| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 19:18 EDT
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I came back from my beach vacation with a great surprise... four new chapters! Four kickass chapters! Daaaaaaaaaaaaamn! And that is all I have to say! XOXO!!! ~pagan_sedjou
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Reviewed By: crolynx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 18:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE you Sue. Man have I missed your stories. I love what you've been doing. I wish I could write stories this good. Oh well. Hey when are you going to continue working on Desideratum(toin?)? I forget how to spell the title...sorry. :( Anyways,...so when do you think these guys'll get their heads straightened out and admit their feelings to each other? Oh wait your the Author you know that anyhow. Ok disregard my last question. Any progress on making some of these stories into PDFs for traveling us schmucks who don't always have an active internet connection? Awww well...have fun Sue and enjoy yourself while making this. And always remember even if you don't see a review, your making a military person that's a long way from home very happy. Ja Ne, Crolynx ;p
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Title: Busy, busy, busy...
Reviewed By: Darkless (nsi) On: July 21, 2005 17:59 EDT
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*twitch* I saw that; you made Cain say 'it' three times...three times! I totally understand Gin's reticence when it comes to certain words. *snicker* Sometimes you just can't help but tease repressed-er-um-sensitive people like that. (Yeah, sensitive, definitely sensitive...yeah, definitely.) I will refrain from commenting anymore about how adorabibble Gin is for fear of sounding like a broken record...even though she is! LOL - I'm so glad that Kich is mending things between himself and Belle, even if he had to resort back to his Man-Whore ways. Looks like he's well on his way to exiting the "dog house" and into the arms of yon fair maid. "That's a good boy! Good boy! Wanna buscuit?" *chortle*
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Reviewed By: Kitcat99 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 17:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Another great chapter that last one was just hilarious. I haven't been able to review for a while. Anyway I agree with Kich's youkai that was just cold. Anyway I kind of had a feeling that he made it seem like he was leaving the dress there for a reason. The scene with the jewelry kind of reminded me of the movie Pretty Woman not that I'm saying that Belle is anything like Julia Roberts' character in that movie. One thing that I may have just not seen though is did he get her shoes to match? I just don't remember reading about any shoes. You are exceptionally good with details so it was just probably just an oversight on my part. Just the fact that you update daily on weekdays is a feat in and of it self and you should be commended for doing so. I've never been able to keep to something like that, not for lack of trying. How you keep the schedule you have even with a problem like tendentious is really admirable. I know what tendentious is like since I have it too. At least it hasn't progressed to corporal tunnel, I just hope you don't experience trigger finger as well since I can say from experience that it just sucks. Readers who demand more updates should be happy with what they get which is more than one can say for other authors that update once a week at best. The highlight of my day is checking MM.org for an update to Justification. ^_^ So keep up the good work I am looking forward to the next update when ever you get to it. Kitcat ^_^
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Reviewed By: Suze - eternally nsi On: July 21, 2005 16:20 EDT
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Aw man...that was just so sweet. I kept having these "Pretty Woman" flashes, especially when the necklace was brought out. Hee hee... Hmm...I wonder where they're off to...the Met?
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Title: Purity prequel
Reviewed By: tachi_fossae [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 14:28 EDT
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I had an idea for another Purity story. You left a few loose ends concerning Miroku and Sango, and Shippo's courtship of Rin would make a great story. I think a Purity prequel centered around Shippo and Rin would be a great way to tie up any loose ends and finish off an excellent series. Please, give it some thought.
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Reviewed By: tinky On: July 21, 2005 14:18 EDT
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aww!
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: July 21, 2005 11:39 EDT
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Great Chappie! That was wonderful! Belle needed spoiling... putting up with Baka Kich has to be hard work! He said it! He said it! Good! Myabe she'll realize he's not a total Baka... Just afraid of his feelings! Another beautiful chapter!
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Title: Chapter 47
Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 11:02 EDT
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Awww. Kich can be real sweet when he wants to be. This was a great chapter in developing their relationship and showing Belle that Kich can be nice. I like Chapter 46, too. Bumps, ha!
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Reviewed By: oboroko On: July 21, 2005 07:46 EDT
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That was SWEET darling! How absolutely marvelous! I was smiling through the whole chapter (: I adore your stories sue! Keep the joy going ;)
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 23:58 EDT
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Yeah! Hentai goodness! That was great! OH! That was just wonderful! Such a good topper to my day! Poor Kich... can you say cold shower? That was fabulous! Once again... Gin was a fabulous amusement! "bumps" "pee-pee" That was priceless! Loved the chappie! Thanks for sharing with us! C
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: July 20, 2005 20:49 EDT
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lol! this chapter should be called "bumps"... b/c both couples talked about/saw boobs! :P man... kich. he's a trooper. he's been obsessed w/ the girls for awhile now, but he didn't do it! didnt make a move! good man! if you would have, you're right, you may have skrewed stuff up big time! i must know what happened to belles mom! must!
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Reviewed By: EAP On: July 20, 2005 20:37 EDT
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Yay, a boob chapter! Very nicely done, I was histarical by the end there - always proof of a job well done. I just loved Kich's reaction to Belle's, uh, bumps...*facedesk*. Thanks so much for updating!
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 19:50 EDT
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I wonder where Kich is taking Belle to. Hmm....
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Reviewed By: Jesachi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 19:36 EDT
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Wow... that was overly amusing!!! And I love that Gin references Cain to her father... I have a prediction though... okay, so right, all rumors have a basis of truth... did... did Cain try to do that marking thing with Isabelle? The one that Kichiro modernized for Toga/Sierra and Ryo/Nez? From your forshadowing, that is what it sounds like... also... I have a comment... I just finished re-reading Chronicles (I can't get enough of it!) And I noticed the huge difference bewteen you writing that one and all the fics that you wrote after it, especially looking back now at what Meta was like. I can really see what the load of flamers have done to you... or maybe it's just me? I don't mean to be offensive or anything, it just seems like you were a lot happier writing Chronicles than you are writing the fics after that... tell me that it's just my imagination, because I don't want to see an aspiring writer like you dissolve into... *insert name of something here* because of what people think. You don't deserve it; I think you are a great author and I enjoy your works immensely and I know many other people who do too. IDK... just, in Chronicles, you seemed more... excited when you answered your reviews... now, it seems like your heart isn't in it anymore... like you dread opening your reviews now? I hope not... but then... people are cruel... Your writing hasn't changed at all... still hooked to it like a drug!! Keep it up!! (This looks like it's going to be your longest Purity yet!) |
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