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 Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 17, 2005 14:00 CDT
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[Wait … so would Cain be my brother-in-law or father-in-law …?]haha interesting question...i wonder though...hah. anyways thats great that kich got cain and gin at least in the same room now. gosh but cain still doesnt want to make gin his mate because of his promise to isabelle...im still stumped on how this will work out. i especially love kichiro's thoughts on cain and gin and how it wouldnt make sense to tell inuyasha about them. it was really deep. but anyways wonderful chapter.
 Title: beautiful
Reviewed By: gigalon  On: August 17, 2005 12:34 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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i love it, i love it, i love it!!!!!!!!this is just amazing.this story is just......wow:)))please hury with the update!!!!!
 Reviewed By: wench  On: August 17, 2005 11:06 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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that is so sad.... can't believe that Gin would blame herself. im guessing we'll be hearing the isabelle story now, im dying to know!!! anyways, great job and i can't wait for another angst-filled (?) chapter. =)
 Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 17, 2005 10:40 CDT
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I really hope they came in time to truly help her. I don't doubt for a second that Kich'll fillet Cain's ass if he hurts her again. Bestest big brother right?
 Reviewed By: Elvinah  On: August 17, 2005 10:14 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Thank you! Just startet to read it yesterday, my eyes were just locked on the screen its just sooo good i love it! I really feel sorry for Gin, well also Cain but mostly Gin. Keep up the really good work!
 Title: whoa
Reviewed By: mizbum2u(NLI)  On: August 17, 2005 08:33 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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O_O which one is it? father in law or brother in law? puwhahha... now both... ^^;;; whoa... anyways... awesome chapter! kich kicked some serious a$$!!! lol
 Title: well now
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 17, 2005 01:24 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Hooray for Kichiro!!! whohoo!!! great chapter Sue. I love Cain's trying to rationalize Gin's sickness at the end. I just want to know how someone so dense and stupid could be a taiyouki in charge of the North America. Geezz if this wasn't fiction, I'd be scared of having a person in charge like Cain. Whew! glad this is fiction Whew!! ...Oh wait there's congress and the senate in charge!! arggghhhh! Oh my Gawd! wait! maybe this isn't fiction!!! (shit). Well anyway whoever is in charge I am glad Kich kicked Cain's ass. Absolutely love the the Kich comment at the end, Sue about the father in law etc. too good lol. thanks again for a great chapter and hope the 1st day of school went well for you. J
 Reviewed By: Darkless (nsi)  On: August 17, 2005 01:20 CDT
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Talk about sailing down the river in Egypt! Cain is so smart, but his level of denial is of epic proportions. How can he be so clueless...wait...he was practially raised by the enigmatice and notoriously closed-mouthed Sesshoumaru, who likes to let others flounder in their ignorance then scoffs at them for not knowing something just because nobody ever told them about it. I think that Sess needs to understand how important full disclosure is. And being in charge, none of Cain's underlings in America would ever think to discuss things with him, assuming that he'd been taught all that he should have been taught in the first place. *sigh* Here comes the pain.
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 17, 2005 01:07 CDT
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As to final thought...Oh gosh!! He'd be BOTH!!! The horro!!!!! LOL. Ah, wow, nice punches there Kich; even though I knew Cain would let him. About time the bangster went to Gin, though it ain't from lack of trying! What he doesn't understand is that he's already chosen her...he chose her when he first met her...and vice versa!
 Reviewed By: razorbladesinner (nsi)  On: August 17, 2005 00:27 CDT
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Damn woman! I swear cliff hangers just need to die!!!! Although that final thought from Kich totally made it worth while LOL. Another amazing chapter. You can't really blame them for wanting another Purity story...admit it...you love us worshipping you :P.
 Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly  On: August 16, 2005 22:59 CDT
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I've loved every word of the Purity series, I look for new chapters almost every day. There's a chapter in one of the stories that's just been lurking in my head and won't leave me alone. I was hoping you might remember which story it's in. The males in the family are playing with the diamond spear blast again and then Gin comes up and makes a spectacular hit with it. Sess tells Toga to try again but he refuses. Gin walks off smirking. Ring any bells? Thanks
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 16, 2005 22:22 CDT
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Sorry I haven't reviewed in the past two days...I'm tring to enjoy the rest of my vacation before I go back to school...Oh no!!! Kichiro is going to tear Cain apart, and Cain will let him 'cause he's misrable without Gin. Oh, another thing...won't Cain smell Belle on Kichiro...since it seems like Kichiro doesn't shower after their...adventures. OOOH I love the angst, but then again I hate it because you ALWAYS leave cliff-hangers!! WHEN WILL THE TORMENT END!!!!! Looking forward to the update tomorrow!!!!!!! Oh, and about the fanarts...Is it alright if they have animations on it? I'm not sure if you'll be able to post it...that is if you like the fanarts.
 Reviewed By: Rawben...  On: August 16, 2005 21:18 CDT
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ahhhh!!! what's going on? has she lost it? her niceness? he killed it! cain! you ass! ugh! i have to know!!!!!!!!!!!! :O
 Title: yasha 101
Reviewed By: yasha 101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 16, 2005 20:26 CDT
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this is getting so sad. i almost cant handle it. i hope they make up soon. please say they will.
 Reviewed By: Anoki  On: August 16, 2005 20:10 CDT
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Wow, that is so incredibly sad. I can't even think of a witty comment to say after this chapter. Another awesome chapter, Sueric. I can't wait to see how it ends but then I never want it to end. lol. Speaking of the ending, how much longer do you think Purity 4 is going to be?
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