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| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] | | Pages (148): [ « ‹ 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 › » ] | Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 13:39 CDT
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yay!! another update...*snickers at Cain* jelousy doesn't suit him...oh well maybe he'll start realizing that gin isn't just a dream...wish Gin would hear her youkai...does she i can''t remember if she's ever actually talked to it like Kich, Ryo, Toga, and Cain(and anyone else who i may have forgotten)?? oh well, update asap, 'till then...Zirra
| Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usualy dont post on media miner (yours is actualy the first Media Miner review I've done) but I have reviewed your story on Fanfiction.net under the same name. Anyway, this chapter reminds me of some of the more OOC Sesshoumaru/Rin stories I've read. But just because it's out of Sesshoumaru's character, does not mean that it's bad, or that it's out of Cain's character. Anyway, I hope you get around to posting these on Fanfiction.net, or at least that FF.net decides to send out the notices to me at some point....
| Title: You are hazardous to my health
Reviewed By: kamackie21(nsi) On: May 13, 2005 13:02 CDT
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Dang Sue....I'm going to have a permanent bruise from falling out of my chair laughing. This chapter was awesome! Poor Cain...their youkai's are calling each other and he's ignoring it. Hmmmm.... Anyways wonderful chapter again!
| Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 12:47 CDT
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Sue this chapter was absolutley amazing. I was just waiting for the Nipple Noogies to ensue after the pantsing, but a tied up Kich on display isn't bad either! I was thinking ecchi pants during the flashback. ROTFLMAO! I am so in love with your characters. Gin is so fresh, and innocent and trusting, she's like a breath of fresh air. Her youkai is hilarious! This chapter just seems so fresh and lively. I can tell that you really enjoyed writing it, and that made me smile as much as the chapter itself. You have such a knack for making the story real. Poor Cain is in such internal conflict, I can't believe he's going to follow Gin and Montaro....the troubles the troubles. I am so looking forward to reading what happens next. Sue you are amazing! Thank you!
| Reviewed By: ghostwrider On: May 13, 2005 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sue, you have surpassed your other accolades with this chapter! This chapter rocks! I especially love the slumber party, and I have had something similar happen at a party of mine as a kid. My brother and his friends were the same way. It must be a male characteristic. Keep up the good work and the sense of Humor! ninjalou
| Title: O.O!! I knew the boys were bad, but...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 12:00 CDT
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...Depantsing each other in front of a gaggle of teenage girls??? That is sooo wrong! ROFLMAO!! -- I about died with Gin's inner conversation, trying to bolster her courage about the nude model. Hehehe, "Men's bodies were made for function, Gin, not beauty." Gee, it's a good thing I installed that seat belt; you had me rolling again. --- O.O You managed to sneak that in there, didn't you...Twice! *giggle* -- oh my, Cain is about to loose it. His youkai is telling him to back away from attaching himself to Gin to prevent her from bonding with him. He understands the reasons why he shouldn't let her get close, but he can't help himself. One tiny little emotional upset from her, and he's all over it. Now it looks like he's following her and her would-be suitor, almost like a snarling guard-dog. (no pun intended...I think) I hope that Montaro keeps his hands to himself. It appears that Cain's jealousy is volitile and his instincts to protect what is his is stronger than the cautioning voice of his youkai blood. When you try to hold back a wild thing, words are not strong enough, you need heavy ropes and sheer muscle. I wonder what promise Cain made that makes him determined to follow his mate into the afterlife and not find a reason to live. How much could she have loved him? To ask him to seek death? That sounds very selfish to me and I hope I'm wrong with this supposition. When you love someone, you want them to be happy, whether they are with you or not.
| Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: May 13, 2005 11:26 CDT
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Oh Sue! This was amazing and quite comical... I feel like I'm in jr. high again, giggling and snickering over the word "penis." And the model's name meaning "big boy..." HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHA! Do you have a special laughter machine hidden away somewhere? ah, it might take me awhile to recover from this. Sorry for not reviewing--- I have inhereited a "grand" new summer schedule.. starting at 6:30 am till 10 pm... It goes: work out, classes, goto work right after, home, sleep, repeat. I promised my self no summer terms this year. Gah. I broke that promise :(. Nether-the-less, your writings continue to bring smiles and joy to my rather hectic life and I do still enjoy reading your stories, and probably will forever. Great job, I adore this story and the characters, and your creativity never ceases to amazing me... Hmm, when will Papa Inu find out about Gin's new male influences in her life? te he he. I cannot wait. Ciao! --Aitu
| Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 02:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heheheheheheheheh! This just keeps getting better and better! Belle's comparison of Ryo and Kich's ears had me rolling.
| Reviewed By: Leena On: May 12, 2005 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to apologize upfront. This review is not specifically for Purity 4, though I am truly enjoying the next generation and the new characters you have introduced. I was distressed to read the bottom of you author page. And I am ashamed to say that I have read and enjoyed your stories many times, but failed to review in a timely manner. Good intentions and all that. I have read everyone of your Inuyasha pieces and enjoyed them immensely. You are an exceptional writer, creative and clear in your work. All of your pieces challenge and reward the readers. Characters are wonderfully and painstakingly considered and developed. All encounters (sexual included) are well placed and flow with what would be in the best interest of the characters, not what rude reviewers demand. I can only imagine how long and hard you work on your pieces because of my own experience. I look forward to reading your work because I find it so close to the canon in many ways that it is just like viewing an episode, and alternate universe, but still one of many venues the 'true' storyline could take. I guess the main thing I want to do with this review is to simply tell you how wonderful your work is and that YOU ARE APPRECIATED. I know that it can get exceptionally difficult in the face of all of the negativity that is on the internet. I do hope that you will continue to write & post your work where it can be read and enjoyed. In any case, I think your pairings, canon & new, are fabulous. Keep @
| Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww poor Cain. I have a song I shared chat that reminds me of this fic. I can see Cain and Gin when I hear it. I love how real your characters are!
| Title: Desperately trying not to 'snerk'...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 12:30 CDT
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o.O I just had a thought; If Gin & Belle's Youkai voices start spouting...the silent 4-way conversations...oh, the mind boggles. Do they even have youkai voices or is that just a male thing? If not, maybe it's because males (in general) live in denial and often don't think things through before they do something, so they need that little voice to be a bit louder so they can't ignore it. Anyway -- Cain blushing??? Oh my. I can just see any kind of intimate conversation between Gin and Cain being full of stammering, blushing, darting eyes and panic. LOL It sounds cute...but hardly constructive. Somebody has got to take charge there, and since Cain is trying to deny (see?) his attraction to Gin, maybe she will surprise us and make up his mind for him. *snigger* I will wait and see (and love it whatever happens, I'm sure) That is just too cute that the 'Cake Fairy' is keeping Cain supplied with goodies. "The way to a man's heart is through his stomach." I wonder if Gin is doing it on purpose or just out of the kindness of her innocent heart. Probably the latter, but the effects are still the same. Cain will never be able to eat another cake without associating it with Gin. Hehehe, this is gonna be fun. - What in the world...? Belle is trying to grab ears?? I thought she despised her temporary boss. Mistaking Ryo for Kich is understandable if she didn't know about him having a twin, but to try and grab his ears...what brought that on? Irresistble impulse? -dang, out of | Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 12, 2005 08:08 CDT
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Heh. I love the way Gin can bring Cain to his knees without even trying. Too bad about the mug, that was kinda sad. One of the tough things about being nigh-immortal must be outliving all your human friends. Hmmm. Kich and Belle. There's a difficult match. May make the troubles Ryo and Nez had figuring out their relationship look easy. How did a nice girl like Kagome end up with such difficult boys? Grin. Actually, I wonder why the youki families have so few pups. Only three for Inuyasha and, as best as I can remember, Toga is an only child. Maybe the parents start a new batch of pups every few decades. Thanks for the great update. BTW I love Ryo's choice of curse words.
| Reviewed By: Kitcat99 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just what I needed after writing 7 pages in a history exam. Ugh one more test left...seeing the update notification was a pleasant surprise. Great chapter as always, really loved the "cake fairy" comment and a question I had about how you are handling youkai mating just got answered. I can't believe Belle grabbed Ryo's ear…or tried to. Heh, kind of wonder why Nez didn't correct her though. Doesn't Ryo smell like cat as well as Nez? Since he spends a lot of time around Yukitora. Kich as the more tolerant of his family, in the words of Inuyasha "feh!" that is a far stretch though he is a bit more tolerant than Ryo. It seems like Cain feels responsible for his mate's death or something…I'm guessing it has something to do with marking. That part was a bit unclear so the only thing I can think involving that much blood and a promise would be him marking her or something…that or she died in childbirth. I'm eagerly awaiting the clarification and explanation. Kitcat ^_^
| Reviewed By: red-kitsune On: May 11, 2005 22:42 CDT
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*snort* ear-rubbing... :D This series is wonderful! It made a great excuse to get no housework done, but nesting is here. Oh, well. :P I've been trying to review for weeks, but my poor little Mac's having issues. I love the characters, the situations they find themselves in, and the self-delusions they wallow in. Can't wait to see more!
| Reviewed By: D.V. On: May 11, 2005 22:36 CDT
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Cool! This is progressing really well! I have the feeling Cain is deceptively gentle - being in a high position like he is, I'm very curious about how he shows his strength. 'Still waters' and all that, LOL. The bit of mystery makes him a very intriguing character. I really enjoyed the misunderstanding with the twins - those situations are always fun (to read AND to write). I'm really looking forward to the rest of this! Thanks! ^_~
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