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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 14:02 EDT
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wow things are getting tense with gin and cain...that moment with gin and that photo of isabelle and cain was just so sad : ( and with kich and belle heh its interesting that kich was willing to eat all that "sickening" food for belle's smile : ) and the song on that CD was so sweet! but then kich kept saying how it was just nothing...i was thinking "idiot" hah dang sue this story is just amazing and belle's thoughts on her father and losing him...i cant wait or imagine how things will end up for these couples
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Reviewed By: Phalon On: July 14, 2005 13:58 EDT
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Okay the first part of the story was very very sad. I really liked how you did this, stumbling upon an old photo and realization coming into view. Then Cain trying to explain stuff while Gin has sort of already made up her mind in a very sad realization. I reawlly did like the angst of part one of Confessions and will happy to read the next chapter. Finally Belle is coming around and obvious is into the Kich and he's trying so hard. I wonder what demons he's having to deal with but i'm sure you'll fill us in on that. I love the cd scene, it's very sweet. I'm glad about how it ended that he'll sacrifice his stomach for her happiness. LOL. Great job, please continue!
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Title: aww
Reviewed By: Phalon On: July 14, 2005 13:37 EDT
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What Kich will do to be with Belle is amazing. I'm sure delicate stomach isn't much caring for the food. I think I share Kich's pain when it comes to amusement parks. I loved the 'scary ride' scene lol. It was awesome and I can't wait for more memorable scenes from this.
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: July 14, 2005 13:18 EDT
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cool chapter.
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Title: Chapter 41
Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 13:10 EDT
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Good chapter. A bit of angst, some comedy. Poor Gin. I wonder whether any of the other family members are going to find out about her relationship problems, specifically Inuyasha. I just want to a fight between Inuyasha and Cain. I didn't know Kich could sing. I thought he was a pianist. By the way, does Belle know Kich can play the piano? Can't wait for part two and to see what else happens.
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Reviewed By: Suze - nsi On: July 14, 2005 12:05 EDT
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*sniffle* Poor Gin!!!! Awwwwrrr....I hope Cain reassures her soon, 'cause I hate that she's feeling so bad. :( As for Belle n' Kich - yea! And, yea! I got one right - I knew he'd recorded a song for her. I've done that at those little booths before and it's a lot of fun. :)
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 11:04 EDT
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Hey, Sue! Thank you for answering my slightly annoying question! I am officially un-confused! Thank you. I loved that last chapter, by the way. Poor Gin. She needs a hug. Oh no! Pierre still has her number, doesn't he? Oh no! Or will it be a good thing? Sue, you're sure to surprise the bejeezus out of us! You have before! XOXO!!! ~pagan_sedjou P.S. I'm glad the answer wasn't subtitles... a la Austin Powers in Goldmember. That would be just too funny.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova...*sighs* On: July 14, 2005 11:03 EDT
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awww. what a sweet gift. poor gin.. great chapter. sad and happy all in one. wow. ^_^ update asap, please. ja ne, Zirra
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Title: another thing
Reviewed By: MIzbum2u(NLI) On: July 14, 2005 09:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
in the previous chapter, the mini CD... does he say something? or is it like... hm... how would i put it. Would he confess his feelings to her on there? ^-^ just a thought... anyways... good job again! i read it again! lol ~hien
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: Mizbum2u(NLI) On: July 14, 2005 09:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OoOoOoh... wow this is interesting! LOL love it! update soon please!(tomorrow) YEY! i'l try my best to keep on reviewing okay? byeeee! ^-^ ~hien
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Reviewed By: hanyouwings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 04:24 EDT
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Lol!!! I love this story!! Speaking of which, I had a rather amusing thought today. I imagined Sesshomaru, Inuyasha, and Cain pulling a Toga, Ryo, and Kich with the whole depancing thing...ummmm...can you picture that? Cain holding Sesshomaru's arms while Inuyasha pulls Sesshy's pants down...good lord...I really don't think Cain's stripes could compete with that. Hee...hee...hee...it makes me have this mental image of Sesshomaru doing a dance to 'I'm too sexy'.....0_0.....that's just disturbing...
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 01:01 EDT
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That was great! I take it... Kich sings in the CD? I know from earlier chappies he plays the piano... Do we take it he sings too? Another fab chappie! Poor Kich... Cotton Candy vomit... YUCK! C
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: July 13, 2005 22:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You never cease to amaze me. You chapters are always excellent. I have one question its not related to this story or any stories you have made so far. Are you ever going to create an FullMetal Alchemist story?
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Title: Kawai!!!!!!
Reviewed By: silver_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Su, I love you!!! This was a great chapter, but one question...when are you going to tell us what happened to Isabella? It's driving me crazy just trying to figure it out...so much that I completely forgot about my Astronomy test thinking about it. Being this talented has to be sin somewhere. But never mind my ranting, I'm just so GLAD there is someone like you online. God speed with those chapters, Please, Pretty Please...with me on top!!. ^_- lol
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: July 13, 2005 20:51 EDT
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yey!! i loved it! it was great! so sweet! and i want to know what was on the cd!!! also, in the last chapter... did gin rip cain's shirt she gave him? just wondering... i could have gotten the dates wrong... anyhow, yeah. poor guy. he threw up! :P
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