| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: yashafan18 On: July 20, 2005 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i have to say is kich and cain are bad and i can't wait till gin's lunch with perre and i think that maybe cain did kill his mate but it wasn't his fault i hope things get happier and i wonder what kich is doing with the 3 days he has control over belle. to cain and kich...perverts j/k
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Title: Chapter 46 review
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: July 20, 2005 14:28 CDT
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cool chapter
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Reviewed By: sesshy's gurl5561 On: July 20, 2005 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would've given you a hundred out of ten but they don't have a hundred...anyways! i love your fic!!! just wish that youcould update faster...i was wondering..r u really korean? cuz i am too. UPDATE!!!!^ ^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 13:12 CDT
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Thank you very much for keeping him in your prayers, I'll be sure to tell you how it goes as well. Wow, I really thought Kich would have done something then; I was really surprised when he walked away. And poor Gin, cast aside for a stomach; she might want to think twice about blushing now...but then again, she can use that to her advantage, somehow. Well, I guess I'll find out when I read the next chapters on Sunday...see ya Monday!! Thank you again to you and your betas
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 12:14 CDT
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Each chapter you write is like a new window into their world and I can't wait for more.
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Title: Another Classic Line
Reviewed By: futekioosha(not signed in MMO is acting up) On: July 20, 2005 12:09 CDT
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I'm here, you know I am...and this time I couldn't resist the comment...the "pee-pee" comments classic! LMAO! You are just too frigging witty for your own good! Anyways, gotta love the Belle/ Kich scene too. Belle sure put a number on Kich, I love how she handles him. Belles character is so refreshing, because she has so many layers, not many authors can make a person with her outward personality so endearing, but you've done it so much depth. I feel like I have found a kindred spirit in her :) I hope that all is well w/ ya! Thanks for the giggle fits and new friends ~frankie
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 12:07 CDT
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bumps?! lol i was cracking up with cain and gin's convo, and omg with kich and belle on the balcony must've been hard for kich...hmm im interested to read about how the weekend for both will go, cain painting gin, and belle and kich with their 3 day bet
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Title: I'm in love!
Reviewed By: onlylorelei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 11:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit that I had gotten out of the habit of reading fanfiction, mainly because of how difficult it is to find any diamonds in the rough when it comes to browsing. I saw far too many summaries consisting of "I'm so bad at summaries, just read!" far too much bad grammer, etc. My friend Adam apparently never gave up hope, however, and after listening to him rave about your Purity stories for 2 weeks, I caved and read the first. That was 5 days ago. I've now read all of them and find myself clamoring for Justification's conclusion. Between you and Harry Potter, I am not getting much done these days. Anyhow, I just wanted to comment of your skill and my enjoyment in it and add my voice to the chorus (as I'm sure it is) which begs you daily to continue. You're a talented writer, and you do great justice to the Inuyasha fandom. I can't wait to finish Justification and get started reading your other works!
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Reviewed By: Hanah On: July 20, 2005 11:26 CDT
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Damn...with me, my parents got me a sex ed book, then left me in my room for a few hours. Of course, I was too embarrassed to ask questions...Until I got older that is..and then my parents were quite frank...anyways...great chapter, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Darksquire (not logged in) On: July 20, 2005 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't reviewd in a while. Vacation and then Harry Potter coming out. Anyway these chapters were great! I can't wait to see what Kich makes Belle do over the weekend. And Cain is going to paint Gin? Things are progressing quite well. I love it.
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Title: Ch46
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 09:36 CDT
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Bwahahaha! That was just hilarious! Its nice seeing a lighter-hearted chapter compared to the serious ones you've been giving us lately. Its obvious that your skill and talent shine through on both ends of the spectrum. More than half this chapter I was laughing for one reason or another. First, comparing Cain(?!?) to a pathetically sorrowful lost little puppy??? I don't know if it was meant to be funny, but the mental imgage was hilarious. Next up on the menu, Kich walked in on Belle tanning...topless. The poor guy, that probably did something to his head...he's just gonna have to be more cautious around her now, I think. The first surprise was her reaction (or lack thereof) to Kich. Then, it was her going on like nothing out of the ordinary was happening...going so far to drip more oil on herself?!? Poor, poor Kich =P. Then finally, human (err, hanyou?) anatomy with Gin and Cain. Gerat stuff you got here Sue, keep it up! God bless! d('')b
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Reviewed By: oboroko On: July 20, 2005 08:37 CDT
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OH MY GOD. That was so hilarious I almost peed in my pants. I've been reading your purity series religiously everyday, and its such a perk up for the day. The part where Cain was talking about his pee-pee, and the handfuls, absolutely hilarious! The way you phrase and detail out each person's character, and the diction used is very commendable. I always have a blast reading all your stories. Do have a shot at writing a book one day - i'm sure it will be very well received.
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Reviewed By: KikyoKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 23:20 CDT
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This maybe one of the best stories yet. Keep up the wonderful work. If it wasn't for you myself and my coworker would not have some thing else talk about. Sueric you are a true bard.
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Reviewed By: mirokusangelgurl59 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job sue!!!! i still want to find out what happens with the bet and the lunch.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: July 19, 2005 19:45 CDT
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Wow, that was kind of creepy. I've had my suspitions with all your little clues about how Belle's mom died, but hearing about it like that was a bit scary. Now I'm thinking of why Cain would do that. And I thought that the gift for Kelly was really sweet, and really well written. Anyway, another great chapter, I was so plaesed to see an update. I hope you can write more soon!
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