| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2207 ] |
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Reviewed By: EAP On: June 21, 2005 00:39 CDT
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Aww, that ending was kind of angsty. Different than how I thought it would turn out, i had a P3 flashback wih that towel...Interesting though. And manly candy? Thats just ridiculous. Candy is candy! Its all yummy. I really enjoyed this chapter, thanks so much for updating!
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Title: O.o? Man Pocky? Is there such a thing?
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 20:02 CDT
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Ryo has a problem with the idea that his daddy and mommy have...relations?? Oh, that is just priceless! LOL - Cain and Belle got the full Izayoi/Inutaisho experience that time, with the 'Baka' gene in full display. Belle fit right in with the playfullness with her comment, "...Gin has fairy connections." -- Kich's attempt to apologize to Belle for his earlier behavoir was understandably ill-recieved, with good reason. She's too suspicious of him now and has her protective wall up. And then he goes all mysterious on her, keeping her off balance and confused. I couldn't begin to guess what Kich will do next, but the moves are all in his court because he scared her off but good. He's changing his mind about her, I wonder what it will take to changer her mind about him?
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Reviewed By: benlzy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 19:37 CDT
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WOooo! Another baby 4 IY and Kagome!!! Hurray!!! Hahaha... are they rili 2 old 4 sex?! Lol... Hope Belle would 4give Kichiro... Wonderful writing from a wonderful person. Ur stories are a work of art; keep them coming!!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: June 20, 2005 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I about coughed up a lung, laughing so hard, at this chapter. (Hack!Cackle!Hack!) Kicharo and Belle are becoming more and more interesting, individually; and Cain appears to be more approachable. For some reason I thought that Cain would be most similiar to Sesshoumaru but he appears to be developing into an entirely different type of personality. You did a fine job on the chapter. Thank you for sharing. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: TheGreatMinionRalph [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh.My.God. That was VERY possibly the funniest damn thing I have ever read in all my life!!! I had to put the laptop down and catch my breath, and my sides were aching!!! I haven't laughed like that in a very, very long time. Thank you. I may be your biggest fan(though I know that I have some tough competition in THAT category!) Long Live Purity, And ALL It's Continuations!!!
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 16:22 CDT
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sry for the lack of reviews i've been away on a trip...but newayzzzz i finished reading the chapters that i missed and i just have to say is that the story seems to be getting more INTENSE and even more hilarious!!! haha the part of the girlz staring at cains chest at the tournament wuz sooo funny lol and ryo and the "sex" comment about his mom and dad...priceless lmao but dang the ending of this last chapter right here is so sad with kich and belle...:( great story sue...its absolutely wonderful
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Reviewed By: Descendant of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 14:17 CDT
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Would Cain and Gin's children be hanyou or full youkai, or something else?
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 14:06 CDT
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Very nice. Manly candy, gotta love that. I need more, more Cain and Gin, definately more Belle and Kich. It'll be nice to see the two couples get together. Can't wait for more. ttfn
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Title: Chapter 26
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 20, 2005 12:50 CDT
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Ryo is so funny! His line about his parents have sex was hilarious, he sounded more like a child than a grown man and that was cute! heh, but another baby for Inuyasha and Kagome, that will be great!! I love that Kich plays the piano too. It's kind of funny because I don't think I'd have ever expected that he could, but yet it also seems very fitting for him as well. LOL man parts and body hair...I love Cain. That was so funny! And now they're going to go buy more candy...Gin may be literally bouncing off the walls now! I'm so glad that Kich went over to Belle's to apologize to her. I can't blame her reaction to him, I would still be angry too and he really hurt her, but I think it's really nice that he did go to apologize. I'm looking forward to seeing where their relationship takes them and how it develops!
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Reviewed By: Rhiara (not signed in) On: June 20, 2005 12:02 CDT
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I. Just. LOVE. ALL. Your. Work. I have just spent the better part of three days reading EVERY SINGLE ONE! dang it I'm exhausted now! There are some things that I love about your stories, that make them, to my mind, quite unique in the sometimes predictable and stale world that is Fanfiction. Your characters are so real, so vivid, you understand them on a very deep level. You don't simply take the name, face, and some of the mannerisms to get them to play out a scene you conjure up, they conjure the scene for you. If there are OOC moments, one can see perfectly the development which leads to said moment, therefore making it not OOC at all (if that makes sense...) The same is true with your OC's, also. I can fully believe them as individuals in their own right, with histories and reasons for their actions. But you reveal these motives skillfully and subtely, chronologically even, and at the end of the story it seems obvious why everything happened. However, you manage to get these characters into such deep proverbial shit that when reading it my stomach twists and I want to scream at them NO BAKA DON'T DO THAT! Sorry, carried away. I'm left simply desperate for the next installment. I truly hope that those people who aren't worth your trouble will not stop you writing, because these stories you share are truly worth sharing. I hope you don't think this is empty flattery, because I absolutely adore all your stories, your characters, and the way you weave a DAMN good yarn! (hugs) |
Reviewed By: Akihanah On: June 20, 2005 09:53 CDT
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Kich playing piano? Its somehow a little shocking, but I can see him doing it. Piano also really streghtens your hands and makes them realy steady. Thats probably good for a doctor, especially a plastic surgeon...is that what Kich is? He mentions that all these perfect women come in but still want stuff done...just curious. Anyways, great job, see ya next time.
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Reviewed By: Shinzen On: June 20, 2005 07:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, looks like Kich finally admittied it to himself, now if only Belle could stop being so stubborn :P
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 07:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Men Pocky. Never heard about that. The Koala Candy with the chocolate filling don't happen to be the Panda ones are they? I just love those. Good for Kich, for apologising to Belle, even though standing at her window ledge does seem abit stalker-ish. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yummy stripes. Apparently all the Inutaoshi and Izayoi women thought so too. Cain came to the tournament! Yay! Great chapter. I loved the part where Belle's youkai told her that she was fangirling. That was awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: fehBEH On: June 18, 2005 17:05 CDT
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I love your fanfics soo much! I do hope you will continue writing that new Inu/Kag piece. I know this is a Gin/Cain and Kichiro/Belle fic but would you add more Ryomaru/Nezumi and Inuyasha/Kagome scenes? It's always funny when they're there. && You might have mentioned it already, but do you have a site to where you have pictures for your fanfics?
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