| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: The Potty Monster On: August 16, 2005 19:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, the agony of waiting! I wonder how Cain is gonna make it up to Gin? Suppose you can't tell me, huh? Bleh! Another thing I wanna ask. I don't wanna pry into anything, but do you use personal experience for any of the events in your fics? Like how the characters evolve, and stuff like that? Sorry if it's too personal or what, I don't wanna come off as a stalker or nothing... Yeah, so, beautiful chapter, once again. Can't wait till tomorrow, ohhhh, it's making me figdet!
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Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: August 16, 2005 18:10 EDT
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oh gosh that was a good chapter! poor Gin! And poor Cain too, neither one is in good shape right now :( I'm so loving the angst, hehehe. It sounds like Gin is having the same kind of reaction that Toga did... ::huggles Gin:: I'm so curious to see what Kich has realized...I look forward to the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: August 16, 2005 16:54 EDT
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Aargh. Angst level rising. Toga almost died from this. Poor Gin. I can't even begin to wrap my brain around how angry Inuyasha is going to be. I don't know if it's even possible to put it into words because to describe it would be to limit it. We may have to invent a whole new form of communication to even begin to touch upon the extent of Inuyasha's rage. This story may even take a Dragonball Z turn as he goes Supersayen. Of course, Gin could be all right, in which case everyone will just be very angry at Cain for making her sad. If, however, she is "mate-sick" Cain's only hope is if Kich breaks all his bones and puts him in a coma because Inuyasha probably wouldn't harm a helpless opponent. Good luck Cain.
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Reviewed By: White Raven On: August 16, 2005 16:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Kich knows about Cain and Gin...this aught to make things exiting. Put some angst in the next fic, no story's good without some angst and jealousy. Like Gin randomly going on a date with a guy Kich aproves of or something, but Gin not really being into it(obviously). I denno that was just an example, but do something that makes Cain jealouse One more thing: WRITE WRITE WRITE WRTITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE! I'm too addicted to your fics to wait any longer than 3 days PS you start school in august?...weeeeeeird
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 15:39 EDT
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*sniffle* Poor *sniffle* Gin *sniffle*
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 15:27 EDT
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hm so kichiro knows now...gosh things seem to be really hard for gin and cain, i know that they'll make up...*sigh* but its sad to see how those two are behaving from what happened. i wonder whats going to happen when kich confronts cain...
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Reviewed By: DragonHostile17 On: August 16, 2005 15:15 EDT
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(dramatic suspense music) dun dun dun! so is she dead yet or pretty damn close to? that would so suck, but would be a freak twist of irony.
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Reviewed By: JBird7986 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 13:04 EDT
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Woohoo! Got a break earlier than I thought...another excellent chapter! I hope that Gin's ok... I can't wait to read the next one!
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Reviewed By: hotarumai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 12:11 EDT
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wow!! amazing last few chapters!! poor Gin its like shes dieing... is the underlining emotion that Belle felt is that the fealing of Gin losing her 'mate'?? bc it sure seemed like it... boy this was an awesome chapter very sad thou... i feal for both Gin and Cain and i have a fealing that everything is going to be okay with Belle and Kich.. he prolly will be mad well really mad at her but thing will work out in the end... well great chapter!!! can't wait till tomorrows chapter. ~kiaraecko~
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Title: heres a review if the spam code ever works
Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: August 16, 2005 11:57 EDT
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eh..long time no review. hmmm...interesting.. are we having a toga like episode with our dear gin? i see some serious ass kicking in the near future for some certain characters. ooo if inuyasha finds out...tetsusaiga shoving..bellle and kich, my my have they been quite naughty. why do i get the feeling something is going to backfire soon in that relationship...probly just my imagination, but knowing you, there has got to be a twist coming somewhere. cant wait till the next update. Ja ne~ Darkflameangel
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 11:53 EDT
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Oh my, I hope somebody can help that poor girl. Kichiro's a good big brother though, I have faith in him, and if he doesn't get through to her then maybe Ryo or Inuyasha can. But somethin tells me she's feeling the same way Toga felt when he was missing his Sierra.
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Title: Ch61-63
Reviewed By: forechunkukee (nsi) On: August 16, 2005 11:52 EDT
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Hmm...better start making my own time. There's not enough hours in a day, lol. *ahem* The past three chapters have been excellant. Looks like Belle's birthday party was a bit of a double-edged sword. Belle and Kich got closer - a lot closer- while Gin and Cain...oh man. Victims of circumstance it might look like. But what the heck could Gin be thinking now? I mean, she finds out her potential mate murdered his last one, and he also said he doesn't want to see her. Ever. Throw in the fact that she's completely trusted and adored Cain, and I can only imagine what state her mind is in right now. Maybe Kich'll be able to help a thing or two before they go beyond repair. Excellant stuff, keep it up! d('')b p.s: Best wishes to you and your family! (they started school, yea? Good luck to all from a fellow student!)
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 11:02 EDT
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I can't help but feel this will be our couple's downfall of angst. To think something bad maybe happening to Gin is very upsetting, Belle did the right thing and thank goodness Cain spoke somewhat about it. I can understand Cain's unwillingness to let go, but Gin seems to be the one who is mostly suffering and Cain needs to open his eyes to the reality that Gin has indeed bonded with him... Onto the Belle dilemma, she did do the right thing in telling Kich even at the cost of her relationship and trust-it showed how she's grown since the beginning of the story. Though I don't see Kich "hating" her like she fears, the thing with Belle she has mastered the art of lying and it seems her father influences this-shame really, Kich obviously adores her & willingly allows Belle to continue to wash away their relationship even at the cost of his hurt, maybe this will be the much needed turning point for both our couples. Kami only help us if Inuyasha were to find out what has happened.
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Title: so sad
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 05:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well it sounds like Gin is having a nervous breakdown or something. I know how sensitive you are about your characters and I love them all (even Cain). But I am amazed how realistic you make these characters to be emotionally. Cain reminds me of an ex-boyfriend. He was just as stupid and just like Cain. Cain seems to not really get the impact of hurt and pain he has caused. When he said that he needs Gin more than she needs him makes me wonder if he is just dense or insensitive to Gin's needs. I know Cain is suppose to be her mate (or soul mate), but after how he treated her, maybe she should move on and then maybe Kami will bless her with someone who is not so angry about life as Cain is. Sorry but it just pisses me off!! I think Gin is one of the most beautiful characters you have created. I am so glad Kich knows and hope that Inuyasha, Kich and Sess beat some sense in Cain's head. Man I'll bet Kagome's anger would smack Cain down to size. anyway great chapter and glad you are better with your tooth. J
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Reviewed By: ima9e On: August 16, 2005 05:17 EDT
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oh my god...this chapter's so sad! what happened to Gin? goodness...cain is soooo stupid...why do something that you'll regret later on? but guess that's what people always tend to do...hopefully they(Gin and Cain) can really sit down and talk...perhaps Cain will then anknowledge the feelings he has for Gin.....my god..cant wait for the next chapter!!!
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