ease some small worry, but your writing is just as wonderful as ever. as an avid reader of the purity series, i have yet to be anything but excited after reading one of your chapters. My very best wishes and prayers go out to you and your family. Family should always come first over writing.
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Reviewed By: Ladyblade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 21:00 EDT
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My sincerest condolences regarding your current woes. I cannot claim to know exactly what you're going through, but from writer to writer I understand at least the worry you have over being 'up to par'. I too am taking a brief haitus to deal with new stress that makes me either not want to write or write poorly. Good luck to your family. Clear roads and kind drivers to your husband as he travels to Nashville... (I'm in Memphis myself so I know the TN drivers can be a pain).
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Reviewed By: Jaxomruth [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 20:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a wonderful story. I really look foward to reading it whenever possible. Still, I understand that you have a lot of personal issues going in your life right now and need to take a break. I think I speak for all of your fans when I say that you will be missed but that it is important that you take however much time you need to straighten out your life. Your family always should come first. I hope that your father-in-law improves. Your family is in my prayers. I look foward to your next post, whenever that might be.
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Title: Thinking of you
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy luffs Sue On: August 30, 2005 20:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Take a break, Sue, I will still luff you! I hope things get much better for you and your father in law. You and yours are in my thoughts and prayers.
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 20:08 EDT
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Great chapter. Do what you need to and don't worry about us. We'll be here when you do get back. Take care of your family and yourself. That's the most important thing right now.
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Reviewed By: Kirie Valdur On: August 30, 2005 19:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope your father-in-law gets better soon and that his surgery goes well. I hope your husband can actually make down to his father's house this time. The last two chapters weren't as bad as you thought, if you thought that at all. Anyways, I eagerly await the next chapter as soon as you post it. Don't feel rushed to write if you think the chapter will be below your normal writting quality. I understand needing to take a break to deal with life, believe me. Writting has helped be forget about a few things when I desperately needed to, so, I completely know where you're coming from. And don't overstress yourself. That's bad for your health! Wishing you and your family the best!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 17:49 EDT
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Aww...well your father-in-law is still in my prayers, along with you family!!! And he's more important than a question being answered! AHAHA, Toga has four girls!!! Will he ever produce a son? Maybe he should try a new position; I hear it works on some!! That reminds me...my mom still gloats on becoming a grandparent in March! Aww, Cain has to rescue his cake fairy!! That's so sweet!!!
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Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 17:48 EDT
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It's me again ... impatient as ever and TWICE as 'antsy' over the looming will they/or won't they between Cain and Gin!! Although, with the problems in your personal life, I can only imagine what a struggle it must be to put out ANYTHING to appease us Sueric Fanfic monsters! I'm so sorry to hear about your troubles and I do sincerely hope that things eventually get back on an even keel for you soon. You are far too kind a person to have things like this to have to deal with (never mind the idiots that think 'guilt trips' in reviews are a good idea!). As always, this chapter and all the others between now and the last time I reviewed have not disappointed!!! I'm crossing my fingers that Cain and Gin get things moving BEFORE Belle and Kichiro can't take it anymore (but I'm betting you've got more surprizes up your sleeve, right?)! Once again, THANK YOU for your efforts, your stellar work and your dedication to this story (even if it is for your OWN sake, I still truly appreciate all the effort you put in). WiccanMethuselah :-)
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: August 30, 2005 16:26 EDT
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Whew, that was rotten timing. Why do I have the feeling Gin is making herself sick of heartbreak even though Cair is with her. Cain certainly has his hands full. It was neat hearing the parallels between Kagome's early relationship with Inuyasha and Gin's with Cain. For some reason I had missed the similarities. A cool "wow" moment when I read that section. Thanks for the chapters! Best wishes for your fil and family!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 16:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: koga52 On: August 30, 2005 16:12 EDT
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Great chapter. I'm surprised Sess wasn't angrier about the late night police pick up. They could have at least said thank you. Thanks for the story.
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