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Reviewed By: leyley On: August 01, 2005 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo, a pleasure as always to read your stories. I have been away for vacation and I am catching up. Please Inuyasha is nothing more than a very over protective father, Heck I had one of those when I was younger. I did not have a date until I was 18, then dad scared them away.
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Reviewed By: IKMS [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 19:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way the two story lines are going. That's all. Can't wait to read more chapters!
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Title: Ch54
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 15:50 EDT
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Lol, damn that e-mail bug...meh, in any case, loved the chapter! Belle's reluctance to train with Kichiro reminds me of how Inuyasha reacted when he found out he had to hurt Kagome to mark her. They both were extremely reluctant to cause even the slightest amount of pain to their mates, even if they were doing it for a good cause/reason. Kichiro's reaction to Belle's new piece of jewelry was hilarious. Belle must have been one hell of a seductress to get out of that one... At least Kich and Belle seem to be smoothing over their relationship. Poor Cain, the decisions he has to make are just horrible. That's the kind of situation no one should be in. I just hope he realizes how much pain he's causing Gin though. They've already done some..."stuff " (which was beatiful, btw!), and that makes Gin all the more attached to him. He's dug himself a hole way too deep for him to get out of, and he doesn't even realise it...oh boy, wonder how this 'ill turn out! Awesome! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Catnel (not signed in) On: August 01, 2005 14:25 EDT
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As always you make me happy to read your work. I cannot wait to see how everything falls into place. But I will wait, I'm a patient one.
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Title: all around the mullberry bush...
Reviewed By: MarsMarmalade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 13:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
things just keep pilling up for your characters don't they? can't wait for the climaxes to finally pop! What would inu-chan think of his baby girl right now....? can't wait to see what happens next and hopefully mm.org will straighten out it's update alerts soon. You've an amaing writting talent and i hope you don't let other's stupidity muffle those excellent story creating brains of yours. best wishes MarsMalmalade
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Title: Absolutely Wonderful
Reviewed By: Priestess Skye *nsi* On: August 01, 2005 12:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to drop a line and tell you how much I love this story. I come home from work excited everyday knowing there's more than likely going to be a new chapter up. I'm completely enthralled. I guess a few bad egg readers get in there every now and again, and I understand how upsetting that is. Please just know that the majority of us are absolutely in love with this fic and you're writing. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr1956 On: August 01, 2005 11:10 EDT
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Sue, Just love your story, all of then that is. Just cant figure out why Im not getting any email alerts to tell me when you update. I have to almost fight with IE and click back and forth on different chapters till I can see the new one you put up. I dunno, maybe its my POS Gateway thats the problem. Ah well, thanks for another great chapter. Cant wait for tomorrows. ^.^
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: August 01, 2005 11:05 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg great chapter. I loved it, but, one question who said Inu-Yasha is abusive? Cause I think they way you've writen this and the way Inu-yasha act is great and very true to life. You are talking to the only girl of the family who has had date been scared away by my brother and dad. They don't think any guy is good enough and have threatened a few that they really didn't like. And all that is because they love me and want the best its not abusive. grrrr. Just don't listen to those stupid people who only know how to find (what they think are) flaws and write flames. I really love your story (all of them) your stories have been a great joy and have given me a much need break from my life which right now is less then joyful. I wish I could make all those flamers leave you alone your a great writer and you don't deserve this treatment. (Oh I know I give you my flame-thrower go ahead have at them just wipe off any blood before you give it back. lol) Hope I made you feel better and maybe made you laugh. For all you've done for me its the lest I can do. Hope you feel good now.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr1956 On: August 01, 2005 10:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Amazing...
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 08:20 EDT
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Your stories just keep getting better and better. *totally jealous* And MM.org is still aggravating me. SEND ME MY EMAILS! I was suprised when Belle freaked out with the training. I thought she was tougher than that, but when I think about trying to fight with my husband...Yeah...I don't think I could do it either. And I can't wait to find out what this whole deal with Cain is. He's still such a mystery for me! I'm rambling. Sorry! Love your work as always! ~Teh Rose!
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Title: Age Facts
Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 05:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In one of your reviews you mentioned that Inu was around 58 years old. There's solid proof that Inu was 150 years old (not counting the 50 years stuck to a tree) near the end of the series. The proof was in the third Inu movie (which falls just after episode 132, there was even a pause for it so people could go and see it before the show continued) in that they said Inu was born 700 years before Kagome's time, then you cut out 500 years from the well, and you're left with 200 years, cut out another 50 years from the tree, and you're left with just 150 years. Just thought I'd share that little bit of Inu trivia you get from watching semi legal subs instead of Viz's (increadibly HORRIBLE) dubs.
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Reviewed By: crolynx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are one of those Authors (notice the capital A) that I love to read. I rated you at a 9, because as great and wonderful as you stories are there is always ways to improve your writing. Granted I can't find any errors in your work. I'm just a humble military member. And for the idiot that says Inuyasha is and abusive father,... well they can go to hell. He's just like most fathers. Hell I'm an older brother and I'm just like Ryo and Kich when it comes to my little sisters. No one but no one gets to them unless they go through me then my Dad. And it's hard to do that. Being in the military gives you many friends all over the world. So if I ain't there someone is in my stead, y'know? Anyways, so when is Cain gonna get over the promise his youkai says he didn't make? I should think he'd know to listen to his youkai by now. I hope Gin gets him soon. And well I think Kich and Belle have finally gotten quite a good bit taken care of. FINALLY!!!! Well gotta go. Ja Ne Crolynx ;p
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 00:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the most aspiring writer I have ever come across. Your chapters appear almost daily and bring quite a pick me up for my day to start. This fanfic has me utterly in awe. It has me gasping and feeling heartwarming each and every chapter that you put out. It brings a smile to my face unmatched by anything else. All of your stories have been unique and creative in one way or another. I do like all of them. I was on the edge of my seat on most of them until it came to the ending. My heart thumps with joy and you truly are inspiring. Keep up the good work and writing. I await your next update. Thank you so much.
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Reviewed By: Yami Tenshi Kensan On: July 31, 2005 23:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am completely nd utterly obssessed with this fanfic. I've been reading it for about three months and everday i get more and more hooked. I decided that posting an review might help inspire you and i wanted to say that anyone who has flamed you doesn't know what they are talking about. You help me get through everything i'm going to. Your stories always pick me up. Thank you soooo much for writing them!
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Reviewed By: penguinbeak On: July 31, 2005 23:41 EDT
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Looks to me like starbuckscoffeecup was being deliberately provocative. Maybe they won't have any more 'fun' if you keep deleting their reviews.
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