| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: May 31, 2005 11:26 CDT
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So lonely - so sad - and a whole bottle of whiskey - no wonder he nearly kissed her. Ah the course of true love never runs smoothly - but it's sure fun!
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Title: i love it...
Reviewed By: QamarNoor [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't beging to tell you how much I love this story. How you protray the characters emotions is amazing, I was crying throuhgout this chapter. another reason I think why i've come to like this story so much is because I can relate to these characters, especially Gin- the sheltered innocent girl with an over protective family. and I too am quite like that. thank you for writing this wonderful story, i'll be eagerly awaiting more of it. Take care sue
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Title: *giggles*
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 11:11 CDT
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As always I love your writing. You author notes were quite interesting too. Heh. What I can't wait for is a meeting with the four of them. I have this insane vision in my head of Gin and Belle doing something together and getting in trouble and Cain and Kich just happening to show up together and instead of Kich going to his sister and Cain to his daughter to see if they are ok Kich goes to Bella and Cain to Gin and we have a nice akward momement. lol. But I'm sure whatever you have planned is much better then my silly ramblings.
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 11:02 CDT
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Yikes, someone piss you off, Sue? I hate stupid people... Anyway, great chapter. Belle and Kichiro are going to be an intense couple, I think. 'Can't wait for that relationship to develop. Great job, as always. Try not to let ignorant people bother you, too much, ok? They're just... ya know, ignorant. lol Have a good day. *hugz*
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Reviewed By: yashafan18 On: May 31, 2005 03:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you stories please please please update soon it is such a good story all you stories are great me and my friend yasha101 love your stories she is the one who told me about them and i'm glad she did so please update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kiaraecko On: May 31, 2005 02:41 CDT
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love it!! i was laughing when inuyasha and kagome saw gin and cain LOL oh poor inuyasha lol hpwever i thought that it would be kich walking in on gin LOL but this was so much better!! just wanted to say that Purity 3 was amazing and youre doing an awesome job with purity 4! keep up the good work :)
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Reviewed By: mizbum2u On: May 30, 2005 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yeah! and the transforming thing... LMAO! i laughed til i cried... damn that was funny!
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Reviewed By: mizbum2u On: May 30, 2005 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh heh... this is awesome! you've out done it this time sue! i've got a few questions though... In purity 3, you said Ryo's miko blood kept his youkai blood in line, thus his youkai is like his consciounce. I noticed Belle has that kind of thing too... was her mother a miko? maybe im just misinterpreting... another thing... I see the pairings are kich/belle and gin/Cain. If cain and belle have a father-daughter thing... and Gin and kich have a brother and sister thing... what would happen if one of them become mates first? it would be like mating your uncle-by law(for gin) or your sister-by law(kich) this is really funny though! haha.. "down boy" Cain is awesome! just the perfect match for Gin. Inuyasha kicks a$$ but hopefully the Tai-youkai of AMERICA(notice the captilization) can beat him for Gin. okay, last question! is their age difference a bad thing? i mean Cain is hundreds of years old! when Gin is in her 20's! not that its a big deal-right? and resorting to previous chapters since i didn't read them until today: Gin threw cake at cain! awesome! you go girl! and the date... haha! this is getting real interesting! love it! hopefully, we'll get un update soon? i love your work so much sue! ~hien~
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Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 05:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last two chapters were so funny, I laughed 'til I cried. The funniest thing was that Cain really is falling for Gin and his youkai is trying to talk him out of it. That and the near-fight with InuYasha. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was amazing! I had so much fun reading the chapters. I especially love it when the characters have converstaions/arguments with their youkai. All of them are witty and funny, all so lovable. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Radio... screw signing in On: May 28, 2005 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know if this has been addressed... what kind of dog is Cain? I was thinking, Belle doesn't have dog ears, but if she and Kich had a kid there would be a 50% chance at least that their kids would have dog ears I think... but that leads the question as to what they would look like. I mean, if Cain is a lab, those would be some cute, really soft ears. If Cain is like InuYasha, well, then they would be similar. But what if he were a cocker spaniel? Those would be some pretty funny looking ears. Anyway... great chapter, time to catch up on P3!
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Reviewed By: BOWJAY2005 On: May 27, 2005 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Needs a warning label, Can Be Addicting. I do have a couple of questions. At the end of Purity 3 it felt like you still had something to say? Did you? Are you going to fold that into this fic or add an epilogue to Purity 3. Also is Ryo and Nyz married in this. Did they do the marking. Is Cain related to Sess? Have you posted more that nine chapters. I am having a hard time getting to all of the chapters. Please feed my addiction. Another question. If someone had the blood transfusion like for the marking, but not the mating, lets say a human child or something, would it extend or protect their life? Lets say that Inuyasha and Kagome had concieved a child on the night of the New Moon. Could a blood transfer from Inuyasha mark the child as belonging to him, but not be his mate. And would the mark have the same life extending and quicker healing that it did for Siera? Purity 3 also opened up the door for the family to band together and fight together. Will we see that? Why did Cain not want to ever return to Japan? If the flamers are getting too much send them this way. I could use a source of cheap energy, and I can return fire for the free entertainment value.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 27, 2005 00:15 CDT
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"This Kichiro will never fear the Belle-chan's rack" - too funny! I'm still grinning over that line. What a horrible, embarrassing scene in the restaurant (both restaurants actually). It's going to be sooo difficult to get Inuyasha to see Gin as anything other than a little girl. No wonder all the men end up marrying human women, youki women are too overprotected (grin). Thanks for another great chapter! I wonder how much of a fuss Cain is going to make when he learns Belle is interested in a young man. He'll probably have the same reaction as Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: May 27, 2005 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am really enjoying this story. The relationships seem to be progressing nicely. Though, I am still trying to understand Belles'personality (what makes her tick) and behavior(s). I am thinking 'openly candid but possibly masking innocence.' Gin and Cain are definitely the most interesting couple. It's always a hoot when InuYasha and Kagome come into the picture. Thank you as always. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: May 26, 2005 21:50 CDT
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YAY for confrontations!!! i really expected for Gin and Cain to run into kich, just cause kich knows that belle is trying and would be all sorts of peeved, but that was so much better!!!! LMAO. poor inu, Kagome must have had a helluva time pulling him off the walls of thier house (why can i see daddy-dearest waiting for Gin at home??). man, that was awesome. i can't stop smilling over that (is that a bad thing?). hehe. i love how suddenly cain is calling Gin 'baby girl'. i can see the hundreds of 'monk in pain' red colors that are going to be summoned when inu hears that!!! LOL. woot!!!
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