| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: May 24, 2005 15:33 CDT
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(howls with laughter) you sure can set up some fun situations. seriously, when you write humor you set it up with the kind of finesse i see in neil simon comedies...excellent! now i can't wait to see what happens on the dates/dinners...
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Reviewed By: FarVistas On: May 24, 2005 15:17 CDT
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Lovely, lots of fun. I'm very eager for the next installment! (Need to work on my patience, I know. The principles of Zen elude me.) Yes, as has been observed, Belle has some growin' up ta do. (A common enough problem, youkai, hanyou or human.) Gotta cut her some slack, however. 17 is practically a baby. (Really, Kich, robbing the cradle! Uh...okay, I met my husband at 17, but of course that was different.) _______________________________________________ BTW, you don't have to have youki to have drawn-out arguments with yourself. (What's that old quote about arguing with a fool?)
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Title: Hubby's wench
Reviewed By: Inuyashas kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear Kich is gonna hit the roof. (Is it bad of me that I can't wait?)
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: May 24, 2005 11:25 CDT
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the plot thickens - Belle is going to catch it from two directions! Gin probably will too. Cain is so lost already! He's so funny trying to rationalize that it's just dinner. Great stuff!
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Reviewed By: tatooinehomebound On: May 24, 2005 09:54 CDT
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you know, if humans found out that they talk to themselves insides their heads, they'd think they were crazy.
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: May 24, 2005 08:50 CDT
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I actually feel sorry for Belle - she does have the best of intentions but she is so very much going to get in trouble with both men!! *grin* My Favorite line: It is so important to our sanity that you just not answer that, Cain. *falls out of chair laughing*
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 24, 2005 08:23 CDT
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Interesting. Bell's right, if Cain isn't good enough for Gin, no one will be. I wonder what the implications might be for marriage between two Taj-youki families. Hmmm. It's actually a shame Belle got involved in the Gin/Cain relationship; Kitch is going to be mad and think she started the whole thing. Of course the relationship was already cooking along before Belle found out. She's going to get blamed though. Kitch is right, Belle is too manipulative. It's hard to trust someone like that and it's a shame because Belle actually seems to be a nice person. She just needs to find other ways to get what she wants. It's interesting watching these two relationships develop in parallel. Thanks for the great chapter!
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Title: Hoo boy!
Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cain's in trouble, all right. Heheheheheheh! Can't wait for the next one!
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Title: woho!
Reviewed By: book_worm_lover On: May 20, 2005 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great! i finally made it to the end of all of your purity storys, well the ones that are finished. they are fantastic! i love reading them. you update so fast. i just have one question from this chap, now that i am cought up to ask one, where was Bellie during this argument between Gin and Cane? i was just wondering. thanks for the story. i love the "there is someone arguing almost everything that you do, who is smarter than you, in your head" thats great keep it up, i can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: Bandit the Army Brat On: May 20, 2005 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Sue!!!!! Hope your well.Love the new chapter.It is great. See ya ^_~!!
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Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 22:08 CDT
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Drama, its wonderful. I think Belle was lying when she said Ryo's ears were softer. She's trying to deny her feelings for Kich. I wonder what Inuyasha is going to do if he finds out about the model and Cain.
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Reviewed By: nancey not signed in On: May 19, 2005 21:35 CDT
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I just wanted to say that this was my favorite chapter so far. I love the way he got worked up because he was told that his ears are not a soft. Keep up the wonderful writing, I love your work more and more with each new story. Thanks for sharing your talient with us.
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Reviewed By: Lisa C [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel sorry for the poor cake. Though being thrown into a, more than likely, very attractive man's chest has to be a pretty good way to go.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 18:17 CDT
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I bet I know what's coming...I bet I know what's coming...I bet I know what's coming.....but just in case I'm wrong...I'm not sayin a word...:D...can't wait to see what happens next...:P...till then...Zirra
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 16:40 CDT
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whoaa gin got MAAAAAAD! but thats pretty cool that cain could handle it well...and poor kich hes "annoyed" cuz of belle lol this story is turning out really well!!
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