| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: August 03, 2005 00:19 EDT
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Oh! That was such a sweet chapter! Poor Belle... she is in such turmoil over her daddy. Ha! Gin would want to eat her way through Chicago! Hmmm! Yummy! C
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Title: Ch55
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 22:27 EDT
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Hey yo, awesome chapter once again. Good to see that Kich and Belle are getting along just fine. Heck, they even act like they're already mated! I feel bad for Belle though. She loves both Kich and her dad, but as a result, she has to question her dad's future. It's almost like the price of her happiness is her dad's life...its all in Gin's hands now I guess. Lol, with Gin loose in Chicago...I can only imagine how that will turn out! Even her old habit of saying things without thinking about how they sound is still around, lol. Well, I hope that Cain realizes that his decisions not only affect him, but also the ones he loves, namely Gin and Belle...reading your previous works, I know this will be one heck of a ride, regardless of how it turns out! Again, awesome chapter! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: August 02, 2005 21:32 EDT
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great chapter!!!!!!! i loved the last 2 limes!! especially cains! ha! man... i cant wait till the guys find out what the girls already know ;).
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 18:56 EDT
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Oh no! Gin is loose and targeting local restaraunts and eateries in the Chicago area. Wait till she gets her claws on a deep-dish pizza! LOL (side note; I don't give bread to ducks and geese anymore, it's not good for them. I go to a feed store and buy a cheap bag of chicken scratch. They love it.) - Kich won't enter Cain's stinky room...priceless! And comparing Belle to Ryo has him squirming. "...you're mating your twin in a skirt!" LMAO It's a good thing that Ryo can't stand Belle. (Must be because they are so much alike!) Can you imagine what they might cook up if they actually got along? YeeeeeHawwwww!!
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Reviewed By: wench On: August 02, 2005 18:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the chapter.... ur such an amazing writer with a lot of imagination and skills! can't wait for the next chapter... :)
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Reviewed By: tinky On: August 02, 2005 18:15 EDT
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WHERE DO U GET THE IDEA FOR YOUR NAMES? BECAUSE I LOVE THEM!!!!
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 14:49 EDT
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Hm, cant wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: hotarumai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 14:22 EDT
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wow another awesome chapter!!!!! thanks for the great chapter!!
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 13:15 EDT
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Another nicely done chapter my darling. I can't wait for more, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: August 02, 2005 11:34 EDT
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cool chapter
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Reviewed By: KikyoKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 11:24 EDT
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Nothing will change...Yeah right and I see pink kitsunes running around my room.
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: August 02, 2005 10:22 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great new chapter. I love it. But, I'm getting the feeling something big is going to happen soon. I feel your building up to a cliff hanger/or story changing event. Oh well guess I'll just have to wait and see. Hope everything is getting better for you or alest your feeling better. Can't wait to read more Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: kappei_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 10:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Little moments... they are so wonderful! Cute, cute so very cute! This chapter is so romantic, sure it's not candle lite dinners and carriage rides like in New York, but the time Belle and Kich and Gin and Cain spend together is so precious, that's what romance is to me! Beautiful chapter! It's cool to know that Kich's future mate is similar to Ryo(in mannerisms, not looks), it makes sense considering twins have a close bond and Ryo and Kich have always been together. Finding out the character's little quirks and thoughts really gives the characters depth and I have to say I love Kich, Cain, Gin and Belle as much as InuYasha or Kagome, sometimes I may like them a little more!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 04:30 EDT
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Aww...poor Kichiro doesn't want to go home...I think he's afraid of what Cain will do when he finds Kichiro's scent all over Belle...well since they've done every thing but the actual mating itself...oooh...what will Inuyasha think? YIKES!! I'm with Kichiro....stay in America. As for Gin...just a little more kisses and all that and Cain will be all hers....pudding in the palm of her hand!!
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Title: 10's Across The Board
Reviewed By: Amber (dont have a SN) On: August 02, 2005 02:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that you hear this all the time but I feel the need to tell you again... You are a wonderful writer, I so enjoy all of your stories and while I have not read all of them I am working on it. You have a real gift and I respect you as a writer. I am really sorry that so many people can be so ignorant. You write what you want without care of how others think about it and that is very admirable. It just amazes me how some people disregard the fact that you don't have to post your stories, but you rather choose to. I have even got some of my friends to start reading your stories and they agree that they really are wonderful works of art. I really do hope, regardless of other peoples need to point out their obviously lack of manners and taste who criticize your stories, that you will keep posting for all of us who bask in the warmth of your stories that so invitingly touches our hearts. And out of this speech I have only one question... I know that a couple of people don't like Desideratum, shame on you people, but do you intend to write anymore? I think that it shows real promise, as do all of your stories, but people would see that too if only they would see them through to the end. Looking forward to the next update. No rush. Keep up the good work Sue and Betas. And God Bless all your families with good health and love.
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