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 Reviewed By: ZhaoYIng [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 26, 2005 02:37 EDT
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Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
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Your work is truely awesome Sue, but you shouldn't allow people's ignorace get to you. Keep writing for the people who love your stories and use the law against anyone that actually threatens you or your family violently. Keep up with these epic stories as they are one the few long fanfics i've read without an abundance of cliches, grammer errors, spelling mistakes, or loss of knowledge on punctuation.
 Title: Thankyou!!!!!
Reviewed By: hanyouwings [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 26, 2005 01:51 EDT
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Oh thank kami!!! I was so worried that something was wrong with my computer...like a virus or something because I wasn't recieving any of the email updates. I'm so happy that it is not just me and my computer isn't wacked up...cause I don't have the money to fix it!!! Thankyou, gives big hugs and kisses, thankyou, thankyou, thankyou!!!!!!!
 Title: Lisa C
Reviewed By: Lisa C [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 25, 2005 23:51 EDT
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Wow...is right.
 Reviewed By: KikyoKitten [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 25, 2005 23:35 EDT
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Is it hot in here or do I still have a fever from my illness? That was one of the best chapters yet.
 Reviewed By: GiNnY  On: July 25, 2005 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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...Wow..., plain and simply spectacular!
 Reviewed By: Rawben..  On: July 25, 2005 22:48 EDT
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holy shit! 1000+ reviews?? daaaaamn girly! yey for the chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! :O it was great! but damnit cain! just give up! you frekkin need her! lol... also, i was thinkin... what about belle's crests? i thought they were on her chest, but i dont remember reading about them when kich saw her... are they... elsewhere? :O lol... ;) yey for the weekdays! when sueric posts!
 Reviewed By: Cynbad146  On: July 25, 2005 22:44 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Some interesting thoughts that I want to share: I had cut back on some of my reviews lately, because it seemed to me that you might get tired of just hearing how much I enjoyed the story; it is so cliche when I repeat myself over and over. Also, I sometimes worry that authors (especially the more talented and experienced ones) like to hear about plot holes or grammar errors, etc., food for deep thoughts about the story lines. I am just a person who reads a large amount of stories/educated, but not a professional. However, I want to say how you have such a wonderful gift of showing emotions and feelings when your characters get intimate or close in some fashion. It's a real gift. It's not the lemon, but what you write into the lemon. I thought that this was one of the most beautiful that you have ever written. Cynbad146
 Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 25, 2005 21:10 EDT
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Simply amazing. Once again you've managed to wrap up the sizzle with the infinitely-more-important emotions. Cain never stood a chance at resisting Gin, not when she fits so perfectly into his life; like that missing puzzle piece that completes the picture. And yet, as happy and optomisitic as she is, I am left feeling sad. Like Kagome at odds with Kikyou, history is repeating itself and Gin is having to contend with a ghost. She doesn't even have the benefit of knowing their story like her mother did, and how can you counter something that is an enigma? What words or actions do you choose when you don't understand? So, she's left to fumble and she knows it. - Wonderful.
 Title: Purity 4, Ch 49
Reviewed By: kappei_lover [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 25, 2005 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very, very beautiful! It's so wonderful to see Cain tell Gin how beautiful she is to him. I think all girls want to be made to feel beautiful and desired and this chapter made me feel so happy for Gin. Your descriptions are so clear here that I could see the studio and her fairy dress in my mind. Also as in all the others chapters of Purity 4, it's very easy to follow the character's thoughts and actions. Very well written as usual!
 Reviewed By: EAP  On: July 25, 2005 19:43 EDT
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What a beautiful chapter. I think that whole scene with him painting her was...just amazing. And kind of bittersweet at the end, I think Cain's fighting a losing battle, now that Gin's going to actually try and make him want to live. Oh, and one more little thing: GO CAKE FAIRY!!!
 Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in)  On: July 25, 2005 17:19 EDT
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Wow..that was certainly an unexpected chapter. well worth the wait. curse mediaminer and their lack of update emails...such a pain. i thought it was just me, good to know im not the only one in the dark. very well writen chapter! i love this story anyways, but this chapter and the slight wait for it was a reminder of why i love the Purity series. Well Gin has realized the truth that Cain is her mate...now we just need Cain to get past the baka gene and listen to his youkai.(uggh...typical man thing..lol jk)Cant wait till the next chapter. hmmm....when will we find out the truth behind isabellas death i wonder? before i think of anymore questions..keep up the totally awesome work. Ja ne~ Darkflameangel (yeah...one of these days im gonna get signed in)
 Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 25, 2005 17:04 EDT
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Well then, Gin and Cain have now done no less than Toga did with Sierra and certainly a lot more than Ryo did with Nez when Toga and Ryo's youkai chose their mates. How Cain can not expect to be taking Gin with him if he chooses to die at this point escapes me. Silly man.
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 25, 2005 16:18 EDT
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WTG GIN!!!!! Now, what else shall the girl do before Cain is all hers...well not like he never was not hers when he came to Japan...that made sence right? Beautiful written lime...I love how you make the lemons and limes out to be something spiritual and romantic instead of all those pervs out there who just think about lust and sex. That's one of the only reasons why I read them, because you focus more on their emotions than what's actually going on...Ahh...the works of an awesome author!
 Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr1956  On: July 25, 2005 16:14 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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 Title: Hot damn!
Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 25, 2005 15:39 EDT
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I've been waiting for that, for them, for their love. You wrote it beautifully and I think she can do it. Gin can make Cain want to live because in truth, his youkai wants to live, but the dominant part of him, the stubborn as a mule on a hot summer day part, thinks he owes something to Isabelle. But the question is, will he listen to his youkai? Will he honestly acknowledge Gin as his mate like she has with her youkai about him? Or will he break her heart and leave her to become like Toga was without Sierra?
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