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Reviewed By: IKMS [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 05:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope your father-inlaw continues to get better and better. Read chapters 68-70 tonight. They were all beautiful. Like the two couples interaction. Love the way Cain's youkai is trying to tell him something important if only Cain can see it... And then the climactic ending to chapter 70! Wow! Cain hoping she can tell what exactly he is not really saying but hinting at with his words...boy oh boy you are good! Left me sitting on the edge of my seat, wanting to reach in the screen and grab Gin and shake her til she sees what I'm reading! Silly I know but it was that intense!
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Reviewed By: Nilkwep [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 21:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Sue im glad to hear your father inlaw is doing well.As always another great chapter.Take your time in getting out the chapters.You dont need to push yourself.Your Fan Nilkwep
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Eliwoodsluv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 21:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY for your Grandfather!!!!!!! Hope He Gets well soon!!!!!! You still write greatly and I look forward to reading the rest and what ever future writings you may write. I will always be a devoted reader to your works. Hope to read more soon. Review you later and say hi to Queen Peenie for me from Be-chan^-^
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Reviewed By: Ryomaru's mate...in da cage!! On: August 27, 2005 21:00 EDT
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OMG!! Gin...belle and Kich...U make me SO sad!! I not believe Kich say that 2 belle...he's soooo mean!!11!! U R so cruel to poor Gin...she so SAD. U make me cry.... OH U need 2 make a P5...Kouga's and Ayame's son!! That would B KEWL!! He could git tegether with Kanna!! ME and Ryo 4 ever!! Peice out!!!
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Reviewed By: Me! On: August 27, 2005 20:45 EDT
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wow great chapters!!! You never cease to amaze me, I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
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Reviewed By: Kialla (not logged in) On: August 27, 2005 17:15 EDT
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wow. you never fail to surprise me! yay! so, what's gin spossed to do? what's the right choice? to choose him to be her mate, or leave him alone? i guess i shouldn't ask you that, because that's a big part of the story i'm guessing and i have to wait like everyone else... *sigh* your father-in-law is in my prayers. have a good weekend! --kialla
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 03:33 EDT
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Awww... I cried at the end... Poor Gin... Another great addition, Sue. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: August 26, 2005 23:09 EDT
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So glad your FIL is stable... This chapter is absolutely beautiful. Cain, he knows. He really understands. You once again astound me with your ability to weave us into another world. Gin grilling Kich! That was great! Thanks for sharing with us! C
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Title: Mocahoney
Reviewed By: Water tenchi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all your fics even though this is the first time I have reviewed. I hope everything with your father-in-law works out for the best and if you stop posting I would be upset but not mad at all. You rock so hard and I hope you continue writing.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 21:10 EDT
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"Live for the 'now' and let tomorrow take care of itself" That seems to be Gin's policy for now. Don't worry about it, don't think about it, for therein lies heartache and she knows it. She gives and gives...eventually there'll be nothing left. Her pain giving her the intuition and drive to tell Kichiro what an ass he's being. When you're wrong, admit it or "Fix it" like Gin says. Pride is a cold bedfellow. - I hope that Cain can figure out that it's ok to forgive himself and that choosing to live is not a selfish thing...but killing himself would be, no matter what he had promised, or why. He can't help or change what happened in the past; Isabelle is gone. But to take himself out now, he would be hurting others that don't deserve it. Dude! Wake up and smell the peanut butter! Life is what we make it; just do the best you can with what you have. -- Just spiffy, as usual! YAY! Angst!
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: August 26, 2005 19:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww!! damn! i'm so worried! damnit cain! lol... ;) anyhow, great chapter! and i'll be looking fwd to the next one, whenever you get the time. ;) have a nice weekend!
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Reviewed By: hotarumai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 17:57 EDT
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hey great chapter!!! im glad to hear that ur father-in-law is doing ok, thats great news!!!! hes still in my prayers, as well as ur family. hope everything is going well wiith the kids in school
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Reviewed By: Mizbum2u(NLI) On: August 26, 2005 17:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chapter! as always, 10/10 i havent reviewed in such a long time... ^^;;; anywho, update soon and sorry to hear about the car accident... ehh... Good job sue update soon. (im guessing it'll be tomorrow) ~Hien
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 16:31 EDT
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Glad to hear that your father-in-law is doing better...I'll still keep your family in my prayers none-the-less. And as for the chapter thing...like I always say "Whatever floats your boat." As long as we continue to get chapters I'm okay! That was a really good chapter...I wonder if they'll be another Izayoi/Inotaisho match and Kichiro gets Ryomaru for hurting Belle then? I hope lol!
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 15:41 EDT
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`She's like your mother. She'll be fine.'hmm from that i realized that the relationship that gin and cain has seems to relate a lot to what kagome and inuyasha had to go through. the men hold back from being with the one they wish they can have, because of their past relationship...hm maybe they're going to play a part in helping gin and cain? hah idn....great chapter.
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