| "Teaching Goku" Reviews/Comments [ 88 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fuzzubunnytoo On: April 20, 2006 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have missed you so much since AFF went into hideing anad I found you and am so happy. Your so good and your story is so hot. I love it.
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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: April 20, 2006 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect as always!! Can I be cheeky and ask about Bits and Pieces - coz that's just as good as this!
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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: April 18, 2006 05:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter! They're always worth waiting for.
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Reviewed By: bahnona On: April 03, 2006 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated! I've been thinking all month, "But it's March! Where's this month's update?" Now it's April, so again, I say, "Where's this month's update?" But then I also want you to update your parallel Sanzo/Hakkai fic too! I guess I'll have to take what I can get. Everytime the withdrawal gets too bad, I just re-read from the beginning again! BTW, I really liked that Sanzo acknowledged to Gojyo that Gojyo is making Goku happy. We need to get Gojyo's self-image up there where it belongs! Thanks, and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Sokasato On: March 31, 2006 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's the best GokuxGojyo fanfic I've ever read and really well written. It's one of those stories you can't wait for to be updated!
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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: February 12, 2006 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every chapter you find another way to turn my insides into mush! Thank you!!
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Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good grief, what more can I say besides I really really like this? Haha I knew Gojyo couldn't hold himself back any longer. The garden scene was perfect. Though the part i really liked was with Sanzo and how he could tell what was happening at the end. I had no idea he and Goku had that sort of mind connection. XD That actually makes things more interesting.lol That's how Sanzo knows stuff. lol Ah ah but this was just really cool. I can't wait for the next chapter. ^^
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Title: teaching goku
Reviewed By: hatochan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've been following this story since the first chapter ( sorry i haven't reviewed. even over the internet i'm shy)and i have really enjoyed it. i think you have a done an excellent job of making an unusual pairing work. rather beautifully done, actually. your style is articulate and mature, characteristics that i don't find often enough in fanfics, and your imagery is incredible. i was already in love with the characters of saiyuki, but you made me fall even harder with the warmth and affection and outright ' rightness' of their words and mannerisms. as for keeping or breaking up... i'd hate to see gojyo and goku separated so soon; they have a good thing going. but everyone really started out with substitutes. they share affections ( even sanzo and hakkai, i dare say) but they are only together because they think they can't have the ones they want. so, that is my opinion. but the fact is, you could have them riding off on unicorns in a skittles rainbow and i would still love it, because you are simply an excellent writer. thank you for the read! i look forward to more! ( no pressure, i understand how it is)
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Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD Oh man Sanz kills me. He was like "Go to sleep Gojyo." -snickers- I could hear that in such a threatening tone.lol Saa but this was as touching as ever. Everytime I read a new chapter, I'm drawn into the torrent of feelings between the two and I feel vunerable to every action. Gojyo's love is palpable and Goku's pure sincerity and trust...I just know it. You write the emotions so well as well as Gojyo's inadequacy....I have to applaud you. My favorite scene? When Goku was tossing and turning and Hakkai told him to go to Gojyo,a nd then how Gojyo and Goku just fit so snugly together. That scene was just...awesome. My second fave was the bath scene though. X3 Loved it!
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Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story had me captivated from beginning to end (not story, chapter lol). The lust is just...it's there! Oh man and the sounds in my mind from how Gojyo described either Hakkai's or Sanzo's moans (he couldn't tell) just heightened the story. Ah~ and when Gojyo found Goku's sweet spot. -happy sigh- you just make me very very happy. Can't wait tillt he next chappy. ^^
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just realized that I've never reviewed this. I love this fic. I normally prefer the pairings to be swapped, but this is *good*. I love the tension that you keep cranking up. Definately one of the most well written and original Saiyuki stories on the 'Net. I would love to see Sanzo and Gojyo fight over Goku.
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Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I missed your updates, but I see them now and I am mightily pleased. -pleasant sigh- These two chapters were beyond awesome for me.Seriously, I can just see the emotions playing across Gojyo's and Goku's faces. You write it so vividly! Especially when you describe Goku's eyes...it's just beautiful. Their love making is anything but quick and cliche. A rare feat indeed. Also when Sanzo said "I wasn't kissing you" that cracked me up so badly. XD I get what he was saying, but at the time I just imagined him as some guy in *serious* denial...with drug problems or something.lol In any case, both chapters were awesome and I look forward to your next one. ^^ (Ah and in response to the chapter before this, yes I posted a Duo x Une gundam wing fic a while back and just recently started a Duo x Zechs fic, so you might've seen my name there ^^; or if you like jrock, then I'm in that community as well.lol)
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Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol indeed, that'd be a game worthy of playing. Once again I loved this chapter. Goyjo...he's the ultimate lover. I love how you made him so tender with Goku,a nd how you make him soften a random points. It's so sweet to watch, and I can really appreciate your writing style. Do more ne. ^^
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i've just started reading the manga and enjoy the characters very much. This story is well written. you really keep them in character. i'm interested in what's going to happen to everyone. there's so many different ways you can take this now thanks to that kiss between Gojyo and Hakkai (i hope i spelled it write). i'll try and wait patiently for the update. ^_^!
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Reviewed By: EriK aka Poe On: July 13, 2005 18:24 CDT
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Damn; that was hot and worth any wait. *chuckle* You are definitely capable of making Goku into lust material, despite any childish personality that he possesses. I will attempt to (patiently) wait for the next chapter. *grin*
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