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Title: Thank you! Thank you!
Reviewed By: Sensei Sunny :) On: June 01, 2005 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for posting that new chapter!!! I am enjoying Purity 4 so much. I look forward to seeing how the characters develop and the trouble they get into. Anyway, I am glad you submitted your new chapters. Personally, I would rather get the story sooner than wait for a beta to proof it. On another note, I am sorry that mean reviewers are hassling you again. The audacity of some of them is unbelievable. If they don't like the story, then they shouldn't read it. Whatever happened to "if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all"? I just wanted to let you know that I love all your stories and I am glad you decided to keep writing. You have a great talent for creating a whole new world for your readers. Your characters have such depth and are believable and likable. Have a great week!
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Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 01, 2005 19:21 EDT
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oooo another chapter! heh, too bad I didn't wait to leave a review on chapter 13, now you're stuck with 2 reviews from me in one day! This chapter was so fun though! lol, I've already told you this, but I absolutely love Cain's youkai. It's so funny! Especially the part about the youkai's ass dragging even though it has no ass =p All of the characters' youkai are so amusing! I just love how you've incorporated that into the story. It's so fun! LOL and Belle was so funny, telling Cain that he wouldn't get to first base with his current wardrobe and telling Cain to think about cake fairies. She is such a great character. I love her logic for having Gin go shopping with her, even though she has something else up her sleeve! Gin and Belle are so nice together too, they seem like they click really well. And Gin is so funny when she's mad. Boy I'd love to see her lay into Kich about making Belle walk home! He would so deserve that!! heh, and saying butt instead of ass....that is just too funny and too cute. This was such a wonderful chapter filled with such fun and humor. Great job, as always, Sue! ::hugs::
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Reviewed By: Esther Tan On: June 01, 2005 18:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter!!! Oh Cain can whip Inuyasha eh? U better think again Cain!! Inuyasha still THE BEST !!! Gin is really like Kagome, no wonder Inuyasha is so protective. I guess all fathers are the same, big heroes for their daughters. I like the way Gin said that when Inuyasha can't solve the problem he at least can comfort her. Is Kagome gonna have another baby? Hope so Inuyasha is great as a father though of course big macho man or dog refuse to show it. Anyway since all their kids are big already they should have another baby (how about triplets ha ha). Seriously I hope U'll consider it. (this is just a thought as I read Purity 3 & Kagome was egging Inuyasha about it). Hey love all your chapters.
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 17:53 EDT
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Poor Gin. She just doesn't quite comprehend.... She's so innocent, really and truly innocent. Sometimes, you don't want her to understand the more depressing things in life... because it would shatter her world. I haven't read a character like this in a long time. Have you ever read "Tess of the D'Urbervilles"? I don't know if I spelled that right, but I read it in high school. Tess was so innocent, I never wanted to continue the book because I knew what happened to her. Gin reminds me of her. I still love this fic! XOXO! ~pagan_sedjou
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 01, 2005 17:29 EDT
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oooooo wonderful chapter! Aww the not-a-date. It was really sweet ^_^ I just love seeing what happens between Cain and Gin. I think it's so sweet that she makes him smile again and laugh again....and maybe she'll make him want to live again. I loved how he called her his cake fairy again, and baby girl. Heh, she doesn't even seem to notice that he is calling her baby girl, either that or she just doesn't mind =) It's funny because right before you mentioned that Gin wants to do what her mother did for Inuyasha, I was just thinking about how there are similarities to the relationships. I felt so bad for Gin during the part with Eliza, and how she was so confused as to why Eliza seemed to hate her. It was so cute how Cain hugged her! As usual, I had my stupidly happy grin plastered to my face while reading this. lol, and the ending was perfect! heh, I'll look forward to seeing a confrontation between Inuyasha and Cain...and to see just who will 'wipe the floor' with who!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 17:29 EDT
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Uh oh...I don't like the sound of this....but then again, I really appreciate your battle scences...especially the one's with Inuyasha and Sesshomaru; but it looks like it'll be Cain and Inuyasha, can't wait!
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 17:23 EDT
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Again?! What is wrong with those idiots? Listen up people! If you don't like one iota of this story... @$#% off and leave Sue alone!!! You bunch of... well, I can't come up with anything right now, so profanitype will just have to do! %&$^@!*#&^%!!!!!! And Sue, if it means anything, I love this story. You rock! XOXO! ~pagan_sedjou
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 16:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks sue for answering my question. I thought maybe you did address what Isabelle was (human, hanyou,or youki) and I either had a brain fart that day or just missed it. Also your writing so indepth helps me truly love these characters ( all your characters in fact).
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Reviewed By: ColShaLin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 16:29 EDT
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I absolutely love your entire series of stories. Your OC's are deep and intriguing, I am as attached to them as I am to the original IY cast already! I can't possibly think of a reason for anyone to flame you, unless they are just so blind to truly talented writing that they can't see past the fact that Inu Yasha and Kagome aren't the headliners in this story. Keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: June 01, 2005 16:06 EDT
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awesome. i love the last two updates! you really poured some great character detail into both chapters and really gave some great internalizations to the characters and their actions. i was wondering about Kich for a while and why he was acting as he did towards Belliance and the general population on a whole but i completely understand his perspective now (and i feel bad for him, poor guy...). i love the Cain/Gin saga, it's amazing. god, the foreshadowing of this legendary fight for inu and cain is really eating away at me. i can't wait to see the showdown. (i see it coming in the last few chapters, as all good things are worth waiting for). this story is perfect, and once again, i have no idea why people would object to it. :sigh:: the ignorance of the world, i guess. don't worry...be happy! as always, the story rocks. keep it up!!!!
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Reviewed By: ll kocoum ll [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 15:20 EDT
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ooh, i'm hoping there's gonna be a sparring scene between gin and cain... n maybe inu yasha and cain... who do you think is stronger?? Excellent chapter!
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Reviewed By: Random Fan On: June 01, 2005 15:10 EDT
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The dynamics of the couples are fantastic, despite what some people say about the age differences between Cain and Gin. It's funny to me that these people can accept the idea that the characters are demons, but reject the Gin/Cain couple because they are more than a few years apart. Anyways, lol, I can see the Inuyasha/Cain fight ending with the two of them knocking each other out at the same time and Inuyasha claiming victory/gloating because he regains consciousness first. I particularly love your stories because they could, at any given moment, head off in a dozen different directions.
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Reviewed By: Geminia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 13:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gin really is a baby girl isn't she? :) Well I now know that I have a lot of wonderful drama and hopefully angst to look forward to with this couple LOL Awesome writing! Gemini
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 12:45 EDT
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both cain and gin seem still confused on what they want...gosh its obvious they're meant for each other but isabelle and cains past is what holds cain back...hmm in this chapter it shows more on how gin is still a "little girl" heh...yea i can tell that there are still some things she has yet to understand i suppose...and again this story is great!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 12:04 EDT
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she's his cake fairy! I love how when Gin is upset, she bakes ... cake at 1 am.. that's a new one.
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