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Reviewed By: leyley On: June 10, 2005 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I laughed until I had tears running down my face. This story just keeps getting better and better. Poor Gin, she is totaly clueless. Inuyasha needs to let her live just a little. Last but not least thank you for letting them kiss at last. YOU ARE THE BEST.
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Reviewed By: ghostwrider On: June 10, 2005 16:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the "Woof!" Good storytelling as always, Sue. I really like the interplay between Gin and Cain. Kich, however, I would like to sit-big freaking time! He is turining into a little snot. Poor Belle! You have a gift of creating wonderful characters and plotslines that move at a natural pace. Let the story write itself in its own time and Fuch anyone who isn't happy about it. It's YOUR story afterall! I like it and look forward to Tuesday, with much anticipation. Have a good weekend and enjoys yourself and some down time, Lady Sue. Peace and Blessings on you and your family . Ghostwriding Ninjalou
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Reviewed By: fairia On: June 10, 2005 15:35 EDT
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*Whimper* ....What? Where did I say that, or even insinuate that? I sent two pictures and told you that they were yours to do with as you pleased, (and I meant that!)so posting them or not is entirely your call. I don't know weather you're teasing or annoyed, so I'll just stick with being confused... I'm sorry if I offended you? I didn't mean to, and I must say I had a great deal of fun trying to draw more pictures on my TDY. Whiled away many boring hours in "class" (though I must say, after going through Air Traffic Control tech school, where you literally spent 12 hours a day doing intense study, this one barely required half a brain) doodling all over my notes. Even though I'm no artist (just good enough to recognise my work is fatally flawed) I think I have a pretty good one of Ryo, if I can ever find a damn scanner, and assuming you want it. But...umm...what did I do..?
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 15:27 EDT
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O.o? Uh oh...Kich looks like he's about to have his ass handed to him by one very protective father! He has been really stubborn over what he thinks about Belle and how assinine he's been acting. Whatever happened to that 'man-whore' who could shmooze the females into drooling over him? Maybe he should fight fire with fire instead of just throwing gasoline on the flames. LoL -- Poor Gin, she wants to be known as a 'big girl' but hasn't a clue how to become one. Maybe she should have a talk with her mother. Kagome is pretty savvy and she knows how InuYasha's over-protective behavior has inhibited her daughters social growth. That's why she pushed to allow Gin to move out, to experience life with a little more freedom. Kagome knows that Gin is capable of protecting herself, especially from humans that she could toss around like rag-dolls if it came to that. No, the only thing Gin has to fear is emotional pain, and I'm sure that, as a mother and a smart one too, Kagome understands that there are some things that one needs to learn for one's self to earn a level of confidence that can take on the world...and stand up to a dog-eared daddy! :)
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Psyco_chick32 (i have this problem with not signing in...) On: June 10, 2005 15:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow... Kich is really being an ASS, isn't he?? I love it... but wow... I'd LOVE to see Cain lay him out on the ground... but then again, I love Kich and wouldn't want him hurt... I feel so, so, so bad for Gin. My friend had a family like that, where she really couldn't do anything. Bad things ended up happening... but I'm still really glad to know that this'll have a happy ending! God, you are great at angst.
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Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 15:01 EDT
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Booyah....Gin laid the verbal smackdown on Kich. Although she may have to take to a physical smackdown to actually make all the over protective males in her life listen for a change. I can just see all 4 of them gathering in the hallway and yelling. I can't wait for Monday's chapter Sue! Bows down to the almight Sueric. hehehehehe ~ teh mackie
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: June 10, 2005 14:42 EDT
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Oh SNAP! Looks like the shit is about to hit the fan, muhahahahaha. I was contemplating it over in my head if it was possible to create an even better ending that what was already produced... after meditating upon this for several days, I have came to the conclusion that No, there was not a possibility of having a better way to end that chapter. hehehe. I think that if i was 3 again, I would use my favorite phrase of "Ut-O Spaghetti-O's!" to describe the tension between Cain and Kich. Hmm. Will there be some rowdy boys laying the smacketh downeth in the next chapter? Ah, the national weather sevrice has issued a severe testosterone storm warning in effect for the following places: Gin's appartment complex... What's wrong with me today? lol. Poor Gin.. You have to feel bad for someone who has led such a shelterd life that she's never even been out to a club before and she's 20-what? If I was her-- I might try to prove a point by running far far away.. Hmm, maybe some where like, oh, I don't know--- AMERICA, which is ironically where Cain is from!?!?! dun Dun DUN! Did I just figure out part of the plot? muhahahaha. hehe. Okay, I'll stop it with my over-dramatics for the day. I best be running, don't want the "prision guards" to come to my house to reel me into work. Hasta Luego! --Aitu
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Title: chapter 20
Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 14:15 EDT
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And the butt-wad of the year award goes to...........Kichiro Izayoi (sp?)!!!! Wow! Kich really was an ass wasn't he? Poor Belle, and she was going to give him another chance too *sigh* They are on one helluva rollercoaster ride. I wonder what Cain will think of the situation. Speaking of Cain, I wonder how he'll react to Gin being in the club, after he hands Kich his ass on a platter. Another chapter beautifully crafted by 'Teh Sueric'. Thanks :) ~frankie~
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Title: Chapter 20
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 10, 2005 13:31 EDT
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Yay for great chapters!! Gin and Belle out together are so much fun! They're different but then they're alike in their personalities, too, that it's so fun seeing them together. I bet it's nice for Belle to be able to go out and do the things she did with her friends back in the States. I just love those characters! But bad Kich! He's so mean to Belle! 'Daughter of Darkness'....ouch! lol, but hey Belle can hold her own and that's what I love about her, though sometimes I'd like to smack Kich around for her anyway ;) Cain meeting Kich is going to be....interesting to say the least!! And Cain does not sound so happy right now, heh. Kind of a cliffhanger, lol, I can't wait to see what's going to happen between the two!
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Reviewed By: #1@work On: June 10, 2005 13:08 EDT
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Yes...I completely agree with Belle's final thought!! He is a grade A prime *ss, (with probably a nice looking one too) But it seems like he's about to get it beat!! GO CAIN!! This story continues to get more and more amusing! Poor Cain is loooong gone over Gin and Kich needs a leash to keep him off Belle...I don't know if that's good or bad...I don't think HE knows either...but it's amusing to no end. This cliffhanger was a killer...I can't wait to see what happens on MONDAY. *cries* A whole weekend to wait. Your words are like a drug, I can't get enough of them.
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Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy(i hate signing in) On: June 10, 2005 12:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sigh, it's a long wait until Monday. I can't wait to see Kich try to get out of this. I bet he's gonna need help.
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Reviewed By: chichiwvu -NSI On: June 10, 2005 12:42 EDT
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DRAMA!!!!!!!! woo hoooooooo O.o ... I wonder what Cain's gonna do to Kich!! Muah hahahaha
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Reviewed By: Kialla [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 11:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this one! if i could draw, i would draw Gin in the cute dress that made her feel like a princess and draw the wing that Cain made her on her back! that would be so cute! i'm gonna go do that right now! ... although... i'm not sure how good it's gonna turn out... -.- good chapter! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Darksquire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 11:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I love it! "I'm a big girl!" That is hilarious. It is very Gin like as well. I can't wait for the next chapter! Exciting!
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Title: Ooohh no....
Reviewed By: red-kitsune On: June 10, 2005 04:55 EDT
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Belle teaching Gin to dance? I can see all kinds of hell, hate, and discontent comming from this.. :P Can't wait! Thanks for updating so regularly. Makes for a very happy addict.
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