| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(being lazy) On: June 24, 2005 13:08 EDT
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roflmao that was hilariouse. poor kich. naughty belle. *continues laughing* so i'm not all that dissapointed with her...here's what i really meant...go belle!! great chapter. and the girl talk about the kiss was great too. poor gin she was so embarrased. update soon. ja ne, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Deplora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 12:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snickers* *giggles* *guffaws* Belle painted Kichiro's claws and hair PURPLE! *falls out of chair laughing* What I wouldn't do to see that as fanart. That was just TOO good. I think I'm going to be laughing about that for the rest of the day. Thank you, Sue, for giving me something to laugh about today.
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 12:08 EDT
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o...my...god...*shakes from laughter* AHHAAHAHAHA kich probably deserves that since he wuz acting like a complete butthead but still...lmaooooo...and that cindy girl dang what a @$@!%#$% but thats kinda sweet of how kich told belle that she shouldnt take that kinda treatment from people...except him i suppose heh
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 11:46 EDT
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Oh I love it!
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 11:32 EDT
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Ah, Sue. To say priceless again would be redundant. Oh, Kichiro just might have deserved that! What I don't get is that Belle can be so mean back to Kichiro, but she can't stand up for herself when confronted with another girl. Why is that? I mean, I as a girl know how mean other girls can be. That's why I get along with more guys and have all of two girlfriends. But she doesn't seem to defend herself at all. In high school, I would at least try. I didn't have the best comebacks in the world, but I did manage to perfect that "you-are-a-bug-and-I-will-squash-you" look. By the last leg of my senior year. Sorry. Enough about me! I had a feeling that Toga and Sierra were going to have another girl. And I love Cain's reaction to the fake tattoo. A fairy! Yay! Anyway, I love you, Sue! You are brilliant! I bow down to thee, O Queen of Fanfiction. XOXO!!! ~pagan_sedjou
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: June 24, 2005 06:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im still here. Wanted to say that that CTRL Refresh trick works wonders. I also have a question . Since you know so much about the "scrolls" of how or chapters or whatever of Inuyasha. I have a question about Sesshomaru's new technique the one with Tensiaga (I think) the darkness thing. Do you know what may have happened if he chose the other one the path of "Light"? Just thought Id ask. If you dont know dont woory about it. Haha well god luck with your story.
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Reviewed By: yashafan18 On: June 24, 2005 05:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter i hope kelly's surgery turns out good and a word to kich just say you like her and get it over with.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: June 24, 2005 03:19 EDT
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That was really sad! It was really well written, I got very depressed. Belle being sad is just...weird. Shes usually spunky and vibrant, and now she's depressed. You wrote her particularly well in this chapter I thought, she was very deep and real. And Kichiro being nice to Kelly was really good. Excellent job on the whole thing, I hope to read more soon!
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Reviewed By: Rhiara (not signed in) On: June 23, 2005 23:13 EDT
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This is another great chapter. But then again, what else did I expect? *wink* I loved the Dr Gaylord comment, hahaha. And I liked how you put in the seatbelt thing to show that he DOES want to protect her... Poor Belle, can't he just be nice to her? I wonder when we'll find out about Isabelle... and when Gin will...hmmm
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 18:33 EDT
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My mom keeps yelling at me because i stay on the computer so much lol, busy reading ur chapter ^_^ I love the "dr. GayLord" name that Belle gave Kich. The Isabelle thing is rather confusing though, ive been trying to put the pieces together but theres always a gap. Im thinking along the lines of Cain did something and blames himself? I dunno..well thats what makes a mystery a mystery i guess! I do have one question tho: Ive looked at the art for the story, of the characters, and im wondering if Cain has crests, and all the girls are staring at his, then how come Gin has pink markings in the same place, and Cain doesnt stare at Gins? I really dont..understand why crests are important, were they just looking at them because they made him look great or does it symbolize something? Sorry if im bothering u, i guess i have a curiosity streak in me lol, well another great chapter, looking forward for the next one!!
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Reviewed By: Time Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 16:55 EDT
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Beautifully written, I loved the surprise from Belle when Kichiro was nice to Kelly. It made total sense. I'm just confused on one thing, and that is are Kichiro and Belle staying in America until Kelly's surgeries are all done, or are they going to be going back after say the first one? I tried to look over past chapters, but couldn't find it, maybe you didn't say it, and that's part of the surprise, then forget I asked. Always a fan of your stories, even if I don't review, each is a masterpiece of it's own.
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: June 23, 2005 16:26 EDT
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P.S. I forgot to mention before that I love the hints that you've slipped in about exactly what happened to Isabelle. My brain has been working overtime to try to piece it together (can't leave a good mystery alone!) and I think I have a possible scenario figured out. I'd ask if I was on the right track, but I know you wouldn't confirm or deny and speculating is half the fun anyway! LOL
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: June 23, 2005 16:20 EDT
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Oh man...you're making me miss my home. I was born right in the area that this takes place (possibly even in the hospital that Kelly is in...if...um...this were not fiction...that is...um... *cough*). I could picture the last scene in my mind so clearly. Poor Belle. I love these quieter moments with Kich, when they both stop arguing for a second and really *see* each other for a moment. Very nice.
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Reviewed By: CheshireAngel (NSI) On: June 23, 2005 16:18 EDT
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Oooh, things are starting to change...hehe, I love the chapter, and I'm surprised that Kichiro and Belle can hold a conversation without calling the other a name. ROCK ON! Keep it up Sue!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(being lazy) On: June 23, 2005 12:52 EDT
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great chapter. poor belle she seems so sad. i hope eerything works out for her friend. update soon, please. ja ne, Zirra
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