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Reviewed By: Yami Tenshi Kensan On: August 04, 2005 01:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHA! Typical guys. Uh well. At least his heart is in the right place. Although that thing about being 17...not a good thig to bring up. Still obsessed with of your stories (not just this one but many other as well). My doctor said we'd work on it during my next session. Ha ft lot of good that will do. Okay now i'm just rambling so to spare you any more pain of having to read this terrible review i will stop.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 22:30 EDT
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lol, i can honestly say that the end of this last chapter had me rolling. ryo proclaiming to be the smart twin did it. i was in a giggle fit for nearly ten minutes. that was to perfect! man, and kich thought he was going to have a civil conversation with ryo but no, the entire gang minue the folks were there. that's perfect! as always, very well done. hope kich can pull the stick out of his butt to realize what he did and then find the right words to tell belle what he really meant. god i love the characters you created. their so much fun to read about! great job, Sue, as always.
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Reviewed By: Terrasina Dragonwagon, not signed in as usual On: August 03, 2005 20:50 EDT
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I do so love having lots of chapters to read. ...Awww, poor Kich. I can't help but feel sorry for him, even though I agree with Belle that he's being a big fat baka. The fact that he could at least tell his family (or some of it, at least) that she's going to be his mate has to be a good sign. ...All right, I'm done. Looking very forward to the next chapter!
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Title: The other Kichiro
Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 19:58 EDT
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Wow...the famed baka gene has made a spectacular return. Not only is he not wanting to touch her, his stupid mouth is getting away with him. Did he really bring up the fact that she was just 17??? *smacks the baka* Kich sure has a lot to learn about being with an American girl...they like their attention. I love the interaction with his family at the end, the fact that RYO suddenly is the 'smart' twin...well...for once. LOL Hopefully Kich will be able to turn this around in his favor...he needs to...he done BAD this time. But the REAL question I have.... Why is RYO taking COOKING CLASSES???????
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Reviewed By: inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: August 03, 2005 17:58 EDT
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ROFLMA "Cause I'm the smart twin" Ha! That was good... real good! Augh... Kich... Baka! Time to go back with his tail between his legs? LOL. Poor Cain... I suspect there have been a lot of sleepless nights! Great Chappie! Thanks for sharing with us... That was a great way to brighten my day! C
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 17:41 EDT
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Yep, Kich...you sure did. But it's fixable...hopefully. Aww, poor Cain didn't get any sleep because of a squirming Gin lol. I think he's grouchy because of those generals coming over as well.
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 16:17 EDT
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oh wow what fight that was between kich and belle, hopefully he'll fix it, and hm is there something behind the reasons for ryo's cooking classes, since its randomly popping up in the story, just wondering...and hah poor cain
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 12:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope he fixes it, before her father finds out and decides to 'fix' him. He is inuyhanyou afterall.
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Reviewed By: kiaraecko On: August 03, 2005 12:29 EDT
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hey great chapter!! but could you give the specific wed address for where you get your names plz and thank you !
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Title: geeezzz
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 12:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geeezzzzz what a yahoo kich can be. a real snob. Mr Im so famous is going to realize that princess isnt interested in his money or jewelry, just him. Im glad that ryo jarred kich's mind to show him what an ass he was to be rationalizing why he shouldn't be affectionate with belle in public. I'd say that even though Belle is just 17, she is more mature emotionally in many ways than Kich is. Looks like Kich really does have some issues to work out. As always Sue, love your stories and thanks for writing them. J
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Reviewed By: xuaeved On: August 03, 2005 12:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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yay! I like the whole family! I didn't know I could review on here.. I like everything so far!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr1956 On: August 03, 2005 11:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Chapter 56
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: August 03, 2005 11:45 EDT
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cool chapter
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Reviewed By: Bandit the Army Brat On: August 03, 2005 10:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Sue!!!!! Hope your well.Love the new chapter.It is great.Rating on enjoyment in 1 to 10 rating I give it a 30.I just LOVE it!! See ya ^_~!! Your Friend Bandit_the_Army_Brat
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Reviewed By: saraiyah [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 09:54 EDT
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you fic is amazing, i love your caracter developement between the two pairings... speaking of which, do you have a favourite couple in this fic??
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