| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: wench On: August 12, 2005 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow and that's so sad. That was my reaction..... can't wait for another angst-filled chapter. keep up the good work. :) just wondering, are u going to update Thaumaturgy after purity 4 is done? Thanks.
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Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can honestly say I'm extremely surprised. I didn't think Cain actually killed his wife. I have to ask, was he forced to kill her so his daughter could live or soemthign of that extent? ~Toby
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 14:02 CDT
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omg. i didnt expect cain to make an outburst like that...dang that was really intense with gin and cain. gosh so he did kill isabelle, or is it that he believes its his fault. it cant be that he actually murdered isabelle, my god. and things were great between kich and belle in this earlier chapter, im guessing that what occured with cain and gin will affect kich and belle's relationship too? oh gosh. great story Sueric.
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Reviewed By: chichiwvu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 13:20 CDT
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Wow... I was wondering when we would get a slightly better understanding of what happened with Isabelle. I guess we'll have to wait to see exactly what happened (are we going to find out?). Very good angst. The relationships were so great... something has to pop up everyonce in a while;) I love me some drama!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!...... that was.....intence.... please update soon i wish to see what is next
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Reviewed By: Ra Tai 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 10:55 CDT
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This is one of the best stories I have ever read. Purity series in itself is one of a kind. Please keep up the good work. You are extremely awesome!
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 10:35 CDT
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Wow, I hope Gin will be ok after that. Unfortunately pain knows no boundaries and has no discriminations, it lashes out at one and all.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 09:14 CDT
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Oh my gosh...I had a feeling that Cain had killed her, but like Gin, I didn't want it to be true...Aww, he's pushing her away and her youkai already chose him. Another Toga incident maybe? Man, I'm lost for words, to much thinking now of what's going to happen. Enjoy school shopping. Yeah, like that will happen...I hate it and I'm a senior in high school.
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Reviewed By: kappei_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. I loved it. The angst seems to pull it all together into one intricately weaved pattern.
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Reviewed By: nancey~not signed in On: August 12, 2005 00:37 CDT
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Wow!!! what a wonderful chapter! This chapter is by far my favorite chapter. Well done! Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing your talented writing with all of us!
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: August 11, 2005 23:56 CDT
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awww!! so sad! poor girl! i guess the next chapter doesnt come till monday, right? that's a long way away... :( lol, but they were good chapters!
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Title: oh my...
Reviewed By: QamarNoor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 23:07 CDT
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I actually cried during this chapter! poor Gin and Cain! *sniff* this'll either make em' or break em'. I have a feeling Cain had no choice but to kill Isabelle..perhaps lethal complications while giving birth to Belle? I'm hoping that if gin doesn't get the full story from cain..maybe she'll get it from her uncle..and ooohh if belle finds out....oh dear.... eagerly waiting in anticipation for the next chapters!
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Title: Ch. 61 The almighty Queen of Angst is on a roll again...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 21:38 CDT
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Oh, leave us in tears for the weekend, will you? That's so cruel! *snerk* That's right, I just snerked! -- And cruel is the way that Cain bellowed his anger, grief and guilt out to Gin. At least she understood that he was angry with himself and not her, but one can only take so much before being overwhelmed, and Gin was in no way prepared to deal with that level of intensity. She's understandably upset and it may take her a while to recover. Oh, how tangled things are becoming. - Take care and may you find everything you want on sale! LOL
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Reviewed By: karisma On: August 11, 2005 21:35 CDT
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At first I tought that Cain accidentally killed Isabelle when he tried to mark her, but now is most that he needed to kill her so Belle could born. I dont now, only teories here. Excelent work. P.S. English is not my first language, not even the second so any grammar or sp mistakes, sorry.
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Reviewed By: inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: August 11, 2005 21:28 CDT
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Awwwwwww! I can't believe it! Those last two chapters were SO intense Sue! Gin doesn't fully understand that her youkai has choosen, does she? I get the impression that she is going to suffer more than any of them expected. I knew the ANGST was coming from the queen... Poor Cain... I have the feeling that the choice was his child or his mate? Ah! Wails! I can't wait for more! Beautifully done, once again Sue. C
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