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Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: May 26, 2005 21:36 CDT
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Ah Sue, I am enjoying this story so much! I'm loving the characters already =) Gin is just too adorable and too sweet, and oh my, chapter 11 was hilariously funny! She has no idea the effect that she has on Cain...he's doomed! Belle is an amazing character as well. She's got spunk and spirit, but then there's more to her than meets the eye. I feel kind of bad for her. I mean, I know Cain's promise is extremely important to her and to youkai in general, but that has to be so hard knowing that your father won't be around to see your children grow up, that the man who was there your entire life may not be there again. That would be so hard. I really love Cain too. I love the way he's drawn to Gin and her pure spirit and nature, and yet he still tries to fight back his attraction. LOL, I just love it when the characters argue with their youkai, that's one of the funniest things. Cain's youkai calling him a bad dog and telling him down was just too funny! I love the end of chapter 11, with Cain laughing for the first time in a while. It may seem like such a little thing, but the fact that Gin could bring that out in him means the world. I'm so looking forward to seeing what is in store for everyone =)
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Reviewed By: Lisa C [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have picked my favorite character for Purity 4. Cain's youkai. He makes me laugh. *snicker*
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Reviewed By: Eshter Tan On: May 26, 2005 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Wow Wow !!!! Its so fun & humorous. Poor Cain taken down by a little girl (ha ha soooo wicked). I like one chapter at the end Cain's youkai telling him "we're in trouble". Can I ask a question? I thought the youkai voice was the one to help the youkai/hanyou know their mate & possibly egg them along to get their mate. So why is Cain's youkai trying to stop him to be close to Gin? But I luv Cain's youkai, he's so cute. Boy, Inuyasha you gonna get yr ass whipped by Cain. But I think Cain understand Inuyasha's feelings & protectiveness about Gin. Thanks for acknowledging my reviews. If I do step out of line in some of my babblings please let me know. When I luv reading a story I get overboard. Actually (& this ain't fake), all your stories have character & I luv the difference. Keep on writing no matter what cos' I think U are just great. Until next chapter.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 17:44 CDT
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I had a feeling that Inuyasha would rear his cute little puppy head...Kagome should have sat him (if she still had the power)
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 17:11 CDT
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great chapter....sorry i can't talk right now update asap please, till then, Zirra
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 16:37 CDT
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LLLMMMMAAAOOOO!! dang that wuz hilarious...cain and gin....heh when kich was on the phone i had a feeling that it was inuyasha telling him about gin...and i wuz like uh-oh but it wasnt...dang if kich was pissed at belle now i cant imagine what he'll feel when he finds out about gin and cain...wow this story is great
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Reviewed By: RatherFabulous On: May 26, 2005 16:36 CDT
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The whole Purity series has been a lot of fun. Can't wait to see how this turns out. (Belle is annoying, isn't she? Ah well, been there myself...)
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Title: It is sooo hard to read when Mom, nephew, roommate & phone keep distracting you.
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 16:03 CDT
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I thought it was all over when Daddy showed up and saw his little girl sitting with a grown male. I could almost hear the snarling from a dog-fight. LOL InuYasha is so predictable and Gin is so quixotic. The slightest encouragement sends her joy skyrocketing past the clouds and one harsh word drops her heart below her feet. She is keeping Cain so off-balance, even his youkai is in a state of confusion. "Can I touch it? Pleeeease?" I thought Cain was going to have a coronary over that one! LMAO!!! -- Poor Belle, she rubbed Kich the wrong way without trying and now she's having to re-think her regular habits. She's been daddy's-little-girl for too long and, while she always wants her daddy close, she's ready to explore being and independant adult. Her fear of losing her father is holding her back from asserting herself, convinced that if she shows she doesn't need him to protect her from the world, he will carry through on his promise to join her dead mother. Pushing Gin at him may sound like an ideal idea, but has she considered Gin's feelings if Cain decides against living? Belle is very impulsive and her 'foresight' is very rusty and incomplete. I wonder what will open her eyes to how wrong her manipulation is, no matter how well intentioned. "The path to hell is paved with good intentions" is a quote that is still very true.
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Title: SOTFLMFAO!
Reviewed By: Wlfhund On: May 26, 2005 14:27 CDT
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LMFAO! That was way to good! That was hysterical! He thought, he thought, his uhum! OH MY GOD! I am still laughing. That was just to good to be! Way to go Sue! Although I don't see Youkai uhum's being soft and fluffy! Way to go Cain! That was a great time not to be paying attention! See what it costs when you don't pay attention! No dignity in that one! Oh, on to other things... Inuyasha is just gonna explode isn't he? I can see his head exploding! I just have to wonder how Kagome is gonna keep him under control! Do Hanyous spontaneously combust?
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan (not loged in ) On: May 26, 2005 13:26 CDT
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BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH Oh man there are too many great things to say about this chapter WOW just WOW!!!! One Belle so rocks she is easily one of my fav OC's in your story's "the girls are just great" its nice to see such a self assured confident woman taking on one of fav hanyou's. Kich NEEDS a woman like that to keep him in line. SHe soooo rocks Kich has so met his match in Belle! But WOW what a B@ST@RD he was I couldn't believe it!!!! I mean I totally understand why Kichiro is the way he is but WOW Belle should so make the boy grovel she won't but hell I would! And the Cain Yasha meeting?! Well you KNEW it was going to be big but this was HUGE!!! WOW they are so always going to hate each other! Baby girl LOL thats too cute LOL. Gin so cracks me up between her babbling and her off the wall comments.. LOL she is just too funneh!
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Reviewed By: lesaleenotsignedin On: May 26, 2005 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO! I loved this chapter... even if you didn't update this story for a month, this chapter would hold me over. Poor Gin bwa hahahaa! As usual, awesome work!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 12:24 CDT
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LOL!! I thought Gin and Cain would run into Belle and Kich not Inu and Kags! I'm still very curious as to how you'll work out the whole fact that they'll be dating there in-laws or whatever. I shouldn't really matter since they're youkai and the age differance isn't a big deal, but I'm curious about any other twists that happen. Love your work!!
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: May 26, 2005 12:11 CDT
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Lovely! Not totally a disaster for Gin and Cain, but damn close. I'm sure InuYasha has not finished scolding Gin about it either. It's Cain's own fault for not listening to Gin the whole time, no wonder he was confused about the subject matter!-his youkai - to funny! I think it is just a matter of time before Cain tackle-glomps Gin. As for Belle, I guess it's time to grow up. I wonder how the office tension will be? I also wonder how Kich will handle finding out the Gin is who Belle has hopes for saving her dad... Good stuff - I'm looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: May 26, 2005 11:01 CDT
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*sigh* I love your men! (and women too but Cain has me seriously amused)
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 10:44 CDT
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`Bad dog, Cain! Bad! Leave Gin alone! Down, boy!' LMAO! That has got to be one of the funniest lines you've had in any of your fics! hehe :o) I loved the whole coversation at the end with Cain and Gin. You're... just awesome. I love you. Great chapter. Oh, and I would have to say that Kichiro is way more spastic then Ryo... lol
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