| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: yashafan18 On: June 27, 2005 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapters and i know how you fell so take as much time off of posting as you want i'm so sorry i hope everything will get better for everyone.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(yeah i'm being lazy) On: June 27, 2005 20:31 CDT
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oh no that's so sad. tell your friend i'm sorry for her lose. man, this chapter was great but i feel bad for your friend. well update when you can but don't forget your frined, not that you would. i'm sad now. but at least i didn't lose someone, your poor friend. i'm going now, bye, Zirra
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so sorry about the loss in your family, I know to well how that feels. My prayers go out to you and yours. All of us that know and love your work will be here awaitng your return. God Bless.
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 19:13 CDT
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Thoughts anr prayers with you and your family. *hugs* Great chapter by the way. *more hugs*
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Title: Not a review
Reviewed By: IKMS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 18:19 CDT
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My prayers are with you and yours. Come back when you are able. We'll still be here. Sympathies to your family,
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Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 27, 2005 18:02 CDT
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Oh Sue, I'm so sorry to hear about your family's loss. If there's anything I can do to help, please let me know. I send lots of virtual hugs to you, although I know they don't help a whole lot. You and your family are definitely in my thoughts and prayers ::hugs:: Sorry I haven't reviewed in the last few weeks, I kinda fell behind. But these last few chapters were awesome! ::blushes:: chapter 32 was so funny! Yeah and I'm a dork, I was blushing through the whole thing :p I just love Gin and the whole 'it'd be like sucking my thumb' thing, that was brilliant! I think it's so cute that Cain was Gin's first kiss too! I love the interaction with Kich and Belle in the last chapters too...they are always so entertaining! Between the nail polish, kool aid, and the truths and dares, there were definitely some great moments! Anyway, take all the time you need Sue, family is so much more important. Take care! ::hugs::
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Reviewed By: darksquire (not logged in) On: June 27, 2005 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRILLIANT!!! Gin asking Cain about oral sex! HAHAHAHAHA!! I lauged so hard I almost cried. Those chapters were so hilious. I am a little surprised though that Cain wasn't a tad bit more flusterd at Gin's interrigation. Well I am excitedly awaiting your next update. ~Darksquire
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Title: IKMS
Reviewed By: IKMS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost peed myself laughing! The whole movie conversation was almost too much! Cain being unable to resist asking what she wanted to know! Thumb sucking - rotflol!!! But seriously - I think it's beautiful the way you have Inuyasha/Kagome and family protecting and sheltering Gin while still allowing her to grow strong of mind, body and character. She may be a little naive but that makes her more lovable since she tries to see the good in others. Other than your Inuyasha and Kagome stories, I think I like Cain and Gin the best of all the couples you've made. Probably cuz Cain reminds me of Inuyasha and Gin reminds me of Kagome. I'll sound dumb if I try to explain and it's probably my imagination anyway! Anywhoo, lovin the story, can't wait to read more. Thanks for all your hard work and it's much appreciated!
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 16:10 CDT
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Sueric. You're family is in our thoughts and prayers. May they be given the strength to endure.
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: June 27, 2005 14:40 CDT
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Oh God. I should realy start reading the chapters including the bottom parts before I review. Danm that realy sucks. So many people have been lost these past few months some taht I know personaly. So many people so many near misses. If its alright may I ask how he died. Was it a drunk driver? Or just an accident? I hope your sister pulls though the ordeal alright. Dont you wish that people could live out ther're lives without incednet of deat. But that is impossible. So has fate decided. I and probaly others will understand why you may not be able to update this week or next week or however long it takes. Family crises's and or acedents realy suck. I know that from experience. I hope wverything goes along okay. I feel sorry about the accident. Goodbye and take Care
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: June 27, 2005 14:37 CDT
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my prayers go out to your family and sister in law. not an easy time. the story is going along great, as always. i was shocked, to say the least, when i saw this second chapter for today. man...what an awkward situation for cain...informative...but awkward. LOL. great use of 'those' types of movies. hehe. keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Glenda On: June 27, 2005 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry to hear about your sister-in-law's boyfriend. I'll admit that your updates are usually the highlight of my working day, so I'll miss them this week, but you should take all the time for your family that you can. I look forward to when you'll update again, as I always enjoy your work. Know that your writing brightens at least one person's day, even if it was bittersweet today.
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Title: Purity 4
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 14:24 CDT
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Ah, Sue, I grieve with thee, it's my personal belief that death is just a door we step through when we move to the next level, but that doesn't help the ones we leave behind. I also believe that part of them stays behind in the memories we have. These help us to heal, and remember the good times that we had together. Hug your sister-in-law when she's ready for it, and allow a little of it to be from me. I've felt her pain. It does get better, it just takes awhile. These were two wonderful chapters. Full of tentative overatures, hesitation, regrets, hope, and conversation that ran deeper than expected. Just wonderful. I'll still be here ready to read and review when you feel like coming back, I promise. Take your own time.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 14:21 CDT
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I'm sorry to hear that, you'll have my prayers.
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: June 27, 2005 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Two uploads in one day. you are da CXoolest. Keep up the great work :)
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