| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 13:35 CDT
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Yeah! I'm so happy you updated this story. :o) Great chapter. You're so good at unfolding a story. Can't wait to see what happens next...
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Reviewed By: Jesachi On: April 21, 2005 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When... WHEN will I stop being addicted to your work? Never I hope... it's a positive drug... Out of mere curiosity, (and that there were no new P3 chappie up) I checked out this story... I had a feeling that you would write one about Gin... she needed a story... maybe a Purity 5 will come out about Kichiro? Or... ooohhh... he's gonna hook up with Belle... and I checked out those pictures on that site... SO AWESOME!!! EVERYONE: you have to see those pictures!!! I love Nez!!! And Gin is too cute! I now have a better picture in my head of both those characters!!! Thanks alot!!! WHEEE!!!! So, quick question... are you going to write this AND Purity 3 or are you going to ignore this one for the moment and work on P3? Hmmm... I thought about posting my stories up here...recieved too many flamers for my liking... it got pretty good raves on AScom... ummm... I know you loe writing Fanfics... but umm... if you want, you can check out mine too... not for a while though... I need to edit my work and write some more chappies... probably won't be til summer... yeah... ANYWAY... great stroy and AWESOME PICCIES!!! Looking forward to an update!!! ~Jesachi
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Reviewed By: kaneasami On: April 17, 2005 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are postively wonderful. Every character is dear. Do keep on writing. Screw all those who oppose you or dare to hold your works in less than high regards. They are fools.
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Reviewed By: Shiga(NLI) On: April 17, 2005 11:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! I didn't know Kich would be in this one yay!! This story is rocking and it's only in the second chapter! YAY!!!!!! You are great, never forget that!!:D! BYE!!
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Title: Wonderful!!!
Reviewed By: momcitrus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Magnificent, as usual. I guess you'll have to wait to finish Purity 3 before you move on with this one. I just love your quirky sense of humor that shows in all your work. What a great family of characters you've invented! Also, the whole "marking" thing is such a clever plot device. It certainly wouldn't have bothered me if you'd gone on to describe it happening, but it's soooo very funny how all the big tough guys can't handle it.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 21:05 CDT
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great start here, and am glad your doing a Gin fan fic. she deserves it after how hard her dad and bros are to convince that dating is an okay activity, geez stupid over-protective bakas all of them. *sigh* oh well, she'll get what she deserves and so will they. :D wonderful so far, Zirra
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Title: HELLO!
Reviewed By: rachainu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this story is so great so far. But during what timeline does it occur? Like during the same time as Purity 3, or a bit after, and if so, how much later? And who is this story going to be mainly about? Kichiro? Gin? How old is Cain? Well, I have to go. Great chapter and story. Bye!
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Reviewed By: tinky On: April 07, 2005 14:59 CDT
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hey #4 isn't that bad. keep going. p.s write more of #3!!!!please^_^
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 13:52 CDT
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YAY! I don't know why I didn't see this earlier. My computer is evil. I'm so happy you're doing a fan fic for Gin and Kichiro. I love them. Very interesting that you're doing both their stories at once. I don't think I've ever seen you do that. Can't wait to see what happens!!!!
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Title: Questions
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sue as always, great writing. But I had a question. You said how many human years apart kich and belle are. But how many human years difference is gin and cain zelig are? he just seems so much older than she is. Is that true?
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Title: Adding to the Mix
Reviewed By: LavenderRose [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 11:52 CDT
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Way cool! I liked the idea of a Gin-centric story, now it's a Gin AND Kich story. One question: When Belle was in Kich's office, she kept thinking about his ears twitching. Does he drop his concealment when he's in his private office, or can those of youkai descent just automatically see through any other's concealments? Get everyone at home better soon!
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Reviewed By: Arme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 09:25 CDT
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Loving this one so far! I'm so happy to see another purity continuation and glad to know that you are having fun writing it. Keep up the amazing work, it's very appreciated!
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Title: lovely
Reviewed By: rage2velvet (not signed in) On: April 04, 2005 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gomen nasai! I unworry b/c I've been reading and not reviewing. I hope and pray for you and your family to get well soon. I'm sad to hear you are all ill! So much sickness this season. I'm very excited about this story! I'm happy that this mystery guy is youkai, too! I was so interested inn Aiko's story (b/c of her marriage and baby)-your original characters are so beautifully written. Please rest and get well soon! TTYL bad kittie le sabre
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: ALT(deep Serenity) On: April 04, 2005 08:14 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter 2 is great! Two stories in one! Oh the tension! I can see it now! we'll have to strong minded fathers flipping there lids! then Belle might have some issues with her step mom, being barely older then her, wow, this is set up to be very interesting story, with a lot of angles great great job
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Reviewed By: Odoriko-chan On: April 03, 2005 21:53 CDT
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Wow... O_o Things just got interesting...I love it! Coincidence? I think not ^-^ It's kinda weird though to read Purity 4 when Purity 3 isn't done and reading them at the same time...but I love it anyways!
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