| "Teaching Goku" Reviews/Comments [ 88 ] |
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2010 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...really enjoyed this chapter. And I did NOT see that curveball you threw at the end! I can't wait to see how this turns out.
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Reviewed By: Fall Ace On: August 15, 2010 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's awesome to see that you've updated :) I love this story, so much so that I've followed it for four years. Can't wait to see what happens next chapter. You write this couple so beautifully
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Reviewed By: LadyRedDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2010 01:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice to see you finally updated!! Now I'm seriously dieing to know what's going to happen after this. I hope you update sooner than before, because with an ending like that, you kind of have to for the fans sake.
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Reviewed By: Devil_n_Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2010 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so agree with you and Cupnjava C Sama that reviewing is important and allows for an author to understand if they are doing good or not. It sometimes frustrates me when readers enjoy the fruits of your labors but don't even bother to leave a comment when it barely takes 99.0% less effort than writing an actual story. Meh, that is sort of why I decided to review each chapter because that's probably what I would want someone to do for me. And I give you kudos points for sticking it out so far on this website. People barely review here... sort of the reason I drifted away from it. But loving that you stuck it in there. Omg how scared was Gojyo at Goku suddenly appearing when that other woman came. I was so glad the kappa thought to pull out the monkey in time. I knew he could smell who she was as soon as she was close by and the scene by the alley where Goku and Gojyo were making out was so hot. But awww there is really some issues with this freaking love square thingy going on. I'm starting to really get attach to this pairing and I don't want Gojyo to leave Goku for Hakkai... I mean I love Hakkai I do but he could have approached the kappa just as Gojyo should have so he missed their chance so there... ><
Oh I might use that Cupnjava C Sama quote on my own story or at least profile on Aff.net and ff.net although two different usernames on that but you don't really care and I'm going to stop rambling now. ^^;
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Reviewed By: Devil_n_Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2010 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would haave never been able to capture Gojyo's vunerability the way you do. It makes me want to protect him when he feels that he's worthless and stuff. And sure he's not great relationship material now and is basically a man-whore but he's willing to change for the monkey and that's really what should count >< Aww if I was Goku I wouldn't want him to go out with violent women like that too. And does Gojyo have a death wish or what letting it out in the open like that. I mean it's good not to keep secrets but man... this is Sanzo you are talking about... my god I seriously thought he was going to kill him or give him serious brain damage. Thanks for not making him see that great Buddha in the sky and aww... this is becoming so interesting. What's with the wierd square thingy going on with Hakkai kissing Gojyo out of the blue and stuff. I mean... from what I've read Gojyo sort of has a thing for all three now and Goku has the same for all thre... Hakkai is with Sanzo but likes Gojyo and Sanzo... well he's Sanzo... must read and review more XP
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Reviewed By: Devil_n_Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2010 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, Omg, Omg Goku is my hero. He is always suprising people especially Gojyo in me. It's so cute when he suddenly decided... not requested but decided that Goyjo wouldn't sleep with anyone else. Now he seriously is Goku's bitch. Awww and the old lady sort of creeps me outh. I'd be blushing freaking hard if someone that is old enough to be my nana talks about my sex life... I would have done a freaking U-turn and make up some excuse of making a mistake or forgetting to bring the right amount of money. Plus this village is starting to freak me out a bit but still loving the story.
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Reviewed By: Devil_n_Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2010 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love the interaction between Gojyo and Goku. It get a warm gooey feeling when I see them banter before making pillow talk and awww Gojyo is such a loving teacher and I love, love, love possessive Goku. When he told Gojyo not to sleep with anyone that night I was so like 'awww, you're Goku's bitch now'. I don't know why I thought that but it sounded way much cuter in my head. But I like how Goku shows a possessive side... they'd make a cute couple.
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Reviewed By: Devil_n_Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2010 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Meh, that was so hot. I want squee so loud and Goku is such an avid learner. Gojyo really has her hands full. I didn't realize I reviewed you four times before today... not much considering that you have so many chapters now but... meh... it's a start. I'm on chapter two... well reviewing chapter two so... I reviewed April '05, July '05, June '06, November '08. That seems really sporadiac don't you think? But you really are good and it'd be sad if you quit now v.v
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Reviewed By: Devil_n_Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2010 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been a really long while since I've been on MediaMiner... I think not since 2005... 2004 but I remember this story one day and I had to read it because this story really made me really appreciate a possible Gojyo/Goku pairing. Like I seriously never thought of it... I mean because that's Goku and Gojyo is just a womanizing pervy kappa but this was really good. More than good, it was great. So yeah... my review makes no sense but I wanted to review so I am so... yeah me.
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Reviewed By: rmyl On: November 05, 2009 01:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! whenever i see that it's been updated I get really excited. great chapter, it was really sweet. can't wait for the next one!
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Title: Still Going
Reviewed By: JessiV On: October 27, 2009 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy this fiction even if it is not updated often. I am curious about the Saiten Teisan angle and what is going to happen with Sanzo and Hakkai. I hope the story continues on. It is thoroughly enjoyable! :D
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Reviewed By: Cinnamin On: July 28, 2009 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have no idea why more people don't know about this fic. Gojyo is *ngh* and Goku is *puurrr* and I totally admit to sortof cyber stalking and trying to find if you write anywhere else >,< this search continues!! I've been following this for a while (although first review) and everytime I see a chapter it just makes my day :) Hope you keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: Jaimsx On: May 06, 2009 22:38 CDT
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AWESOME! i check like every other day to see if this fic is updated. i was soooo happy to see that it was. as usual, great writing. i liked the emotions of the chapter. keep it coming please
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Reviewed By: gerigirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've enjoyed reading this story so much and i'm looking forward to your next post of chapter 24. Now all you have to do is up lad it at aff.net. Are they going all do it in the same bed? I get the impression that sanzo wants goku and vice versa hakkai wants goyjo.
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Title: LadyRedDarkness
Reviewed By: LadyRedDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man! You should have seen my face when I got emailed that this story was updated. This totally made my week! I'm about to go back and re-read this fic. Just so you know, I read tons and tons of fanfiction and this story is defiantly one of my favorites.(if I had a top 5, it would defiantly be up there) I love it! This story made me a fan of this pairing (too bad there's not more fics of this pairing). I can't wait for you to update again! I seriously want to know what's going to happen between the four of them. Keep up the excellent work!!!
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Reviewed By: JessiV On: March 14, 2009 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I consistently check on this story to see if it's been updated. I love thie story and plot. The last cliffhanger was true torture. I hope that you install the next chapter soon. I look forward to seeing what happens next,
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 12:12 CST
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Reviewed By: Rmyl On: December 30, 2008 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic in incredible. it's been so long since i've read a good one, and this is the best. great scenes, great characterization, really beautiful. the end here is killing me (in a good way)! please write another chapter, and fast! I love it, great work.
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