| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zacho On: August 23, 2005 13:19 CDT
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Damn, i have this weid feeling that Gin and Cain are gonna have a little trouble actually gettin back together completly, cuz she's still reluctant is't she? or did i read wrong... stupid glasses lol... funny thing is, i wasn't wearin my glasses! haha allrighty, good chapter, it was very captivating. Well, Looking forward to many more, Zacho PS Yes this is the same Zacho from FFnet, i switched because FFnet is being stupid (yes stupid) and it takes to long for your chapters to come to me, even tho i can see the reviews for the new chapter... Allright i'm done now. haha
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 12:58 CDT
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Awwwww!! That was so adorable!! I love that the whole chapter was about Cain and Gin; their relationship is really interesting now that Gin's realized he's her mate... Of course, Kich and Belle's relationship is fun to read about too... XD With their little excursions in the woods and night clubs... Excellent job. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Anoki On: August 23, 2005 10:31 CDT
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*sigh* Everytime I read Lemon Warning at the beginning of a chapter, I think 'Uh oh, is this Cain and Gin' and alas it is not. But then that makes sense because Cain and Isabelle are not yet resolved. And on a side note, Kich and Belle are awesome. I love the daringness. Whoa, I think I just made up a word. Anyway, great chapter and I think I smell the climax coming on soon.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 02:54 CDT
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It's a good thing I don't need a life-preserver to stay afloat or I'd be in trouble. The angst is maxing the capacity of the dam and we're in danger of a flood. When the dam bursts, I hope everyone has had time to reach high ground or we're gonna drown. *wink* -- Poor Gin, she feels there's no competing with Isabelle's memory and Cain's promise, so she's giving up without a fight. -- Kich and Belle...I'm not even going to comment on their rabid impression of two bunnies. No shame at all! LOL
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Reviewed By: adamileJ On: August 22, 2005 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
after reading this chapter I think I'm all sexed out for the year whew!!!. anyway I get the impression that Cain is trying to rationalize Gin's illness as a she will get over it attitude cause they are not mated? Just like he wanted Isabelle no matter what it seems like he is doing the same thing with Gin. He wants Gin to be near him no matter what the consequences? If so then he is a jerk and selfish as well. and poor sweet giving Gin is the one in the end who will be hurt the most. after all Cain won't be cause he'll be dead. How honorable of him! I still like all the characters even though I don't like Cain hurting Gin just because of his guilt. I hope he wakes up and really looks at himself for Gin and Belle's sakes. Ah Oh!! okay back to reality: Wow Sue, you surely know how to make these characters so emotionally realistic!! These characters or yours really wrap around someone's psyche. Awesome writing!!. J
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 19:21 CDT
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indeed kich is bad! in a club? now that's hot. LOL. damn. great chapter. you know, not that ANYONE wants to know this, but yeah...so i work at a themepark, right...and today, being a busy day and all, there were a decent amount of people there (like 25,000). so this call comes in over the walkie-talkies and it's security demanding that someone stop these two freaks who were having sex behind one of the major rides. they had been there for 20 minutes before security got involved. i think it's halerious. then reading this made me laugh. damn...good thing they didnt' get busted...that would be a hella nasty scene of Cain having to get them out of prison....that or InuYasha. hehehehe. good either way! LOL. i loved the chapter! can't wait for more!!!
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: August 22, 2005 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol!!! kich is soo bad! ;) great chapter... the cain/gin thing is pretty dark... he'd better fix this soon! dangit! ;)
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Reviewed By: IKMS [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cain and Gin...they are both so sad. I love the angst to the story, it almost makes me want to cry with the way they are both hurting so much right now. I love the story and the characters, and their interactions, also like the part telling about Isabelle(spelling?), it was good to hear about her. Gave me a good picture of why Cain is the way he is. Oh, just gotta add, really loved the soft talk between Gin and her youkai, so sad, resigned to their fate - beautifully written.
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Title: Err...I'll just put -> 67
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 16:31 CDT
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Woohoo! Finally found some time to sit and type. The past two(?) chapters were pretty intense, but I'll just stick to this chapter. Gin really is between a rock and a hard place here. Then again, her mode of thinking has a lot to do with what Cain has been saying about Isabelle. Its easy to see that they need to be with each other, but now, they're both just confused. I found that line about Kichiro perverting Belle hilarious, simply because Belle does a fine job of being just that on her own...toss in Kichiro... Sheesh, they don't have any shame! At least they understand each other for the most part. I'm just hoping that Cain and Gin can solve their issues before something else happens. Who knows? Maybe that something else is Belle telling Cain she found her mate...that would complicate things... Awesome job, you never fail to please your fans! d('')b
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 15:11 CDT
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As to the final though...Kichiro isn't as bad as Belle...well, okay he is, but it's not entirely his fault; it's in his nature to be that way! Oh, I hope Cain doesn't start to feel guilty about what Gin said. That's the last thing he needs. Ah, I have to wait a whole day to find out what happens next! I wonder if my teacher will let me go on the internet and read your story there?? Hmm...I'd have to sign in to ffnet though uh!
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 14:56 CDT
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Woot! Belle and Kich are baaaaad!!! That was supremely awesome, Sueric. ^_^
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 14:30 CDT
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wow so gin realized that she's chosen cain as her mate...but cain still needs a bit more convincing doesnt he?...hm at least he has his suspisions as to my she didnt eat "its not a big deal" *sigh* wonderful story
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 14:23 CDT
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Oh, poor Gin I feel so sorry for her and Cain, their bond is unique, but much like when her mother and father started out, their communication is lacking not as much, but it's still an issue. Cain needs to stop avoiding the fact that Gin is the one, I think he maybe getting a clue especially now he has witnessed first hand how Gin got that sick after one fight think what would happen to her if he keeps his promise to Isabelle!? The angst was thankfully broken up with a very steamy Belle and Kich scene and I must agree that Kich is bad and 100% doggie dog! Belle is incorrigible though lol. I love their passionate relationship. Such a contrast to all the other couples in the Purity series, or am I wrong? Lol, Belle and Kich seem to just go with their instincts? Their animal magnetism?
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 12:40 CDT
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Oh poor Gin, ppor Cain as well. But in the end I guess a lot of women do what Gin does when they really love someone. The only difference being that with other women, we won't die without our mates, or at least we hope we won't. Good chapter can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice i still love this fic.
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