| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 21:56 EDT
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Groovy, yeah baby! LoL - I'm not sure that Kich quite fits the roll of "Sugar Daddy", it doesn't seem to set well with him even though he's tossing money (or credit) around like water. Is it just that he's still feeling guilty or does he think that money is the way to impress her? As much as you allow us to see what he's thinking, he's still playing his cards close to his chest and I'm not sure...well, that's why we wait avidly for each chapter; to have our curiosity appeased. - Great chapter
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Reviewed By: Rawben.. On: July 26, 2005 20:15 EDT
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wow. was he really that bothered by her crying? has he seen her cry yet? just that once right? huh... good chapter! damn cain! cant ya see!? that you're in love w/ each other?
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Reviewed By: hotarumai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 17:49 EDT
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hey thanks for another awesome chapter!!!!! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 14:58 EDT
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As to the final thought...I don't think Belle would want to know what Cain and Gin were up to....I wouldn't, kinda gross to think about you parents, in Belle's case her dad, doing something like that...It give me the creeps lol. Aww...Kich is spoiling Belle...is he only doing it to win her affections? lol.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 14:42 EDT
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I kinda don't want to know what they were doing....
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 14:15 EDT
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dang kich is spending some big bucks for belle, but i like how he's treating her like a "princess" for the weekend bet, i can tell he would do a lot for her, and violet is his crest color right? thats why he bought those colored dresses for belle, hmm well anyways with cain and gin it looks like he's still holding back from wanting to mate with gin, but what did he mean by having it be "painful" cause he said that it was painful mating with isabelle, or something like that, but anyways it was funny when gin said are you dogging me cain and then he said woof hah i thought that was pretty cute, well anyways and AGAIN im loving this story Sueric, its just wonderful
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: July 26, 2005 13:54 EDT
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what were daddy and gin doing? Each other! Lol, sorry for the hentai remark. cool chapter.
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Reviewed By: BlackJudgment [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 13:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far the best Purity fic i've read. I've read all the versions of each one. Please post next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Simply a Lady (NSI) On: July 26, 2005 13:03 EDT
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Having not known what was going on I had to look and well thank you for letting me know about the email thingy/ Anyhow... I can definitely picture Inuyasha going ballistic if Gin should come home smelling like Cain as I am sure she does. For not only that, but if Gin should think she ffailed in bringing Cain out of his funk for lack of a better word...well you get the idea... She will be a hurt demoness and Daddy will definietly not like that and will be out for blood
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Reviewed By: Ladyblade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 12:59 EDT
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Poor Cain... while I don't think whatever keeps him from 'living' is really awful..to him it must seem so. I finish chronicles..whee! lol wonderful writing... I noticed that at the time the betas you have know were either not betas yet or were but also reviewed? I loved the characters answering the reviews lol Oh and I won't use the "monk in pain" terms, I just wanted to ask before doing something that could in any way offend a fellow writer. But I do want to say that "monk in pain" was hilarious, only to be topped briefly by "monk on his ass black and blue" LOL
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: July 26, 2005 12:51 EDT
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Hmmm, just why is Kich guilty? Did he hide the earring himself or something? muhahaha. Very good chapter! Very entertaining. Loved the final though...Oh if they only knew. Thanks for informing the powers that be at Media Miner about the lack of update e-mails-- hopefully they get that fixed because, as lazy as this makes me look, it's hard to find your favorite stories! mmmm. New York shopping-- I wish I was there right now. hmm. If I was Kich, I'd take Belle to a tapping of an episode of Conan O' Brien and on that said episode, he would be pulling the walker texas ranger lever like crazy! hahaha. If you know what I am talking about, you might be laughing, and if not, I look rather crazy right now, huh? haha. Keep up the amazing work! I cannot wait for more.
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 12:13 EDT
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That was beautiful and very sweet. Although I'm sure that once the twins and Inuyasha find or sniff out why Gin's so happy now they may not think it very sweet. ;)
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Title: Ch50
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 11:05 EDT
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Cool chapter, loved it! I just gotta wonder what's eating at Kichiro though...he's being nice, yea, but what's on his mind? Meh, all things in good time. Its hard to believe that Cain is still feeling a tad indecisive in his head about Gin, but when it comes to dealing with her, he already acts as though she already is his mate. Whatever happened between Isabelle and him must have really hit him hard. Oh by the way, I found the part where Belle and Cain were the phone mildly amusing =P. Kinda brings to mind the last time Belle and Cain were on the phone, where Cain was teaching Gin how to eat hard candy (Jolly Ranchers) - "suck, don't bite!" Lol, keep it up! d('')b
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Title: Purity 4, ch 50
Reviewed By: kappei_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 09:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter! You have the character's personalities down to a tee and never stray! Lovely lovely! Your work is so emotionally inspiring! I can't read a chapter without either tearing up or smiling or laughing or reacting with some other form of emotion. Good stories make you feel and your stories are way past 'good'! Fantastic, superb and just pain awesome!
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Title: Finally...
Reviewed By: Geminia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 08:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Got to a computer finally, about 15 miles from where I am staying...long walk ;( Anyways, will see you again in a few weeks and will be able to give a review then :D This is excellent and i cannot wait until the real drama starts...also it would be really cool to see a chapter from Kags and Inus perspective right now and again when all the drama is going on :D Gemini
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