| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 13:47 EDT
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haha that bet just made things interesting...3 days of belle doing whatever kich wants...heh cant wait to see what happens next with that, but i think my favorite part of the chapter was that gin admitted to herself that she loved cain...but he still has that promise he owes to isabelle...so i suppose it might take a while for those two to get together huh?
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Title: Ch44
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 13:27 EDT
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Bwahahaha! That was beyond hilarious. Three whole days of Belle doing Kich's bidding. That is simply too funny! Belle got in over her head for sure this time, she should have figured out she didn't stand a snowball's chance in hell! Hmm...so Gin has finally figured out why she feels the way she does around Cain? Realizing what it is, and coming to terms with it are two entirely different things though - this could prove to be interesting. Looking back over the chapters, I remembered something - Kagome and Inuyasha are supposed to have another kid, right? Wonder how that will turn out... Anyways, awesome job! Your work and dedication never cease to amaze me. Keep it up! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Green Arrow On: July 18, 2005 12:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
3 days........this should prove to be VERY interesting. I BET you had fun writing that chapter......or chapters. Another excellent piece. Poor Gin. Angst angst angst.
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 12:08 EDT
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Oh more, definitely more!
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Reviewed By: Phalon On: July 18, 2005 11:39 EDT
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OMG you're friggin' brilliant! I love the whole bet scenerio between teh Kich and Belle and I find it ironic on the 'dog groomer'. :P It's just so very funny and interesting Belle got jealous and didn't even bother with the bet. LOL. I can't wait to see what Kich makes her do!!! Three whole days, damn. Cain and Gin and simply my favorites in this story. I find it extremely interesting that Cain can't sleep at night without Gin and this was kind of sad on their part. I just want to cry on the admiting she loves silently she loves him but is stopped by Cain's intrusion. *cries* This is a great chapter. Truely it is one of your angsty ones. Oh and I have a question: When is Kagome due to have her Pup? I reread Gin's Birthday and Kagome mentions puting the new pup on a leash and she pats her stomach. So... When is Gin's little brother or sister due? :D
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Reviewed By: Rhiara (not signed in) On: July 18, 2005 10:50 EDT
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Hahaha, how right you are about the caffeine thing. Actually I have decided my coffee benders probably aren't good, so I am on coffee strike. Which unfortunately has made me not only the most grumpy and colatile creature alive, but also has turned me into a chain tea drinker...muah. And oh dear God I have eaten so much icecream today it's just not funny... Connoiseur Chocolate Obsession how I love you... AAAAANYWHOO!!! Again, your authoress-ness, I am in complete and abject awe of your greatness. HOW CAN CAIN TORTURE GIN LIKE THAT!? I demand a refund...of free...internet...fanfiction...that I love and don't want a refund for... ummm... yeah... ANYWHOOO!!! Cain is being selfish but I understand how he can't give her up. She doesn't WANT to be given up...and he can't give her up himself because they're just fated for each other. Oh how I love a good fating. Now where did my Chockeby Road Truffles go... (Maybe the coffee was better... at least for my thighs... ó_O? ) And I am positively DROOLING with anticipation for the upcoming Bet (yes with Capital) between my favourite couple... *rubs hands together in glee* Although I'm sure you'll find a spectacular way to make them NOT get together and leave me both frustrated, unfulfilled, and yet somehow unable to be angry because it's just so good! Ah you paradox you! Or at least...it makes ME paradoxical...or perhaps ambivalent is a better word....hmmmm... GAH CONFUSED NOW!! (Do you think I should just go back to coffee?? heheh |
Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 10:41 EDT
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OOH...the whole weekend...should be intresting. Aww...Gin's finally realizing it, or just now admitting, that she loves him...now all she has to do is convince him not to leave her, should be easy...maybe. I still can't get over those one-shots dedicated to your betas...those POOR betas!!
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Reviewed By: Ladyblade (nsi) On: July 18, 2005 09:40 EDT
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Oh Kami... I wonder what Kich has in store for Belle hehe. It looks as though the Izayois are figuring out what their youkai are saying... hmm, brings to mind Inuyasha's comment for Gin dating.. "She can date when he can kick my ass" or something like that... will Cain and IY go head to head? Cain seems to accept whatever inevitability will come from his 'promise', yet there's the undercurrent of longing/wishing he didn't feel the need to uphold it... or am I grasping at straws? Anyways, great chapter! Sorry I haven't reviewed more often, I usually just have enough time to read before my little one demands my attention. Ja!
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Reviewed By: Mizbum2u(NLI) On: July 18, 2005 09:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY! im Sooo glad that cain and Gin are building that relationship back. im almost positively sure that gin and cain's youkai chose eachother. thats is so freakin' awesome. can't wait to have cain fighting inuyasha. i hope he wins, even if Inuyasha is the best fighter out there! he should let cain win. ^-^ anyway, Kich and Belle seem to be having a "good" time if you know what i mean. he said he's changed(not a man-whorish guy anymore) but doesn't that just show it. but its a bet so i guess we know where that is going. Kich rocks! LOL definately a man-whore but at least he's not like that all the time. ^-^ can't wait to see what happens next. another thing i forgot to mention. Did cain "kill" his mate by trying to mark her. as i see it, kich didn't learn about the diffusion of blood until a little later, so cain would have to do it the old fashion way. he remembered the blood on his claws... hm... did he try to mark her but since his youkai blood did not choose her, she ended up dying? thats why its his fault? i dunno, just summaraizing great. Great chapter! can't wait for the nect one! ~hien
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Reviewed By: CAMILLE'S SONG On: July 18, 2005 09:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so enjoying this fic. You have us so spoiled with your quick updates that I hate the weekends?!!!Anyway I love your characters, I feel like I have known them forever. I beleive I like them better than the orginals. I thought nothing could top Purity 2, then came Purity 3, and I was amazed. I was reluctant to start 4, cause I didn' think anything could match it and I didn't want to be disappointed. You keep surpassing yourself. I've been reading your original works and, yes, they are just as good. Unfortunatly, that mean I'm hogging the computer all night and the hubby and kids get growlly, but you are worth it. Thanks
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: July 18, 2005 08:37 EDT
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Oh My! Poor Gin... Her heart is breaking! I feel for her! Belle? Silly girl, she shoulda known she didn't stand a chance! Great chappie!
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Reviewed By: jessica G. On: July 17, 2005 17:25 EDT
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oh my god this story is staring to turn out so great .aww and poor gin. I also want to say that i have read mostly all of your fanfictions and i have to say you are like one of the greatest authers ever.All of the other stories i have read from people suck compared to yours. So i am a really great fan of yours. (INUYASHA RULES!!!)
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Title: Chapter 42 & 43
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: July 16, 2005 17:33 EDT
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::cries:: 42 is so sad! My heart just breaks for Gin. Even though she by no means has low self confidence or anything like that, that still has to hurt so much knowing that she doesn't quite measure up to Isabelle, thinking that there's no way that she can come close to having Cain feel the same way about her. And that with what Cain said the other night about her being nothing...that would leave anyone feeling miserable. ::huggles Gin:: I love that Kich recorded a song for Belle though, that's so sweet! awww 43 made me cry too! ::sniffles:: These last two chapters have been so insightful and so sad but they've provided some great information. Cain thinks that he killed Isabelle yet his youkai says that she was to blame too...I'm so curious to hear just what exactly did happen to her. And it's even more interesting to learn that it seems Cain's youkai did not choose Isabelle...I'm so curious! hehe. These were some great chapters and I'm looking forward to seeing what else is in store!
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Title: Chapter 40 & 41
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: July 16, 2005 16:39 EDT
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ahhh finally i have a day off where i can catch up! sorry it's taken me so long to review, work has not been to kind! lol. I was going to try to put it all in one review so you didn't have to read as many, but I don't think it'll fit, so I hope you don't mind different reviews from me for each chapter. Anyway! Oh my gosh a drunk Gin is so funny! heh, i love how she said oops to let Cain know she dropped her keys and shoes...like that's supposed to tell him that ;) But poor thing...throwing up is not so much fun! And she licked his stripes!! That was great, it sure shocked Cain! hmmm, I wonder what they'd taste like if they were flavored? ;) Oh but that kiss was beautiful, it had so much heat and emotion in it ::fans self:: yay i love that! And Chapter 41 was just wonderful. It was so nice to see Kich and Belle together without them wanting to tear each other's eyes out! It really seemed like they had a good time, well, aside from Kich almost throwing up! heh. It was a nice twist though to learn that Kich was, in fact, not drunk when he told Belle those things...I like that! heh but he's so bad! It's a good thing no one else was in that haunted house! I think it's really cute that Kich tried to win her something and got her the cd, i can't wait to see what's on it :)
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Reviewed By: tinky On: July 16, 2005 14:13 EDT
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i hate grilled cheese!
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