| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: kamackie21(nsi) On: July 02, 2005 15:04 CDT
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Wow..... such incredible chapters to come home to. I've missed your stories Sue (and everybody too). I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Rochany On: July 02, 2005 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the Purity Series with this one being my favorite!I'm proud to say I've read all of them well I'm still reading this one which is awesome!I'm pretty sure if there is a Purity 5 it'll just as good as the ones before it!Keep up the good work and I'm going to keep on looking forward to reading more of Purity 4!
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 22:20 CDT
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Oh Boy... A whole night with Kich not putting his foot in his mouth??? This I can't wait to see! Poor Cain... now that damnable youkai of his is trying to get him to move off the couch? And taunting him about his inability to push Gin away? Oh man, not bad enough he can't handle how he feels... Now his youkai is really really starting to torment him! You are teh master! *bows down* Nobody does it like teh sue! Your torment of your characters is priceless!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(not logged in....again) On: July 01, 2005 12:50 CDT
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great chapter..the conversation the gin and cain had when belle called was priceless. absolulty wonderful chapter. update asap, please. ja ne, Zirra
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Reviewed By: WhiteTara On: July 01, 2005 12:08 CDT
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Peace be with you and your family. I have to say that the Belle/Kich romance is quickly becomeing one of my favorites and I can't wait to see what happens now that Kick has pulled himself out of his arse. The two differect romances are balanceing out each other nicely. Two questions: What are the rules of conception for hanyou/hanyou and hanyou/yokai? Could they potentially both have full yokai children or what that only because of the instability of Inuyasha's blood. Secondly, why didn't Gin just sleep in Belle's room?
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 08:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey....excellent work on a other chapter :P i'll be counting down the hours till your next chap :P -angel aka NyteAngelOfDarkness7
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Title: *still sniggering over 'manly' candy*
Reviewed By: Darkless (nsi) On: July 01, 2005 01:45 CDT
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Ok Gin...dig yourself into Cain's heart just a little bit more and he won't be able to walk away. Mwaaahaahaaa! She hooked him good, all she has to do now is reel him in and net him. Too bad she doesn't know she's in the boat, let alone fishing. (does it show that I love metaphors? LOL) -- No...no...no! Dangit! I don't want to feel sorry for Kich. He's been such an ass, but now...it's the ears. Can't resist those ears. *sigh* How can he fix things with Belle? Thank goodness he's thinking now. Better late than never...unless it's too late. -- Man! Talk about your emotional rollercoaster. Up on the peaks with Gin & Cain then swooping down with all the angst between Belle and Kich. "...seat belts...bumpy ride." -- *hugs*
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 00:58 CDT
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Well, I hope your sister-in-law is doing at least a little better...I'll still keep you all in my prayers....glad to have you back! Well, even if it was one chapter I loved it. I wonder if Belle will be up for that dare???
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Title: Familliar
Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it just me or did you write David to be as much like Hobo -er, I mean Houjou - as posible? Not that I mind or anything, it's a nice flashback to the origional series and all, but it's the character that I dislike...
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Reviewed By: Amargo Scribe On: June 30, 2005 22:44 CDT
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Take as much time as you need on the chapters. Family always comes first. This was certainly a pleasing one :) throwing the ex into the mix can only make things more insane than they already are--I can't wait!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inyashaloverr1956 On: June 30, 2005 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I just love this...wonder if Kich still has the Kool-Aid adorning his head and ears when him and Belle went in the club? Being dark, maybe noone noticed,lol. When my two older(uses term looely) ones did that when they were younger, I couldve killed them. The older one with dark brown hair, to the middle of his back, used orange,to make his blondish(didnt work)his sister, w/ blonde hair,to her waist no less, opted for strawberry. The only one w/ a brain was the youngest,he sat back and laff his backside off at the other two who did that without me knowing it and they had to goto school that way. I hadnt thought of that in a long while till I read what Belle did to Kich. I sat here and LMAO. Then called him up to ask if he remembered his orangish-brown hair. He did not want to go there, lmao. Ah well, cant wait till you post again. Damn you're good.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: RogueSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter, it was very informative if I do say so myself. I've always wondered how do you type your chapters so fast, do you write them before hand or write each one before you post it?
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Reviewed By: Black_rose28(not signed on) On: June 30, 2005 19:59 CDT
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Im sorry, take as time as you need Sue, dont worry about updating, your family comes before fics, your fans(thats me) are here for you, we can wait more right guys? (fans: "right!") see? Ok well on other matters, i love the phone conversations LOL (cain: OW! leave flesh Gin!!") I nearly spit out the lemonade i was drinking when i saw that *starts laughing again* hehe that was just to damn funny, ok well update whenever, your family will be in my prayers :)
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 19:11 CDT
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The phone conversation between Belle, Cain and Gin(in the background) was hilarious! Inuyasha would have blown and a** gasket if he overheard that one. :) I'm glad that Kich finally figured out his feelings. I hope it wouldn't be that difficult for him to convince Belle that she's 'The One' but seeing that you lurve angst.... We'll see. *grins widely*
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: June 30, 2005 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Just want to convey my sympathies. It always helps to have family who cares. Your sister in law is lucky. (It was sister in law, right?) I have four in laws, but I tell everyone that they are my siblings. I lost one a year ago and I still miss them. The more unique family, the better. Caring family is a huge benefit. On different thoughts, Kicharo and Belle are making lots of progress. The old boyfriend is an interesting development also. Cain is still nothing like Sesshoumaru. Why does this appear to suprise me? Could it be the taiyoukai thing? And lastly, the pictures of Gin and others are beautiful . . . you and your fellow artists are very talented. I enjoy the pictures co-artists draw. The variety is nice too. Thanks for all, Cynbad146
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