| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 15:51 EDT
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yeah!! what did belle say!?!...hah its funny whenever the family gets involved with the others problems and such...hm so sesshoumaru knows about cain and gin i believe. thats interesting...and ow, that sounds painful about your wisdom teeth, hope you get better with that root canal
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 15:29 EDT
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Like everyone is thinking right now...WHAT DID BELLE SAY??????? Oh man...this is going to bug me...aww well, I hope your root canal goes well! Ouch wisdom teeth...I hope I don't have to get those pulled!
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Reviewed By: inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: August 07, 2005 15:10 EDT
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Hehe! Belle has quite the little possessive streak! Way to go Belle! Guess it beat pissing on him in public! LOL. Great chappie! I'm sorry we are getting it early because of you tooth! Take care of yourself! Gin... lying to her uncle... oh my! Good thing Sess has high contacts though... Yasha's head coulda exploded! Great chappie! C
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Reviewed By: ColShaLin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 13:04 EDT
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Sorry to hear about the tooth, good luck with that! We will wait patiently for you to feel up to writing/posting more. In the meantime, you've given us good stuff to think about. I am glad Kich finally apologized and Belle forgave him, but the whole scene in the restuarant may get him killed! And I loved the scene with Cain and Gin and his generals! Thanks so much for sharing!
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Reviewed By: inu-kag15(nsi) On: August 07, 2005 12:42 EDT
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Hi, me again. I have another question, you said, in an earlier chapter that Kagome and Inuyasha might have another chapter, will h/she ever be in this story, and if he/she is in the story, why wouldn't you make a sequel with them in it?
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Reviewed By: xuaeved On: August 07, 2005 10:47 EDT
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What does it say?? Haha, no wonder Kich didn't want to go out! Great chapter as usual, and I love whenever the family gets involved.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Fan311 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 08:19 EDT
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I don't check for updates for one day and I miss one. I think Gin lying is a bad sign... but what do I know? Anyway great chapter update and take care
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Title: Ch. 58
Reviewed By: Darkless (nsi) On: August 07, 2005 06:31 EDT
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Uh oh, Uncle Sess is onto them. Gin may have fooled him with her lie but, knowing Sesshoumaru's infinite curiosity and wealth of knowledge, he probably only let her think that he bought her explanation. He'll be watching, that's a given. - o.O!! Belle is 'marking territory'? ROFLMAO!!! I love it! Here, Kich has been trying to teach her rudimentory defense skills and now she's using her newfound confidence to intimidate all the girls flocking around her dog...and what a dog he was! "...50? More like 150..." *snicker" the "Elvis" of oral...? LMAO! Why am I not surprised? -- You take care of yourself; let teh hubby baby you for a change.
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Title: Ch. 57
Reviewed By: Darkless (nsi) On: August 07, 2005 06:07 EDT
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"Love means never having to say you're sorry" is so far off base it's scary. When you screw up hurt the one you love, you had better say you're sorry as soon as possible! Never let something fester. "Don't go to bed angry" is an old saying because of how true it is. I knew that Kichiro had some grovelling to do, but his 'pathetic pup' worked better than a bunch of words...it helped that Belle was feeling just as miserable. Communication is the key and Belle did just that when she explained how his behavior made her feel instead of just reacting. Destiny or not, a relationship takes hard work and dedication to make it last. - I thought it was adorable how Cain's Generals insisted on meeting La Femme but, oh my...afterwards...whew!! I think you outdid yourself there Sue! Gin is becoming quite hedonistic, and yet she retains her innocent charm; what a lethal combination. *sigh* Ain't love grand?
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 05:22 EDT
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Oh you poor dear, I hope they dope you up for that. Be well, and very nice chapter. I must wonder though about that counter, hmmm.... seems rather interesting, no?
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Reviewed By: Mockingbirdflyaway [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 04:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*laughs* Belle made her mark, didn't she? Been reading this series since the beginning and I'll be sad to see it end. I really feel for you about the root canal business though. May-you-get-through-that-with-the-least-amount-of-discomfort-possible-for-t hat-nightmarish-procedure. ~Mockingbird
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Title: Chapter 58
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: August 07, 2005 03:25 EDT
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back off laides, watch the claws! Funny chapter.
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Reviewed By: kappei_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute chapter! Love the near slip by Cain! The generals didn't have a big role but I really like the way you 'create' your characters, and they were so cool. Poor Kich, I really understood his position here and I loved the scene where he and Belle were talking on either side of her apartment door. I really liked how you described Belle leaning agaist the door and the whole scene was so dramatic and tense, exactly like everyday life. I almost sobbed when Belle opened the door and Kich was on the floor thinking she had locked him out when she was fiddling with the chain to open the door. Looking forward to the angst!
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Reviewed By: inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: August 06, 2005 23:49 EDT
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Yeah! That was a good chappie! I loved it! Angst? Angst? Angst? You? LOL, yesh, I have the feeling that the Queen of Angst is gonna drag us through quite the emotional turmoil before this is over. *sigh* *passes out the kleenex* *deep breath* Ok... really... I'm ready... *hides head...* Well... maybe. C
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Reviewed By: kocoum On: August 06, 2005 17:39 EDT
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i think i just had a heart attack. :] you give me so much ideaaas...... get ready for some hentai pics. lmao
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