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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: August 23, 2005 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this chapter! So many undercurrents of angst and feelings. A lot of emotional reaching out. Gin seem to be afraid to hope but could not seem to help herself. You are so good at this love and turmoil. What can I say . . . I love it! Cynbad146 (It'll be fireworks, if and when they finally get together, I sure.)
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Title: la la land
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
real nice chapter, sue. but why do I get the feeling that these two are in la la land (meaning that they are living a dream of what could be and not really facing the reality of their situation)> oh well ya know I feel like I'm sledding on the downhill icy slope called "angst" and the ride is just steadilly gaining more speed. Well keep on making that angsty slope more icy, Sue cause I'm enjoying the ride!! lol!!. thanks again sue. J.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Nilkwep [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and i hope that there is a Purity 5, I just thought Id mention this since Sue doesnt miss much. I bought a Japanese Dictionary to English for the sake of reading this. And i found among other meaning Sue already mentioned for Maru (Ryomaru and Sesshoumaru), it can mean Purity.I thought this interesting since the title of the stories is Purity.... Rather clever if u ask me!Thanks for the fantastic stories Sue and keep it up! Your Fan, Nilkwep
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 18:33 CDT
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That was really sweet. A Perfect date! ^_^
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Reviewed By: mirokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I'm enjoying this story!I'm trying to finishing writing my own, but I'm glued to the monitorreading you own. Please Sueric update!
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Reviewed By: Rawben.. On: August 23, 2005 17:11 CDT
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ohhh... good tip w/ the ctrl key! i had problems once... good chapter!!! i forgot about her thing for 'the big dogs'! lol... mmmm smores... now i'm hungry... yey for tomorrow's chapter! i'm totally excited! :D
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Reviewed By: AislynnAndraste On: August 23, 2005 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! I absolutely LOVE this chapter! Cain transforming and doing the cute "puppy-wants-to-play" wiggle. That was gold, pure gold! Coming home from a trying day and getting to read your latest update always makes me smile. I know you understand just how special and significant it is to have something that makes you smile. Mine usually come few and far between, but getting to sit down and read your story and see your wonderful talent shine through; not to mention everything that you've gone through with your stories and they still reflect the wonderful person that writes them. Thank you and I hope that you smile today, too.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: August 23, 2005 17:00 CDT
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Thanks for the screen refresh tip. Finding the new chapters can be quite a treasure hunt on mm sometimes. Gin and Cain are so sweet; Kich and Belle are soooo naughty. Thnaks for the great chapters!
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Title: Purity 4: Justification
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 16:56 CDT
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MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM, I love S'mores, I love Gin, and I love Cain. I am happy to see that he isn't too old to do it anymore, lol. Sorry, my bad. I couldn't resist. I just love warm fuzzies, they make me feel good from my head to my toes. This was a wonderful chapter, and you put it out on my birthday. I know you didn't know that's what you were doing, but hey, I can dream. It made me laugh for days that he tricked her into a date when she wasn't paying attention (course, if I had him to look at, I would probably lose track of what he was saying too) Around here, the kids are constantly telling each other "Man, your my dog" I can't think of a surer way to feel better than a picnic with something good to drink, something good to eat, a sketch pad and pencil, and your best friend by your side. Sigh. Great chapter, just really great. Sigh, smiling dreamily, picturing it contentedly. Sun......butterflys....................full stomick........................watching clouds go by......sigh.
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Reviewed By: Angelstars (not signed in) On: August 23, 2005 15:49 CDT
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Lol adorable, Gin said "Feh" so kawaii! This was a nice change from all the angst, and Gin got to see "the...big...dog..." lolz, to cute to handle is our Gin!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 15:26 CDT
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MMM...s'mores sound goooooood!!! That was a wonderful trick Cain, eh, good boy? LOL! I wonder what Gin will do when she finds out that Sesshomaru will still be able to transform into his youkai state...probably as if Cain can do it again. That was really sweet of him; I take it he never showed his true form to Isabelle, or has he? Merely curious...now I must read the teaser!!!
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Title: *fangirl squealing*
Reviewed By: Lady_Yukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 15:26 CDT
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Okay my mind was in the gutter when Cain was questioning Gin about wanting to see his doggy form, although I think no one else who read it had any innocent thoughts to those questions. And I can't believe that Gin said "Feh!" I think that's the first time she's ever said that in any of the Purity stories (although I could be wrong *makes note to reread the other Purity stories*) and it sounds so cute when she said it. I don't know how you do it, but with every every chapter you've got me falling even more in love with the characters then I was before. Anyways thanks again for the wonderful chapter. Lots of love, Pocky, and ramen. Yukiko-chan
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 14:28 CDT
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that was such a cute chapter with cain and gin! lol i remember that one part back in the story, "do you want to touch it" haha that was really cute and funny. hehe and he tricked her, it was a date! *sighs* those two are meant for each other...cant wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: tinky On: August 23, 2005 13:49 CDT
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there all so cute together!
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Reviewed By: kiaraecko aka hotarumai On: August 23, 2005 13:21 CDT
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hey thanks for the awesome chapter!!!! heheh Gin was on a date!!!! lol it was a cute chapter!!!! i really liked it!!! thanks also for the tip about the new chpaters and the CTRL refresh thing!! its going to help so much!!! thanks again
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