| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Title: *sticks head in freezer to cool flaming cheeks*
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 13:14 EDT
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What a scorcher! I was all, "Whoohoo! Go Cain!" when he all but pounced on her. It's starting to look like they'll be addressing the "Isabelle" question soon. I'm wondering if Cain is only fooling himself with Belle's need of him as the reason he didn't follow his mate, the real reason being he didn't want to. So subconsciously he justified it, promising himself; "I'll do it later..." -- Oh, I have no doubt that he would keep his promise, he has too much integrity not to. But maybe he needs to reexamine the whole thing. -- Then again, I could be shooting in the dark here...you've been very secretive about the particulars there Sue. So you'll keep weaving and I'll keep reading, '...and a grand time was had by all!'
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 12:36 EDT
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:) That was very nice
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Reviewed By: Darksquire(not logged in) On: July 12, 2005 12:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... those chapters were awesome! I love the intensity between Cain and Gin. Sorry I havn't reveiwed in a while but I have been on vacation. I want to take this opportunity to tell you just how great of a writer you are. Most of the time when I read fan fictions they are enjoyable stories but they do not have the same depth as yours do. Your stories have very deep emotion and very realistic charachters even though they are demons. It takes a very powerful writer to make a story as deep, intense, and hilarious at the same time as your stories are. I greatly appreciate your putting your stories out here on the internet so that we can read them and enjoy them. ~Darksquire
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 12:02 EDT
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Hi! Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. Let me just tell you... those last few chapters are amazing! I can't wait until Belle begins her defense lessons. Kichiro will be at the end of his rope! Oh, and Chapter 40, honey! You just made the South a few degrees warmer. Kudos to Sue! That last one was intense... and very nicely written. Your fanfic puts a smile on the face of this overworked and underpaid certified nursing assistant! It helps me relax before I go into work, too! Love ya, Sue! XOXO!!! ~pagan_sedjou
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova( me--->O.O) On: July 12, 2005 11:25 EDT
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oh wow that was close.. such a great story.. awsome chapter, just wonderful. can't wait for more. i love your stories. Im starting to read Metamorphosis. so far it's great. update this asap, please. i love your Purity stories. Ja ne, Zirra
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Geminia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 11:18 EDT
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Cannot really comment as I have not even read the chappie yet and have been awake for more than 48 hrs with only 4 hrs of sleep :D I am nuts! Anyways, I am totally mourning over this story right now because I am going to be Suericless (is that a word?) for three weeks :'( I am going to miss all your updates and wacky comments and craziness and I am so ready to die of fatigue right now.... Who knows maybe I will be able to get an internet connection and drop in a comment :D Doubt though :( that's what happens when you go to the middle of no where for college-resume recommendations AHH!! I am so dead and crazy! And now to actually comment on your work, love as always and saw my fav. couple mentioned so I am good and hopefully i can make 8 pgs last 3 weeks....who am i kidding? Well, I don't go until tomorrow so hopefull u'll update before I leave tomorrow and I can get another couple of pages? *wink, wink* Have an awesome time! Gemini
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 11:17 EDT
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does that mean that cain moved on? since him and gin were about to...yeaaa...hah! wow very touching on cain's part to not have her first time be when she was drunk heh if belle didnt call?...yeaaa...heh but its good to read how close those two have become now :D
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: mizbum2u(NLI) On: July 12, 2005 10:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!! i just love your stories. i know i haven't reviewed but i have emailed you... lol even if this is original, i still love it! update again soon(im guessing it'll be tomorrow) YEY!! i'll be reading. i still cant get over the fact that you type 150+ wpm. i cant even do half of that... aw man! ~hien ^-^
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: July 12, 2005 09:38 EDT
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Woo hoo. Back from Japan and with so many wonderful chapters to read. Thank you! This story is progressing beautifully. I especially like the Belle/Kich pairing. Those two hotheads are made for each other.
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Title: Chapter 39
Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 02:03 EDT
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A drunken Gin, I knew it would happen soon but she's comical when she's drunk. They do need a date cause that was a sucky date. Happy belated one year anniversary!
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: July 11, 2005 19:33 EDT
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aww! she's so cute! and sad! that was a good chapter! cain's an ass! lol... he'd better make it up to her soon! they need a real date! also: lol! ferret youki! hahaha!! cracks me up... ;) i hope he comes back in again to go after her, cause cain could kick his ass... and that'd be fun...muhahaha...
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Title: Review that would not go
Reviewed By: Jason C On: July 11, 2005 15:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello. I see that you have written another great chapter to this growing series. Its great. Everytime I check for an update by you and find one I get all... whats the word Im thinking of. I guess it could be giddy but Im not to sure of myself. I just cant help but laugh or smile or somethting. I especialy like those little odd moments that Gin has. Like in this chapter when she says "Sure, but . . . I wanted my first time to be with you." That just cracked me up. As you can probaly see Im rabbling that is not on purpose. Just a little tired is all. So good night or should I say good morning for me HAHA
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Title: Question
Reviewed By: rachainu. On: July 11, 2005 14:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The chapter was great as usual. I always love the chapters. But I just have a few questions for you that are bugging me. How do you pronounce Gin and Zelig? And how tall are Gin, Kichiro, Belle, and Cain? I was just wondering how tall Gin is to Cain in comparison and the same for Belle and Kichiro. Oh yeah, and I was thinking about Cain's hair and wondering just how long it was, and Gin, Kichiro, and Belle's, too. Oh, and I know it's late, but happy one year anniversary for posting fanfiction! Well, great chapter as always, please answer my questions, bye!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 13:14 EDT
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Awww...poor tipsy Gin. I'm glad that Cain feels like a heel. His thoughtless words belie his own feelings and were undeserved. I'm sure he'll make it up to her, but it's hard to take back what's been said. She may start re-thinking about how much time she spends with him if he can't fix it quick. On the lighter side; I think that there were a few male casualties that evening from Gin's casual contact, but that grateful kiss to the pen's owner sure set her dog growling. LOL -- Great chapter
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 19:34 EDT
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My theory continues to hold. Whenever anything extremely interesting happens with one couple, the next chapter will be all about the other couple. Cain kisses Gin again? Next chapter is all Belle and Kich. A slightly inebriated Kich reveals at least part of his feelings to Belle in the midst of mild groping and then asks her out on a date? Next chapter is all Gin and Cain. Not sure what my point is in making this observation. I guess I just want to say "I'M ON TO YOU!!!" and cackle with unwarranted pride or something (partly so I can know just what a cackle of pride would sound like).
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