| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: QamarNoor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 12:02 EDT
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wow...these ats chapters have really captured me...brought me to tears! not only do you make them so real...but Gin...Gin is amazing..i can really feel her emotions especially..the hopelessness....the need to smile even if everything is breaking inside. I feel there will be bad consequnces for Gin keeping everything inside, for pretending everything is okay when really it isnt..i know because i've done the same thing to many times. anyway..wonderful and compelling story, i eagerly await more!
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Reviewed By: lesalee- not signed in On: August 22, 2005 10:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Take what I can get . . . because in the end, I won't have anything at all . . .' Wow, that was the angst-iest line of the whole story so far. It definately made me feel the hopelessness that Gin's feeling at this point. Dear god... the angst! I love it. =D (Now for something completely unrelated... Is anyone else still not receiving email updates at all? I just read in one of your author notes that it had happened to others... but I'm slow and just thought no one updated in a while. @_@)
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: August 22, 2005 09:30 EDT
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Oh! Poor baby girl, she knows now. I hope Cain can just hold on to his feelings for her. Letting go of guilt is such a hard thing to do. As long as his love for her weighs heavier than his guilt; they'll be ok. Kich and Belle just keep getting naughtier and naughtier! I love it... of more naughiness to come! Great chapter Sue! C
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Title: The Rewards of Not Sleeping
Reviewed By: Lady_Yukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 03:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, who would have thought not being able to sleep could be so rewarding? The only problem with reading the chapter at 3AM in the morning is that now I have nothing to read when I actually wake up later. *shurgs shoulders* Oh well, I'll just reread the chapter. Anyways I love seeing how much Gin and Belle have grown since the beginning to the story. They were already incredible women when the story started, but I think they've become much more then they were since the beginning and this chapter shows that. So on that night, I'm going to try and go to sleep and dream about the wonderfulness that is Purity series. Lots of love, Pocky, and ramen. Yukiko-chan
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 03:25 EDT
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Kich is bad but Belle is just as bad as he is. ;) Oh Gin, what are you planning to do? Not leave him i hope because you can't. *hugs Gin*
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Title: Chapter 67
Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 03:15 EDT
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Woot! Sex! And in a public place! Kich and Belle are like a couple of horny teenagers. There sure is a lot of drama in this story, not that I mind. I like drama. Gin's realized the truth but she's too afraid to say it aloud and Cain is either in denial or just doesn't know. Anyway, good chapter as usual.
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Title: Reprieve?
Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 03:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You call this chapter a reprieve??? It's got more angst and drama then the last two chapters combined, well... maybe not that much, but it's defenitly one of the more heart wrenching chapters of all the stories I've ever read!
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 19:31 EDT
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That was absolutely amazing... Wow... It made me want to cry...
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Reviewed By: hanayuri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 22:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was amazing. Cain's heartache finally revealed. It made me cry, really! It's always hard for me to read Friday's chapters because I have to wait a few days for the next installment. Sometimes I save Friday's chapters for Saturday. I can barely wait for the next chapter! I also wanted to tell you that your influence helped me to finally get up enough courage to post my own stories. After reading your stories for over a year now, I've realized what a hard time you get as a fan fiction writer. I really admire your hard work despite the hurtful things people say to you. Thank you for your work because without it, I never would have began sharing my writing. Crazy Fan S.S. (now hanayuri!) ^^
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Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 17:53 EDT
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Another great chapter, can't wait to find out how it all ends...if you don't mind me asking, what was your inspiration to write the 'Purity' series? Did you have one?
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Reviewed By: Suze - nsi On: August 20, 2005 03:55 EDT
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My insanity is lifted! Yea! I was surprised at how close my favorite theory was to the truth. Just goes to show how good your hints were all along! I'm glad that Cain finally confided in Gin. He's needed to get that out in the open for a long time. My feeling is that this will start the healing process for him. When you bottle up something like that for so long, it becomes so much bigger, looms so much larger, and seems so much more terrible than the actual event (I completely agree with Gin, that he did the only thing possible in such a dire situation). I suspect that he won't truly be able to move on until he tells Belle the truth, though. As much as Cain loves Gin and her love and trust has bolstered him enough to begin the process, I think it will be Belle who finaly helps him forgive himself.
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: August 20, 2005 01:44 EDT
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OMG!!! Cain! poor guy! i hope he can move on! cause if he cant then Gin is skrewed. lol... also: even tho kich and belle are ... you know... ;) they aren't mates right? what about his study? what are they learning? lol... cause when they become real mates then they're smell will be different right? anyhow... great last 2 chapters!! i'm glad you didn't leave a massive cliffy right before the weekend ;)... see you on monday!!
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Reviewed By: Anoki On: August 20, 2005 00:59 EDT
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Wow, I'm at a loss for words. I thought that it would be something like that but that was much more beautifully written than my original prediction. That is just so horrific. Poor Cain. I like how you describe Isabelle because she's this beautiful person and for a while Cain really did love and it seems like they sort of fell out of love. Like they both grew up but in different directions. Beautiful chapter.
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Reviewed By: Terrasina Dragonwagon, who could have sworn she was signed in On: August 19, 2005 23:14 EDT
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O.O Oh my god. I'm in shock. Oh, poor Cain. Oh my god... ...*eagerly awaiting next update*
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Reviewed By: moongal850 On: August 19, 2005 20:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, all we need to worry about is making Cain see he really didnt do anything wrong. He saved a life, not took one. Gin, its up to her to save him now. You know what else i realized? If Gin and Cain mated, she would be Belle's mom. Stepmom, but still, she is so young. its kinda interesting. O.o And Kich's issue with Cain being his brother-in law and father-in law at the same time. Ah the confusion. Lol!
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