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| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] | | Pages (148): [ « ‹ 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 › » ] | Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 03:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLease, please, please let Gin be ok. I think she's experiencing what Toga went through when Sierra told him to leave. :(
| Reviewed By: JBird7986 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 21:29 EDT
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Another excellent chapter...sigh...I'm disappointed because I won't be able to read the next chapter until 9PM tomorrow night....grumble...
| Reviewed By: Sweetprincess 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 18:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, finally lemon between Kich and belleniece. I was wondering where you get belle's name from?Seemed strange to me since I never heard it before. Feel so bad for Gin. Did cain really killed for some reason or from something else? I'd have to say that Belle and Kich really catched my attention the most. belle seemed to be the rebellious kind of girl, which she is, and Kich's the hot headed arrogant type of guy..err...dog. They make a wonderful couple. I read your fic Purity 4"justification twice now and it never seized to amazed me that you're a great writer. Don't get discourage and keep up the good work.Rememeber that if you get discourage, think of all the fan that you're disappointing.Bye
| Title: kocoum
Reviewed By: ll kocoum ll [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 15:30 EDT
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:] ahaha.... nice chapter, i luffed it. I feel so bad for gin and cain... is the angst intended only for them, or is kich and belle gonna be having it too?
| Title: *ripping tissue after tissue from the box*
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 14:48 EDT
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My cheeks still feel hot after the *gulp* Piano Interlude and now the angst is making my vision fuzzy. It's hard to read like that, having to wipe my eyes and blow my nose every few sentences. (I'm not one of those lucky people who look good when they cry, bleh) All I can think is; "Aww, poor Belle, with her nostalgic trepidation, poor Kich with his frustrated understanding, poor Cain with his guilt-ridden hopelessness, and poor Gin...sad, heart-sore and in shock." (I just got this image of a broken-winged fairy) I do believe in fairies, I do, I do...I do believe in fairies, I do, I do...I do believe in fairies, I do, I do...I do believe in fairies, I do, I do... *starts clapping really loudly*
| Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 14:43 EDT
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wow great chapter. i hope that cain fixes things with gin though. gosh i still think about that outburst from the previous chapter. what a wonderful story.
| Reviewed By: ima9e On: August 15, 2005 09:02 EDT
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im just wondering...are Belle and Kichiro mates now? or are they still not, due to the condoms? im a little puzzled here...great chapter as usual! =)
| Reviewed By: Noriku Kitsune On: August 15, 2005 02:34 EDT
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my fanfictiond reviews aren't posting *grr!* so i'm posting it here! okay, after chapter 61 i thought, maybe Isabel went nutters or something cause she wanted to get away from Cain and thus began to hate him, and i thought, maybe Isabel tried to kill Belle or something and Cain defended his daughter over his "wife" (not mate)... but this latest chapter seems to lean towards him likeing Isabel and her memory... well i'll just have to find out... by the way i think your lemons are very well written, and fit the characters...but poor Kich, and poor Belle cause she is afraid to lose her daddy... i'm just glad Kich is patient... well, your fanfic is so far amazing, i love it. i hope you continue to write them though i know you have decided no more "Purity". people are stupid to threaten you and your children because they didn't like your story, *grr!!* i'm looking forward to your next post!!
| Title: Ohhh! Early!
Reviewed By: The Potty Monster On: August 15, 2005 01:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! Early chapter! Yayness! Beautiful chapter, by the way. I hope stuff get's better with Cain and Gin, no it HAS to get better with Cain and Gin! They're just adorable! I love your original characters, they just have so much personality, and you don't change them around and switch them out like other, LESSER, authoresses, if I spelled that right. On a side note, my favorite will always be Toga. I obsess about him. Think Sesshomaru, just sexier with black hair and black mokomoko-sama, right? Argh, Great chapter, good luck with the little children, and can't wait for the update!
| Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 01:38 EDT
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That was beautiful, touching really. I hope Cain can fix things with Gin, seeing what I have of her - reading as much of her thoughts as there have been - I don't think she's ever had a reason to cry like that. Ever felt such pain. Though I guess Cain feels it too, in a sense it feel as though he's so afraid of loosing her that he's deliberately pushing her away. At first I was mad at him, but then I began to understand. I think we all do the same thing at one point or another in our lives. We become so afraid of failure in one particular thing or area that we deliberately sabotoge ourselves when things go too well for us to believe that they will continue being so. I mean when you think about it, how long can the beauty sun shine last until the storm rolls in?
| Reviewed By: Rawben... On: August 15, 2005 01:10 EDT
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ohh, irony: i just asked my roommie why she hits her cigs, and she told me that too!! i've always wondered!!! anyhow: whoa! great lemon! whew! and agh!!! what's gin gonna do when cain comes??? how is she now? is she different?? ahhh!
| Title: Chapter 62
Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 00:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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All right! Kich and Belle did the wild thing. It's about time. The sexual tension between them was hilarious. Wish a naked girl would come sit on my piano but first I would need to get one. Now onto the angst. I can't get enough drama (as long as it isn't happening in my life). Amazing job of conveying Cain's feelings. So next chapter we get to find out about Isabelle's death. I'm looking forward to that drama filled talk.
| Reviewed By: anime lover On: August 15, 2005 00:25 EDT
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the angst so sad but it makes the neding so much better
| Title: Jeebus
Reviewed By: jupiter_evolution4 On: August 14, 2005 22:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeebus, Sue... you are killing me softly with the angst... !! But now that the lemon btwn. Kich and Belle has happened, will you be going into more detail on how this project is supposed to work with the mating with or with the condom, that Kich is working on? It actually sounds very very interesting... and I'm very eager to find this out...
| Reviewed By: moongal850 On: August 14, 2005 22:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
they also pack cigarettes to make sure when you ash them, the cherry doesnt fall out. *giggles* thought id add that. i love this story, keep it up. im all anxious to see how the rest falls into place. you are so my favorite author. ^.^
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