| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 04:31 EDT
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Uh oh...now it's time for head shoving for Kichiro....Cain's princess is all grown up.....here's a quote for Kichiro always calling Belle princess: Don't call me a goddess, don't call me a quess, just call me the cutest princess you've ever seen....saw it on a site with all these quotes...thought it'd fit them.
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Reviewed By: Akihana (not signed in) On: July 28, 2005 04:15 EDT
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Kinda late, or early, ne Sueric? Awwww, so they basically agreed to mate? Whee! That is, if Inuyasha doesn't kill Kichiro, and Cain doesn't kill Kichiro. i can't see anyone blaming Belle for this, funnily enough. Hey, when is he going to train her to fight? I can't wait for that.
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Title: Chapter 52
Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 03:54 EDT
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The chapter started off with wonderful fluff then took a sharp turn to lust. Great idea. Funniest part had to be when Kich realized Belle actually did what he said. Who know she would have stripped down right there. So Kich and Belle have decided that they'll be mates and the only thing left to do is mark her. Can't wait till the family here's about this one, especially Cain. It's no secret that he isn't too fond of Kich. As usual a wonderful chapter to read.
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: July 27, 2005 21:16 EDT
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what happened??? to cain??? :O great chapter!!!
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Title: Ch51
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 19:54 EDT
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I don't know if you ever get tired of hearing this, but awesome job! Kichiro is actually being a pretty romantic guy about this whole weekend thing with Belle. Les Miserables? Very cool, haven't seen it but its a great read. Then with Gin and Cain...wow, that was just the perfect combination of humor and romance (it wasn't hentai folks...), along with a pinch of angst. Hmm...I've said it before and I'll say it again: Whatever is troubling Cain must be pretty damn horrible, if he's put out by the mere thought of it. Even when he's with his Gin (not mate, he hasn't mated her yet...yet, right?), the simple thought of it kills him inside. Hopefully Gin can find a fix for this soon. Loved the humor in this chapter, Gin's bantering with Cain was just too damn funny. Keep it up and God bless~! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Anoki On: July 27, 2005 17:18 EDT
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Another fantastic chapter once again. Makes me want to cry and laugh at the same time. I love Kich and Belle's relationship but I think Cain and Gin are my favorite couple. Maybe because their love (Is it love, yet?) seems more tormented. I also wanted to ask if you've ever heard of Jennifer Roberson? She writes in the fantasy and historical/fantasy genre and your writing always kind of reminded me of hers. That may very well be because she's one of my favorite fantasy authors and you are my favorite fan fiction author. I was just wondering because she was one of the main writers who really inspired me to start my own fantasy book. If you've never heard of her and think I'm just babbling on I highly recommend the Cheysuli series by Jennifer Roberson. Again, another wonderful chapter.
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Reviewed By: kappei_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 16:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A smiley chapter, it made me smile a lot. The chapter really showed the everyday side of life for Cain and Gin and the blooming relationship between Belle and Kich. Cain's bad side is sexy! Gin is cute as a button as usual! Lovely chapter that perked up my day! :)
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 16:30 EDT
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As to Gin's final though...that's what we all want to know...but it'll take you a few more chapters to explain that won't it? You love torturing your reviews like that don't ya? lol....oh well I'm not complaining...it's kinda funny how you do that. Hmm...I keep thinking about what Inuyasha will do after he smells that Gin and Cain have had some intimate moments...even if they haven't mated. Now that will be some definate Tetsusaiga shoving...unless Cain knocks it out of Inuyasha's hands that is. Poor Cain...messing with Inuyasha's baby girl...not good lol.
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: July 27, 2005 15:32 EDT
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comment about the second paragraph of the Gin-Cain scene- Gin forgot verile. Unless, after what happened, she doesn't think he's so verile anymore...lol, good chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ladyblade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 13:26 EDT
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I'm sure it sounds repetitive, but... another great chapter! You and your betas are awesome! It looks as though P4 might be around 70-80 chapters? Another Bertha? lol Wonderful wonderful writing style. Sometimes I wish I was able to write so eloquently.
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 12:51 EDT
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That was great. Every part is wonderful and leaves me wanting for more. I know that Gin will find a way to help heal Cain's old wounds. So much like her Mamma she is.
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 12:29 EDT
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the relationships for these couples are getting more intense, wonderful chapter again Sue
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr1956 On: July 27, 2005 11:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: EAP On: July 27, 2005 01:11 EDT
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Excellent! I enjoyed this chapter, your writing is amazing. You really do have talent. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: KikyoKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 23:24 EDT
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I wish I could go shoping with Kirch. I am stuck at home with mono so I am going to go back and reread all your wonderful creations. I hope that will keep me quiet for a few days. By the way purple is my favorite color also.
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