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| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] | | Pages (148): [ « ‹ 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 › » ] | Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: June 15, 2005 17:05 EDT
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so, maybe this is going a little ahead of myself but can't inu smell scents of people on people (ie cain's scent on Gin since she practically is running there?) ...hmm. i love the teasing with this 'fight' between cain and inu...funny that Cain wants to rip into Yash as much as Yash WILL him (when he gets downwind of this all). very good. :-) i feel like i'm egging on a fight here. OI. LOL. great story, as always. love the breif 'begging on the knees' dialogue between gin, Cain and Belle. very cute. :-)
| Reviewed By: Darksquire(not logged in) On: June 15, 2005 15:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hilarious! "You used the charm the pants off women all the time... literally." Hahahahahahahahahaha! I can't stop laughing! Oh that is too brilliant! I can't wait till Kich realizes Belle is coming along! Oh this will be priceless!
| Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: June 15, 2005 15:03 EDT
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hehehehehe! Gin's not so innocent sounding to a dirty mind rhetoric strikes again! Loves it! Great chapter! te he he. I love that softer side of Kich and the allusions of back when he was younger, ah, sigh. Looks like Mama and Papa will get to see Kich in action as he deals with Belle. yey! I was hoping that Cain would accept an invite as well but hey, maybe you have something planned for us that we do not yet know of. ;) Great job; I cannot wait for more! --Aitu
| Reviewed By: Gold Wings On: June 15, 2005 14:27 EDT
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Beautiful, as usual!
| Reviewed By: Sari-15 (yay!!) On: June 15, 2005 13:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore this chapter...the interaction between Kich and Kagome is just priceless. I love how although they both hide it well, Kich and Belle are so ALONE on the inside. The dynamics between these two should be very interesting to see how they evolve. Just as Kich is trying the tear down the wall he's constructed...Belle is trying to build hers up as STRONG as she can. Poor Kich JUST missed the boat with realizing what he had been doing wrong. He's going to have a loooong path ahead of him, I think. Wonderful chapter!!
| Reviewed By: RainAndHell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 12:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this, i would have to say, is one of your best work yet, you have a way with writing i give you that. your stories are AMAZING! i have one question though, in the end of purity, you said you were going to talk about shippous kids, and from what i read, they havent been in them, not really, if you could would you some how add them to your stories, or at least mention them? i love your stories, other than that, i have NO complaints, if this affended you, i am SO sorry, as i said at the top, you work is amazing, and i do mean that, i hope this wont make you stop posting, because that would be horrible.
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 11:49 EDT
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Aww poor Belle, Kich really did a number on her. Even her youkai is dropping the subject. Its just too bad that 'fluffy' comfort, while sublime, will only go so far. Her misery is an adult one, not that of a child, and not so easily comforted. I wonder if Kich will have the 'balls' to apologize...if Belle actually shows up at the office in the morning. I still think he needs an ass kicking. At least he realizes what he did, finally. Better late than never. Unfortunately he had to get particularly vicious, hurting the girl badly, before he took a look at himself. As badly as Ryo messed up with his personal life, doing things bass-ackwards like he did, he never deliberately screwed things up like this. His parents would be very disappointed if they knew. I think even Ryo would be shocked. - Is it just me, or does Gin get more adorabibble each time she does something? If I'm finding her so unbelievably cute and lovable, Cain doesn't stand a chance! LOL -- Keep 'em coming, Sue! Awsome!!
| Reviewed By: yashafan18 On: June 15, 2005 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job love your story.
| Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: June 14, 2005 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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A very tender and thoughtful chapter. I am enjoying reading this tale. Onward oh talented one! Write on! Thank you, Cynbad146
| Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: June 14, 2005 20:41 EDT
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great chapter. very sentimental. as always, well done. i loved it! i feel bad for belle. that poor thing. glad that kich realized how he reacted and i look forward to the next confrontation in the office over it. eep? also the cain/Gin relationship is so cute. love it! i know it isn't going to be as easy as 'oh hey...i want to be with her so lets get the show on teh road...' and i have a feeling, as always, it shall be darkest before dawn so....hey, yay for happy endings, ne? great story!!!!
| Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 20:26 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Belle. *hugs Belle and gives her candy* At least Kich feels really awful over what he did and said. I hope that he'll get his act together and apologize to her, even though he clearly doesn't really want to. I like the clay-fight between Cain and Gin. The 'bear' sculpture thing that she made was cute, especially when Cain couldn't tell what it was. :) Wonderful as always Sue.
| Reviewed By: Gold Wings On: June 14, 2005 18:15 EDT
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Very beautiful chapter. I'm really sorry that i've read all the chapter so far, but haven't reviewed.>.< Anywho, i just wanted to say something: DOn't let those people who flame your story, bother you. They're not even worth getting angry over. I for one, know how you feel. It's best to ignore them as best as you can, and just be there for all of your fans, as well as the potential ones. I love all of your 'Purity' fics. I think they're all fabulous and beautiful in they're own special way. Please update soon! Gold Wings
| Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 17:58 EDT
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You know, i think Kichiro is starting to grow on me. I don't mean this badly, I just didn't like him that much in Purity 2 and 3, but now he seems okay. Like, he's gotten older and more mature over the years. You've developed his character really well. Update soon.
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 17:39 EDT
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Wow...I canonly imagine what will happen if Belle goes to work the next Monday....I'd love to do pottery....it seems like fun, too bad Gin ain't too good at it....yet.
| Reviewed By: Darksquire(not logged in) On: June 14, 2005 17:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good chapter. Sad but good. I loved the clay fight between Gin and Cain. It was so cute! Thank you once again for writing this! It is so nice to be able to take a break from housework and sit down to read your stories!
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