| "Teaching Goku" Reviews/Comments [ 88 ] |
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Reviewed By: yagi-san On: June 26, 2007 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just rereading the fic and had to tell you just how much I love it. Definitely one of my top 10 favorite fics ever (out of millions and millions no less XD). I love your style and originality. I really don't think I could enjoy other Saiyuki fics as much after this fic because it's just so good. Still, chapters 18 and 19 freaked me out. Totally random! XD I can't wait for more chapters! ^^
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: March 04, 2007 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I took me 3 days to get threw all of your story and it was a most enjoyable 3 days ^-^ Awsome story,c ant wait to see what happends next!
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Reviewed By: bluesnake40 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 02:06 CST
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Hi! I tend to read your fic on adultfanfic but just in case you can't read your reviews, decided to do mine on fanfic .... so glad to see an update on this fic which I have really enjyed reading. This and the previous chapt were a bit werid and OC but quite fun to read and sort of like a break in the whole epic. Hopefully, your muse is back and you're ready to go. Eagerly awaiting for you to write more great chapts.
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Title: chapter 19
Reviewed By: Sokasato On: January 25, 2007 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally an update!! Thank you soooo much!! It was pretty funny that the whole thing was a dream. Poor Gojyo. LOL.
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh, I like this updated chapter 19 better than the first version - it flows better. I am glad all of the pregnancy stuff was just a dream - that really got freaky at the end there when Sanzo and Goku went into the Spring of Maidenhood. It was nice to see that even though Gojyo was freaked out by what was happening, he was still very much the concerned lover. I wonder if part of this dream came from the chapter where the condom broke...? Maybe a little guilt trickled in somehow. But it was a great chapter, and I hope you get over your writer's block soon - I really love this story.
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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: January 24, 2007 07:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated! Thoroughly enjoyable, if a little bizarre. Looking forward to your next update.
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Title: Marvelous!
Reviewed By: GreenTeaWolfGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 06:05 CST
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OMG What did Konzeon do? Thank god you updated! That really made my day. Every other day I check for updates on this fic and I almost couldn't believe it when POOF there was an update! SWOONS! Na, Sankyuu for updating and please do so again soon! PunkWolf
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Title: OMG!OMFG!
Reviewed By: vixypixy_no9(notloggedin) On: January 21, 2007 11:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDDATE! This is the best Saiyuki fic I've ever read and I'm not even into the whole slash Saiyuki thing! *glomps* If you update I'll give you a cookie! Two cookies! A BAZILLION COOKIES! If I could give you a 1000 I would totally do it! *squee* Gojyo and Goku is sooo adowable and that twist to is AWESOME!
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Title: It's Been Sooo Long
Reviewed By: PunkWolf On: January 01, 2007 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this fic the last few chapters and was crazy happy on September 16 when you updated. Now, I'm twitching waiting for the next chapter! It's been SOOOO long. I need more Teaching Goku... wah! I want this story to continue. I need to know what happens... does Goku stay with Gojyo in the end, or does Sanzo make his move? If he does, what does Goku do?! There are so many directions this fic could go and it's killing me to see it standing still!!! This fic is EPIC, man, seriously. And then there's the whole PREGNACY deal! What's gonna happen with that? Will they make it to the stream in time or will there be couple Saiyuki tots running around? If they do make it, will Sanzo and Goku still retain the ability to bear children? The condom better not break again if that happens... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOON! WE'VE BEEN WAITING ALL THIS TIME!!! Kick off the New Year with a new chapter of Teaching Goku!!! PLEASE!!!! PunkWolf39 (livejournal) PunkWolfIncarnate (ffnet)
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Reviewed By: SnappedChopstick On: November 16, 2006 02:26 CST
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... MPREG? Dear lord, I think I just lost my faith/interest in this fic. D: You might want to warn people, dear, if you're putting in mpreg. While some people like it, there are quite a many out there (myself included) that want to induce vomiting the moment someone brings it up.
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Title: Oh My.....
Reviewed By: Devious Lil Devil On: September 24, 2006 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gosh... that was totally unexpected and extremely hilarious at the same time. what the hell are they gonna do with babies at a time like this? if it's actually gonna be a normal child. i mean, sanzo a daddy? you so named this chapter corretly that's for sure. man, the second part of this is gonna be a dozy. anyway, glad to hear that everything is good with you and that you hade fun at A-Kon. your big sister was with you right? hope she took loads of pictures for ya. i had loads of fun at Anime Expo and made some new friends. but damn, there was a hella lot of people there. before going to any major events going on, i would totally leech onto one of friends just to make sure we didn't get seperated. ^__^ talk to ya later, q-chan!
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Title: Ch. 18
Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.....Goku and Sanzo pregnant. Scary thought on both. I liked how Gojyo's handled things so far. He kinds of seems to be "growing up" in a way, though, as he looks after Goku. I can't wait to see what happens as things continue.
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Title: chapter 18
Reviewed By: sokasato On: September 18, 2006 18:12 CDT
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OMG!!! I was totally not expecting that! Sanzo and Goku getting pregnant was hilarious!! I was like this O.O! lol. I just love the GokuxGojyo moments, they're always so sweet. You made my day.
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Title: Ooo...
Reviewed By: Sleep Remedy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Baby? Like, little ball of GojyoxGoku smex baby? Hmm... I do wonder if it's gonna be a butt baby or if Goku will magically grow some breastesses... Either way, I really like this story! Thanks for updating, I hope you do so again, soon! Much love, Sleepy.
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that I was completely surprised by this fic. I never knew a Gojyo/Goku pairing could be this HOT. Usually the idea of Goku with anyone other that Sanzo just rubs me wrong. But I started this on a whim, and this whim was worth it! You have kept the characters, well, in character. What they say and do is completely within the realm of possibility. Very hot, very sexy, and I do hope to see an update soon - I want to see what Gojyo's reaction to Goku's parting words in chapter 17 are!
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