| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cynthia Finnegan On: July 28, 2005 14:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Took me a bit to catch up, but it was worth it!
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Reviewed By: toyasgurl On: July 28, 2005 14:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa! oh...my... *whimpers* why the heck aren't there real kich's in the world?!?!?!?!?!?!? i really really would like my own kichiro!!!!
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 13:06 EDT
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I don't think there are words to describe how wonderful it felt to simply read that chapter! Wow.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 12:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice i can berly wate for the next one please up date soon. i can berly beleve how good of a wrighter you are.... i wish i was half as good as you are
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 12:26 EDT
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wow sue...just wow! What have yooooouuuuu been doin'????? This chapter was beautiful, as were the many before it. One couple down....although I'm sure everything won't be smooth sailing from now on, it's still nice that Belle and Kich have realized that they are mates. I wonder what Cain will think of this...I know that you have more goodness in store for us. So I'll just sit back and wait for it to come. I really can't wait to see what else you have planned for us. Thanks for the heat wave. ~frankie
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Title: Having a little time to review youppi!
Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 12:05 EDT
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Sorry for not reviewing for so long. Between giving birth to a baby girl, breastfeeding and learning to be a mom... Doing all that needs to be done (washing and cleaning and sleeping and... you know the rest I'm sure ^_^), reviewing with one hand seemed too hard to do. I bow to your beta Sari15 for doing it all (tell her for me please!) Still loving the Purity series and Desideratum (you do terrorize them in it ~_^) My question is: If Kich and Bell mate, will they have a baby right there? I mean a youkai & a human = when the youkai decide to have a pup right? And a hanyou & human = on their human nights and then 14 days later (since the moon as a cicle of 28 days). But hanyou & hanyou, will you keep with your calendar like for a hanyou & human? Or can they have a child (or pup) when the two of them want it? Have to go, reality's coming back. Someone is hungry and needs a diaper change! MouF
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Reviewed By: GiNnY On: July 28, 2005 12:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful stoy youve come up whith!! jajaja.. lemme guess.. sesshomaru will notice about ghin and cain's relationship, in fact i think he alredy knows and he wil kinda threaten cain whith what happened to tyoga... well thats what i think but you are the author... soooo.... anyway, the story is really good, all caracters are greatand i really like it hope your writting spirit keeps up, dont ever let anyone dampen your author spirit cuz u are too good..... ..... ..... .. waiting eagerlt 4 next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: July 28, 2005 11:50 EDT
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O.o! That was fabulous! *blinks* oh my! Yeah for Belle! She's caught on... poor baby though, so worried about her daddy... Now if her daddy would just accept that Gin was meant to be. *sigh* Simply fabulous... ah! That was sooooo worth the wait! C
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 11:33 EDT
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wow..that was just a WOW chapter, belle and kich finally...but their not mates yet i see, i like how kich understands how belle feels about her father, and wouldnt mind waiting to become mates, and an army of pups? lol, but omg i didnt even think that kich would become tai-youkai in place of cain, it never occured to me, hmm i suppose i can see kich as that, and belle's crests were lavender? i thought it would be teal like her father's, but anyways thats sweet how its the color of kichiro's crests, like she was "born" that way, as kich says, hah and i was wondering how cain would react to belle choosing kich, thats something im looking forward to see, and everyone else's reaction to gin and cain,anyways let me stop writing...wonderful chapter
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Title: Ch52
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 11:05 EDT
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I don't think my current vocabulary contains the words necessary to describe how...beautiful...this chapter was. Well, maybe one word. Perfect. And that's all I'm gonna say. d('')b
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Title: =)
Reviewed By: Inuyashas_wishing_star [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 10:40 EDT
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It was.... wow..... I don't really know what to say. It was Beautiful, romantic, hot, sweet,the list just goes on. If I could sum it up in one word it would be PERFECT!
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Reviewed By: Ladyblade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 10:27 EDT
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Fluff! that was so sweet
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Reviewed By: ima9e On: July 28, 2005 07:08 EDT
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tehehe, i was right? lolz. i tot this chapter's really unique, esp when kich and belle decide to be mates. it's rather new eh? both of them seems so rational and 'planned'. kinda different from the rest of the Purity series. kich was so caring, abt not having pups first. hm...wonder how they will continue their relationship in the future chapters. and i really wonder how cain will react to this news. speaking of cain, will he let go of his past and really accept Gin? as usual, great chapter!
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 06:34 EDT
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That was hot and so sweet! I'm speechless because it's so sweet!!! :)
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr1956 On: July 28, 2005 05:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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