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Title: Ch. 17
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 21:07 CDT
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*giggle* Uncle Yasha has two little girls hanging on him...I can see that so clearly. Two little black-haired, black puppy-eared hanyou girls. Coral and Cassidy. I'm sure he romps all over with them, dog that he is! LOL - Oh my...Belle sure hit Kich below the belt with the 'gay' comment, and with Sierra & Nez playing her chorus, he was put on the spot and very hot under the collar. I hope that Belle is ready for any repurcussions. Nez might be a bit blind to emotional evidence, but Sierra spotted Kichiro's jealousy right off. Maybe there will be a little side-betting going on in the Izayoi-Inutaisho factions whether Kich has met his match or not. Again with the ear comparison? Kich just might have to tackle his brother and do a little tweaking himself to settle his own mind if it bothers him so much. Can you imagine Ryo's reaction to being held and tweaked by his own brother?? Priceless! And Kich's reaction to softer or not? Oh, how my mind wanders...thanks for the fodder, Sue! LMAO
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Title: chapter 17
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 07, 2005 20:13 CDT
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LOL, oh sue this chapter was awesome! BAHAHAHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA I officially love Belle. Calling Kich gay was brilliant. lol, and Sierra and Nezumi coming in with their little comments was perfect and completely sealed everything. Heh, I also liked the little beginning bit with Cain and Belle's date. Yasha isn't the only overprotective father around there! ;) Great chapter Sue :)
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Reviewed By: BOWJAY [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Like It. I wonder where Kich went and I wonder if Belle's data will ever make it back. I guess it shows that Nez has come to terms with her mother's death well since Sierra always wants fried chicken and that was what was cooking when Nez's mother died. Cain didn't ever mark Isabella did he? If this is true then doesn't he think that he should follow Isabella in death out of duty and honor, not due to his blood. His blood reminds him, but isn't that more because of the promise he made. Isn't this like the promise to protect which is so important to Inuyasha and his family.
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Title: Chapters 13 - 16
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 20:03 CDT
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Sorry for not reviewing in a timely fashion but I just got my dsl to behave itself. :P -- I have to say that I got all choked up over the wings that Cain made for Gin. How adorable. And I about died laughing when she just had to touch them...his stripes/crests! LOL I wonder if Belle will find her a 'fairy' costume, all frilly and gauzy, to go with them? - I loved how Gin has managed to keep her promise of silence and is ready to kick Kich's tail over his treatment of Belle. That would be fun to see. Ah...mind candy! - Hey...wait a minute! Gin's youkai is talking to her on her human night?? Wouldn't that be the one time that her youkai's voice would be silenced as her youkai blood is supressed? Hmm... - It was the television? Oh, Gin is a bad liar. Cain just can't help himself and fall for Gin...and neither can his youkai. Hehehe Awwww, Cain is going to hold Gin till she falls asleep. Shouldn't his youkai be sending up warning flares about now? "Danger! Imminent Meltdown Detected!" He is such a goner.
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 19:18 CDT
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Kich gay, MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was hilarious!! Poor guy. *hugs Kich* But he did deserve it though, for being rude and obnoxious to her. I really like Belle. She can swing the insults like the best of them and she can hold her own with Kich. Cain is still in denial about his feelings for Gin, poor thing. I hope we get to learn more about Belle's mother in the following chapters. I just lobe this story so much!
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 18:01 CDT
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YAYAYAYAYAYA Poor kitch..i feel for the poor guy.Is this gunna be the last purity? cuz i love em and they keep me goin during examsa....BLAH HATE EXAMS....keep writing!!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 17:47 CDT
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LMAO!! Poor Kich, but I can't say that he didn't completely deserve it. I wonder what'll happen next???
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Title: Jovial
Reviewed By: Odgamre On: June 07, 2005 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been a long time fan of yours, and i think i have read every single inuyasha fic that has been posted. I really love reading your fics. They make the characters really come alive. I've stopped reading most other fics because i find them flat and sloppily done in comparison. It is really a shame that you've been flamed so much. If they don't like it they should not read it, and leave more for the rest of us. Checking if purity has been updated or not has been the sole reason for me even getting online for the past few weeks. I just love your work, and even if you don't continue to post here, i really hope that you keep writing. In this fic in particular, i love the intereaction between Belle and Kichiro. This fic makes me laugh and sit on the edge of my seat at all the right places. I really can't get enough.... so.... going to update soon? :D
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 07, 2005 16:31 CDT
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Heh. Funny argument. Those two know exactly how to push each other's buttons. They are either in love or siblings. Grin. Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: Darksquire(not logged in) On: June 07, 2005 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha ha that is hilarious! I love it! Belle calling Kich gay! It is too perfect! He is so hopeless. XD Well things are moving along nicely. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hurray!
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Title: CAIN!!!
Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (not signed in...whoops) On: June 07, 2005 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish it were possible, once again, to place large + signs after the enjoyment factor. This fic rocks my teeny-tiny college world. I just want to grab Cain and take him home with me (though my newly aquired fiance might disagree...hmmmmm). He's so sweet, and I'm so glad that you've reassured us that this is a Gin/Cain fic (well, in part, which makes it even better that there's more) and I know there won't be a horribly sad ending... I hope... Then again, you do have the flair for angst...... oh no, now I'm scaring myself! Anyway, i did have a question: is it harder or easier to write fics with two couples in them? I mean, I know you often write InuKag and MirSan but they're already established couples... is it more difficult or more fun to connect two seperate couples from the beginning? I really like it because we get to follow two stories, and it makes it all that much more interesting, especially seeing as how the couples are intertwined. Another Q: Kichiro and Belle... would that make Kichiro the up-and-coming American Tai-Youkai? Or would it skip a generation to Belle's offspring?
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 13:29 CDT
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haha belle definitly got to kich with that one heh...it must be obvious that theres SOMETHING between kich and belle if sierra seemed to have figured that out =P
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Reviewed By: werewolfpixie On: June 07, 2005 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. still keeping up. now all i have to do is read toga's story. phewww...that means lots of reading. oh well reader by heart. how many chapters do you plan? just curious. werewwolfpixie@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: lesalee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, this just keeps getting better between Kich and Belle. Sierra to the rescue! Hurray! I seriously can't wait until the chapter where Kich meets Cain... Soon, right? Right?! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kialla (not signed in) On: June 07, 2005 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this chapter!!! i practically have tears comming out of my eyes right now! lol! and i just love sierra! the ironic thing is, she acts exactly like my friend, whos name is Sierra! dude... that's weird... but sooo cool! update soon! --kialla
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