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Reviewed By: Rhiara (not signed in) On: July 13, 2005 11:21 CDT
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sorry I haven't been reviewing, internet is an evil monster that is as temperamental as a pregnant woman. BAH! Anywhooo just read the last 3 or 4 (i think..) chapters...LOVED EM! I reckon Belle and Kich is my favourite couple of yours, I must say. I like Gin and Cain, too, but...something about the dynamics of the two hanyous...I likes it, I does. But that said, I damn near cheered at Cain's amorous antics. I am now more eager than ever to know more about Isabelle...hmm intriguing, they all warned him against her? What is on the minidisc? And I must say it was jubilation and crows of triumph in this hemisphere (southern, the land of oz to be exact :p) when Kich kissed Belle. WOOT! Bout bloody time, too. If only she hadn't thought he was drunk! sorry for the disjointedness of my review, 'tis 3 AM but wanted to review now in case my internet's hormones play up again *shakes fist at provider* Have at you, sah!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(:D not logged in of course) On: July 13, 2005 10:53 CDT
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awsome fluffy chapter. poor Kich. he was never meant to go to a fair. :D update asap, please. ja ne, Zirra
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Title: Subtitles in Fan Fiction Land?
Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 10:14 CDT
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Hey, Sue! Um... I have a question. It's a stupid question, but it's been on my mind ever since the couples split. What languages are they speaking to others and to each other? Kichiro knows English, right? Does Belle know Japanese? Does Gin know English? Or does Cain speak Japanese to her to appease her? I know it's Fan Fiction Land and everyone understands each other, but the logic part of my brain is bugging the crap out of me! And I'm sorry for asking you such crazy questions, but I just have to know! I'll even believe you if you say in Fan Fiction Land, subtitles follow them around! I'm pretty sure I'm the only one who has thought of this. But, I'm just curious. I'm a very language-centered person and it's been nagging at the back of my mind. Okay, annoyance aside! I loved that last chapter! As per usual, you rock! XOXO! ~pagan_sedjou
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: July 13, 2005 09:42 CDT
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Great chapter! Poor Kich. Getting sick at the amusement park. How can Gin and Belle eat so much sweet stuff. Gah. Good thing they're Hanyo or they'd have mouths full of cavities. Grin. Kich is a very well put together character. I can see a lot of Inuyasha in him but he is also a child of the 20th century. I just can't picture a young Inuyasha confidently slipping his hand up a girl's skirt in a haunted house. Grin. Thanks for the great character and wonderful chapter.
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: Mizbum2u(NLI) On: July 13, 2005 08:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey sueric! this is awesome! updae again! but... are you making/ continuign more fictions like dex(i dunno how to spell it)? cause if you wont write anymore.... T_T ~hien
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Reviewed By: yasha 101(nli) On: July 13, 2005 00:56 CDT
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oh so sad. Gin dosen't really understand does she? i gues she will eventualy. cant wait for tomorrows update-yasha
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Title: Want More!!!
Reviewed By: silver_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. That last line about Cain leading her to the bedroom...(SWOON). I love how you take your time to develop your characters...You are an inspiration to me!!! The first thing I do in the morning(after my morning prayer) is to check to see if there's been update. I commend you on your dedication to your stories, there are very few authors who are as reliable as you. Anywho, don't let the morons who don't know anything get you down, they're not worth time or tears. And if they start threatening you, you can always call 911!Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Ch40
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 21:15 CDT
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Wow...that was awesome, lol. After reading that scene, I found myself asking this:"How in the world did that manage to happen?" Looking back, it started with the bribery...which led to Cain's attempt at fondling Gin's ears...which led to Gin tearing open Cain's shirt and then licking his crests! They should have been flavored? Oh boy, that was the peak of hilariousness in this chapter. Simply superb! Keep it up, and peace be with you! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: July 12, 2005 21:12 CDT
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lol...i wasn't that drunk... :P great chapter! they just dont get it do they? they are too cute! but the question is: who will hook up first? cain and gin? or belle and kich? and what about kich teaching belle to fight? yey for playfighting!!!
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Reviewed By: razorbladesinner(nsi) On: July 12, 2005 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN CAIN'S MORALS!!!!!!! That was an awesome chapter, do we get to learn more about his past with Isabelle now? I certainly hope so. Oh and that whole "You're using me for my crests?" That was classic.
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 19:22 CDT
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"You're using me for my crests?" She started fumbling with his buttons and snorted. "Of course I am!" she assured him. "What other reason would there be?" "I feel so . . . violated." That's just so funny! Once again, an amazing chapter. :)
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Title: Chapter 40
Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 18:47 CDT
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What is wrong with Gin? You don't go around licking people all willy nilly. She doesn't need to drink ever again. Then it doesn't help that Cain pounces on her like a dog in heat. He might have been a monster for taking advantage of her while she was drunk, but Cain failed to tell Gin the whole truth of why he stopped. He didn't tell her about the promise he made. Another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: black_rose28, not logged on On: July 12, 2005 18:34 CDT
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Woah that was something else! I think that would be the best Cain/Gin moment in all of history lol. It was sweet that Cain didnt do that with Gin when she was drunk, so this means that Gin and Cain will definatly be more...couple like i guess u could call it? Great chapter update soon plz!!
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: July 12, 2005 14:55 CDT
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0_o oh my...
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 14:17 CDT
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Aww how sad. I'm at a lost for words right now, it was such a good chapter that I can't put thoughts into words. Don't you just hate it when that happens?
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