| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Title: Ch49
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 15:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful, beautiful chapter. I'm really at a loss for words. In my humble opinion, this chapter goes beyond the normal calibre of your work, which was already awesome to begin with. The raw outpouring of emotion from Cain and the sweet innocence of Gin, as you portray it here is simply amazing I really feel you outdid yourself here, awesome work. God bless, and keep it up. d('')b
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Reviewed By: inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: July 25, 2005 14:03 EDT
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What can I say? WOOF! WOOF! uh, yeah, that about covers it! lol. C
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Reviewed By: Ladyblade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 12:52 EDT
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Whew, glad to know i wasn't the only one with the update email problem. wow... such a beautiful, yet tearful chapter. Poor Gin. Sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile, my newborn keeps me so busy I have just enough free time to read the chapters I've missed lol. Also, I'm working on my own fanfics... and I have a question for you reading the "Monk-in-Pain" and "Fire rat haori" labels... I was wondering if I might have your permission to use them, with full credit to you of course...? If not, that's cool too... i've just been re-reading chronicles and find the terms hilarious... along with Kouga's "did you piss on her" comments lol anyways, great writing!
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: July 25, 2005 12:38 EDT
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Amazing.
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Title: Chapter 49
Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 12:37 EDT
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I haven't be getting update notifications either. The only reason I found out was because I get notifications from FanFiction.net too. This was a good chapter totally devoted to Gin and Cain. The emotion was conveyed nicely. Cain is getting himself into more trouble and sooner or later is going to end up hurting them both. By the way, I didn't get a chance to review CH. 48 but that was pretty good too. Kich was really romantic. You're an extremely talented write and set good standards for other to achieve.
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 11:43 EDT
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thats true i havent been recieving any email notifications...but anyways wonderful chapter, things seem to be getting serious with gin and cain, it was sad yet, romantic, cain still has his promise to isabelle and both him and gin want to be another, i cant imagine how things will end up with these couples
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: July 25, 2005 11:14 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW great chapter!!! I'm soo happy they finnaly got together... well kinda. Oh i hope things work out for them I just can't wait to read what happens next. Oh and thank you for the answer. Please update soon!!! THis chapter was sooo great.
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Reviewed By: ima9e On: July 25, 2005 08:45 EDT
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oh yes, you've finally updated! my god, the last chap you updated 's awesome! hm...just wanna know...is belle really getting defence lessons from kich?
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 21:46 EDT
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Johnny went through the surgery well and is now getting lots of rest...thank you again for the prayers....Aww...Kich is almost there, just a few more things to make her feel extra special huh? Poor Cain...sitting all alone...I bet he wants to rip Pierre to pieces.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 17:31 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhh i love this story i thank i like it a littel bit more tham the other puritys witch i had thought wasent posible but found out it was please up date so i will keep a look out for the next chapter
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Title: Purity 4
Reviewed By: kappei_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 23:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is absolutely wonderful! I love the friction between Belle and Kich! They fit so well together; they match each other. Gin and Cain really compliment each other too; Gin is naive and silly whereas Cain is aloof, shy and very knowledgeable. Your characters are as loveable as the ones Rumiko Takahashi created herself! I'm reading all of your work now! I've finished Purity 1, 2, 3 and am now caught up with 4. I'm now going back to review it all, sorry I didn't review all along because you deserve some serious praise! You are a beautiful writer. Your stories are full of mirth and life.
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Reviewed By: hotarumai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 18:07 EDT
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WOW!! awesome chapter!!!! keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: DragonHostile17 On: July 23, 2005 13:14 EDT
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-sweatdrop!- sigghhh, the things you young people talk about. Damn whippersnappers could cut that sexual tensionwith a hacksaw.
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Title: I know or think I know
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 12:29 EDT
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Hey Sue, sorry haven't been reviewing so much its just that I hate the whole sign in process. Anyway, I know or think I know what happened w/ Isabelle and I'm not telling. (shhh J don't say it) lol. okay okay enough of that stuff. Okay I love the chapter so cute and I love that Kich's sensitive side is showing through. the cain and gin thing so reminds me of inu and kag's relationship, how it blossomed romantically and inu's burned obligation to kikyo. I hope that doesn't offend you. I love how you bring out the suttle coinscences between the characters and the romantic friction. As always really great writing. Sue, I also want to thank you for being such a faithful and determined writer. Too many times I will start reading a story and for some reason the writer will get bored or upset and not finish the fic that they started. I know that from what you have already explained (not necessarily from boredom but for other reasons) that you had wanted to stop posting chapters on certain fics you have written. As difficult as it has been,you finished the fics. I wouldn't doubt that your determination to finish a task once you start it has turned out to be a good role model for many writers as well as for those of us who are not writers. I am not married or have children and I am amazed how, with all that you have on your plate in life that you can do all the stuff you do. I just needed to say thank you for the personal lessons your writing and attitude has given us all. I am 52(oh |
Reviewed By: EAP On: July 23, 2005 03:41 EDT
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Oh, I want Belle to be an Igor! That would fall nicely into place, wouldnt it? Great chapter, I loved the whole thing, and the carriage rides and the Opera...SO romantic...*sigh*....Excellent, excellent. Keep up the amazing work!
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